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Chapter 1 - Ending, In The Same Tonight

This poem seems like a reality check in fary tales. I like this one, but not as much as sum other poems I've composed. Please Coment!!!

Chapter 1 - Ending, In The Same Tonight

Chapter 1 - Ending, In The Same Tonight
Ending

I knew it wasn't right,
In the ending there was a fight.
My life was written in this book,
It's not worth defending.
And it didn't even have a happy ending.
I knew it wasn’t right,
That in the end,
He, my love, would die that night.
I knew it wasn’t right,
That when we were in peace
For that, all the people lost there sight.
Did you?
I guess that when the time is right,
In the world,
They will spread some light.
Do you even know
What ever happened to
“Happily Ever After”?
We lost those words,
When the world banned laughter.
In the ending there was a fight,
He, my love, would die that night,
And
That night was when all the people lost there sight.
Do you care?
Know that life has there ups and downs,
Know that a friend will cheer you up when you wear a frown.
Make sure you live for what really matters,
‘Cuz if you don’t, your life will shatter.
Love that person that makes you smile,
Love that person that makes you worth that extra mile.
And don’t ever feel like you’re not worth something,
Because everyone’s worth more than nothing.
I share these words of reality,
Because without them, we lose personality.



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lostinlove2222 on January 27, 2007, 12:32:13 AM

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lostinlove2222thats cool... i loved it.

SasukesChick on January 28, 2007, 9:39:40 AM

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SasukesChicko, thank u