Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted March 8, 2005 Updated March 8, 2005 Status Incomplete | Telling Amber how much I love her.
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
5 Ways To "I Love You"
If you were the moon
and I were the sun,
we'd be an eclipse
-- together as one.
Words can't explain
how I feel about you
so I'll just say "I Love You",
and hope you love me, too.
you are my life, my blood
the only one for me.
Without you in my life
where would I be?
when you are not around
It's never the same
there is no love, no joy
just heartbreaking pain.
So if we're close together
or far apart, I'll never forget
how you touched my heart.
If you were the moon
and I were the sun,
we'd be an eclipse
-- together as one.
Words can't explain
how I feel about you
so I'll just say "I Love You",
and hope you love me, too.
you are my life, my blood
the only one for me.
Without you in my life
where would I be?
when you are not around
It's never the same
there is no love, no joy
just heartbreaking pain.
So if we're close together
or far apart, I'll never forget
how you touched my heart.
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i_luv_kyo on August 26, 2005, 1:23:31 AM
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that's really something.....I wish you the best of luck with Amber!! And the poem is beautiful!!silverstar on August 25, 2005, 2:33:29 AM
silverstar on
T____T So beautiful............Reminds me of my relationship with my ex. T___T Great job on the rhyming! ^-^
BabyDemound12 on June 28, 2005, 12:42:25 AM
he's right i hope amber knows how much you really love her. if she doesn't you should remind her with one of your poemsBabyDemound12 on June 28, 2005, 12:42:15 AM
he's right i hope amber knows how much you really love her. if she doesn't you should remind her with one of your poemsBabyDemound12 on June 28, 2005, 12:42:10 AM
he's right i hope amber knows how much you really love her. if she doesn't you should remind her with one of your poemsdragons_healing_blood on May 10, 2005, 7:16:08 AM
I really love this poem. I hope Amber doesn't reject you. I can't beleive no one before me commented, thas poem really deserves more comments.