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Chapter 1 - Even in death

I wrte this listening to Evanescence 'Even in death'.It's VERY sad.

Chapter 1 - Even in death

Chapter 1 - Even in death
I failed.....

I failed and now he's coming after me.....

Why didn't it work?Why?

Everything was perfect.....

I could have brought you back but I failed......

I stare at you until my dad bursts in.He gasps at what I had done.I don't care.He was always telling me to study real science.I did.Look what happened.Your still dead and my heart stays unrepaired.

"Son what do you think your doing!You....Your crazy!"He shouts in shock.

"Yeah.I think I am if I tryed to bring him back"I say miserabley.

Dad walks to me and hugs me starring at you......

My one and only love.......

The only one who ever loved me back......

I loved you but I couldn't bring you back.

I failed....

But I still keep you in my heart.....

I still keep your words in my heart.....

Your vision will never leave my mind.....

I will never forget you.....

Tears fall from my eyes as I take one last look at you before standing up and leaving with Dad.

"I love you,Zim......"

Then I hear somthing I never thought I would hear.

"I love you,too,Dib-human"It whispears.

I turn but no one id there.Why should there be?Maybe I am going crazy.

But even in death.....

My love goes on.....

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SomekindofFreak on May 4, 2006, 9:28:24 AM

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SomekindofFreakaww..thats so sad, but cute! It makes me wonder wut exactly happened...*favs*