Chapter 1 - Poems of the Raven
Submitted March 29, 2005 Updated March 29, 2005 Status Incomplete | This is how Raven is feeling after 'Birthmark' (Rae&BB peom inspired me)
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Chapter 1 - Poems of the Raven
Chapter 1 - Poems of the Raven
i based it like raven after birthmark...
I told someone a secret I never should,
I lie on my bed,
Feeling so misunderstood,
I said something i shouldnt of said,
This is why im crying,
I just feel like dieing,
I will soon be distroying us all,
when i was little i saw something i shouldnt of saw,
The people i know,
I shouldnt of showed,
They will soon be dead,
And that is what i said,
I slit my wrist,
I wont even be missed,
Blood spilling on my bed,
I hope im soon dead,
I try to stop it,
But i cant control my wit,
i throw the knife,
To stop me from ending my life,
I cry and cry,
why do i try to die,
I deal with my pain,
Some people think ive gone insane,
I wrap my wrist with a part of my cloak,
to give the blood something to soak,
I walk out of my room,
Tring to not show my wound,
People stop me,
But i do ont let them see,
darkness all around,
Not even a sound,
I wake to see a person,
I sit up cursin,
i am welcomed back with a hug,
I wonder about the grave i dug,
Everything is back to as it should be,
But now Everyone cares baout me,
No one cares what i said,
they just dont want me dead.
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(Raven is in her room, again after birthmark)
I sit in the dark,
Looking at the mark,
Carved in my hand,
Made by a cruel man,
I think about what is to come,
How could i be so dumb,
Telling people about my past,
Knowing trust would never last,
I start to cry,
I just want to die,
Ive tried before,
I told them i wouldnt do that anymore,
I walk out the door,
i must do a chore,
Stay with my friends,
Till this world comes to an end
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in a mist...of shadows,
in a land of smoke,
the people of the shadows pulling at my cloak,
i push them away,
but all they say is nae,
there like my emotions,
causing so much comotion,
one a curse of my dad,
oh it just makes me so mad,
my father gave me anger,
he killed my mother with a dagger,
it makes me so mad,
but also so very sad,
but im just glad,
hes dead,
from what he said,
I told someone a secret I never should,
I lie on my bed,
Feeling so misunderstood,
I said something i shouldnt of said,
This is why im crying,
I just feel like dieing,
I will soon be distroying us all,
when i was little i saw something i shouldnt of saw,
The people i know,
I shouldnt of showed,
They will soon be dead,
And that is what i said,
I slit my wrist,
I wont even be missed,
Blood spilling on my bed,
I hope im soon dead,
I try to stop it,
But i cant control my wit,
i throw the knife,
To stop me from ending my life,
I cry and cry,
why do i try to die,
I deal with my pain,
Some people think ive gone insane,
I wrap my wrist with a part of my cloak,
to give the blood something to soak,
I walk out of my room,
Tring to not show my wound,
People stop me,
But i do ont let them see,
darkness all around,
Not even a sound,
I wake to see a person,
I sit up cursin,
i am welcomed back with a hug,
I wonder about the grave i dug,
Everything is back to as it should be,
But now Everyone cares baout me,
No one cares what i said,
they just dont want me dead.
------------------------------------------------------------------
(Raven is in her room, again after birthmark)
I sit in the dark,
Looking at the mark,
Carved in my hand,
Made by a cruel man,
I think about what is to come,
How could i be so dumb,
Telling people about my past,
Knowing trust would never last,
I start to cry,
I just want to die,
Ive tried before,
I told them i wouldnt do that anymore,
I walk out the door,
i must do a chore,
Stay with my friends,
Till this world comes to an end
-------------------------------------------
in a mist...of shadows,
in a land of smoke,
the people of the shadows pulling at my cloak,
i push them away,
but all they say is nae,
there like my emotions,
causing so much comotion,
one a curse of my dad,
oh it just makes me so mad,
my father gave me anger,
he killed my mother with a dagger,
it makes me so mad,
but also so very sad,
but im just glad,
hes dead,
from what he said,
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LightShadeRaven on March 3, 2006, 6:01:34 AM
Thats very good.^^
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I saw that episode, and I must say, you wrote a very nice poem from it. It's so dark, something I'm sure even Raven herself could appreciate. Keep up the good work!
P.S. Check out my section....I have a decent TT lemon in there you might want to read about Starfire and Robin. Sometime in the near future I'll do one with Robin and Raven, and I'll let you know when that's done.
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P.S. Check out my section....I have a decent TT lemon in there you might want to read about Starfire and Robin. Sometime in the near future I'll do one with Robin and Raven, and I'll let you know when that's done.
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Raven_the_Dark on June 14, 2005, 10:17:25 AM
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