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Chapter 1 - Untitled

This is a poem about my late dog that I wrote for school. I cried so hard when I wrote it. Hope you enjoy!

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled




Hugs of a Loved One



She looked up at me, and I bent down.

As we embraced, I stroked her fur.

It was warm, black felt against my fingers,

Comforting my soul.



I moved and her red, coarse collar collided with my cheek,

She moved and her moist nose nuzzled my face.

I looked into her eyes.

They were like stars with their golden glow.

My mind would not let those eyes go.



Slurp-slop went her tongue as it slid across my face.

I giggled and she wagged her tail.

We shared such joy in our first hug.



With time she grew and so did I,

Our hugs grew less and less.

I became a worker bee over time.

She looked at me with wanting eyes,

But I was too busy to note them.



She got feeble,

Forgot who I was,

And I felt pity for her.



The day then came to put her down,

And as we drove into town

I knew her end was near.



I hugged her before she took that shot,

She looked at me, confused.

I told her to say hello to her relatives in heaven for me,

And with that I had to leave.



When I came back the dog I knew was gone,

All that was left was the shell of her spirit.

I sat in the truck as we drove down the dirt road,

Tears pouring down my face.

I thought back to when it all began,

And then I longed for that first embrace.


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FrozenPirate on March 7, 2005, 8:54:37 AM

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FrozenPirateawwwwwwww... *hugs* I feel bad*sniff* You should publish. *sniff* I dont play with my dogs much and I never thot about it like this until I read. I thank you.

FrozenPirate on March 6, 2005, 7:56:15 AM

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FrozenPirateYou actually made me cry! that was a great poem and thanks for commenting on me.

roxy on February 28, 2005, 9:54:41 AM

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roxyawwww thats sad i would feel that way too if my cat savanah died i love her so much

Lucretia_Nicole on February 27, 2005, 5:46:04 PM

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Lucretia_Nicolethis is soooo beautiful,you have a great talent for writing!

HazelMoon on February 27, 2005, 10:41:01 AM

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HazelMoonno wonder u cried! thatd make anyone with a heart want to cry! *whines and walks over to MoonSong* poor soul... id never want to be put down by a vet...

beastboy4ever on February 27, 2005, 10:01:58 AM

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beastboy4everthat made me cry so much awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. im so sorry that happened to u. i have 2 doggs and one of them is very old so he will die soon its very sad losing i loved one. *hugs u*