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Chapter 4 - The unforgettable night

its Kh based with twists and turns ^^ please comment on it

Chapter 4 - The unforgettable night

Chapter 4 - The unforgettable night
As Riku pulled her towel off she looked up into his eyes and saw something she never saw before. She saw want, need for her, she felt something that she had never felt before until now. When Riku took off her towel to show her tone body he felt down it she lost in his eyes kissed him passionately and nipped on his neck. He noticed her nipping on his neck and let her cause he was more focused on her amazing tone body and how he wanted her m ore and more. Maria so happy started to sing and she moved to where she was on top of him then she when to her dresser and grad her bikini and walked out and said "you coming Riku." she said as she got dressed and walk to the beach. When Riku got there he saw her dancing in the water and all he did was stare at her and when he saw her look at him he turned away and blushed. "hey Riku come on in." she said

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sakura3001 on May 15, 2007, 6:19:55 AM

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sakura3001Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

moog1895 on May 11, 2007, 9:06:26 AM

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moog1895Omygoodness. Aaron needs to be in this one. Still cute.

PunkWolfGirl on May 11, 2007, 2:02:37 AM

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PunkWolfGirl:O! This Is Very interesting :D Good Job! Update It Soon I Want Chapter Six Written xDDD