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Chapter 4 - Umm Chapter 4?

A new girl comes, Kiwi. When Ryou tries to make the Mew Mews stronger, he makes a huge mistake! What is this mistake? And why is a new Mew Mew appearing?

Chapter 4 - Umm Chapter 4?

Chapter 4 - Umm Chapter 4?

Mew Karina: Hi!  Now, I have changed my beginning and endingof stories to be like this!
Sailor Silver Sky:  [/b]Yes, and she is also being called MewKarina!  Although I’m still here!  So basically, there are two of us!
Lita[/b] [/b]Kino[/b]:  [/b]Make that 3!
Emilia[/b]:  [/b]Or how about 4!
Natalie[/b], [/b]Sam[/b], [/b]Lauren[/b], Rika, and Mikaela:  [/b]And don’t forget us!  We pop up from time to time as authoresses helpers!
Drew[/b] [/b]Carey[/b]:  [/b]And most of the timein the author’s notes, we’re in the middle of playing a recreational game ofWhose Line Is It Anyway!  With MewKarina, Sailor Silver Sky, and Lita Kino as our regulars, andthe rest as 4th seaters!

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'thoughts', [actions], (authors notes)

Ryou: Ok,we've figured it out. Candy, if there's a fightand we really need you, one of us will notify you. (noidea how, I'm thinking COMMUNICATORS! Video ones, thatare made to look like compacts! Ok, I've read WAY too much Sailor Moon, haven'tI?)
Candy: Got it!
Ryou: Now that we got that done, let's go get some ice cream!
Everyone else: Yay!
All: [go get ice cream]

Later…

Randomcustomer: Um, Miss?
Ichigo: Yes?
Random customer: There's a weird guy standing next to that window over there.He's staring at us.
Ichigo: [looks over at window] 'Dang, Kish is here!' [runs over and gets the other Mew Mews] Guys, Kish is outside! Let's go!
Mew Mews: [Go outside]
Kish: [runs]
Mew Mews: [follow]
Kish: [runs more]
Mew Mews: [follow more]
Kish: [finally stops in a park] This will be theend of you! [kirema animascome crashing through]
Ichigo: Mew Mew Strawberry Metamorphosis!
Mint: Mew Mew Mint Metamorphosis!
Other Mew Mews: [transform] (I'm too lazy to write it all out)
Ichigo: Ribbon Strawberry Check!
Mint: Ribbon Mint Echo!
Lettuce: Ribbon Lettuce Flash!
Pudding: Pudding Ring Inferno!
Zakuro: Ribbon Zakuro Pure!
Kiwi: Ribbon Kiwi Shock!
Candy: Ribbon Candy Encircle! [attacks kill one kirema anima]
Other kirema anima: [go terrorize Tokyo]
Ichigo: Let's split up! Mint, Lettuce, and I will be together, and Pudding,Zakuro, Kiwi, and Candy will be together!Let's go!

With Mint, Lettuce, and Ichigo…

Ichigo: [runsafter a kirema anima] Ribbon Strawberry Check!
Mint: [also runs after a kirema anima] Ribbon MintEcho!
Lettuce: [follows Mint and Ichigo] Ribbon Lettuce Flash! [kirema anima is defeated]

With Pudding, Zakuro, Kiwi, and Candy…

Zakuro: [runsafter 2 kirema animas] Ribbon Zakuro Pure!
Pudding: [also runs after the 2 kirema animas]Pudding Ring Inferno!
Kiwi: [follows Pudding and Zakuro] Ribbon Kiwi Shock!
Candy: [is on Kiwi's back] Ribbon Candy Encircle! [attacks kill one kirema anima]
Ichigo, Mint, and Lettuce: [run up]
Ichigo: We thought you might want some help! Ribbon Strawberry Check! [attack kills the other kiremaanima]
Mint: [sees Kish running off] RibbonMint Echo! [attack misses Kish]

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Bloopers:

Director:Seeing Kish, take one!

Randomcustomer: Um, Miss?
Ichigo: Yes?
Random customer: There's a weird guy standing next to that window over there.He's staring at us.
Ichigo: [looks over at window and bursts out into laughter] Kish... [camera focuses on Kish. The window hasmarker marks making it look like Kish has glasses, amustache, and a beard]
Kish: PUDDING!!!
Pudding: Yes, Kish?
Kish: I'm gonna get you!
Pudding: You can't catch me! [runs off, Kish on her tail]

Director:Attacking Kish, take one!

Mint: [sees Kish running off] RibbonMint Echo! [attack hits Kish, right in hisstomach]
Kish: X.X
Mint: Oops.

Director:Attacking Kish, take two!

Mint: [sees Kish running off] Kish's running away!
Ichigo: Mint, you're supposed to attack him!

Director:[sighs] Attacking Kish, take three!

Mint: [islooking at the clouds] Ooh, look! That one looks like a pirate ship!
Zakuro: MINT! Pay attention!

Director:Attacking Kish, take four! [silence] Umm, hello? We'reshooting!

Mint: [looksup from playing cards with Kagome, Raye, Sango, Ichigo, and Zakuro] Oh, we'restarting? Kagome, Raye, Sango, sorry, but we need to film this. Ichigo, Zakuro,come on!

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SailorSilver Sky: Ok, that's the end of that chapter! Tell me if the bloopersaren't funny.
Drew Carey: Does the word HOEDOWNring a bell?  Get started!

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Tiger-Prime on April 27, 2006, 3:18:21 PM

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Tiger-PrimeI really love this story

Kiwi & Candy are awesome charectors

Also Kiwi is a name of a fruit & a flightless bird from where I live, New Zealand

I can't wait for more

Berylo on March 12, 2006, 11:32:07 AM

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BeryloSuch a wonderful story! I totally thought the bloopers were funny! Your so creative! Kiwi and Candy are so cool!