Chapter 1 - A kitsune's Eyes
Submitted February 22, 2004 Updated February 22, 2004 Status Incomplete | a short poem about Youko Kurama.
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Chapter 1 - A kitsune's Eyes
Chapter 1 - A kitsune's Eyes
What you see in a kitsune's eyes,
You'll never know the truth behind.
What lies in such depth,Such beauty,
May not be what it seems.
Curves and twists
Burn in him,
Some worse than the one before.
It almost makes you wonder What good he passed,
As well as the pain he's endured.
Such pain,
Such sorrow,
All in one small look in his eye.
Do you feel it?
Have you seen it?
Have you ever touched such pain before?
Have you really been there, done that ningen?
Tell me.
-Silver_fox_thief
You'll never know the truth behind.
What lies in such depth,Such beauty,
May not be what it seems.
Curves and twists
Burn in him,
Some worse than the one before.
It almost makes you wonder What good he passed,
As well as the pain he's endured.
Such pain,
Such sorrow,
All in one small look in his eye.
Do you feel it?
Have you seen it?
Have you ever touched such pain before?
Have you really been there, done that ningen?
Tell me.
-Silver_fox_thief
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Dark_Angel_Wings on February 24, 2005, 6:35:07 AM
*tilts head to the side* That was.... very good! ^_^ *hugs gently* Keep it up. Oh and uhhh.... stop describing my eyes ok?Silver_Fox_theif on July 6, 2004, 2:24:58 PM
*coughs from hug* yes it's normal for you to not like your work, but others do. Tinyclownbean1 on July 6, 2004, 8:12:11 AM
Wow!! I love poetry...I can write fairly good so people tell me. I dont really like my work but everyone else seems too. Is that normal??? Ne ways Love it...very original and sad...too much pain. *Hugs*Zeke_hieis_girl on February 23, 2004, 12:56:58 PM
that was really good i wish my poems rhymed geez it is so hard to write a poem that works and sounds good i love the way you put all his pain in these beautiful words although i just wanted you to know i am not a ningen but that statement at the end might stand true to others. well i was wondering if you could take a look at my poems and tell me what you think? if you could i would be most greatful ^__^