Chapter 1 - hurt? (uh....wots this title for?)
Submitted October 21, 2004 Updated October 21, 2004 Status Incomplete | severely depresing, well i thought so wen i wrote it. sabout cruelty to animals...I'm very passionate about that...nobody laugh! ish not funny! :(
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Chapter 1 - hurt? (uh....wots this title for?)
Chapter 1 - hurt? (uh....wots this title for?)
I asked for water and all I got was dust
I asked for food and all i got was blood
I asked for love and all you gave me was pain
I whimpered for sympathy but all you did was laugh
I am only a puppy and I just wanted to play
that nip on the hand was just s silly game
but you kicked me for it.
you left me windered and cowering at your feed
my head bruised, my legs bleeding
my heart but an acing pile of cold grey ashes
ready to be lifted to teh wind and scattered about myself
why do you dispise me so?
Didn't you know you hurt me?
I was torn apart by your pitiless cruelty
but you didn't care
that was it, you didn't care.
I asked for food and all i got was blood
I asked for love and all you gave me was pain
I whimpered for sympathy but all you did was laugh
I am only a puppy and I just wanted to play
that nip on the hand was just s silly game
but you kicked me for it.
you left me windered and cowering at your feed
my head bruised, my legs bleeding
my heart but an acing pile of cold grey ashes
ready to be lifted to teh wind and scattered about myself
why do you dispise me so?
Didn't you know you hurt me?
I was torn apart by your pitiless cruelty
but you didn't care
that was it, you didn't care.
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Spaz_Wolf on February 13, 2005, 5:19:46 AM
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thanxLanfear on February 12, 2005, 3:46:05 PM
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It's amazing poem. You are absolutely right! draga on October 26, 2004, 6:44:07 AM
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i know what you mean! *crys*Spaz_Wolf on October 21, 2004, 5:38:39 PM
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tahnkyou very much! i think its just so sad wot happens to animals!Vampire-Queen-Gothika on October 21, 2004, 6:27:48 AM
...oh my god...that's so sad...but true...animal abusers suck...they should get hit and see what it feels like... And damn you draga for getting the first comment! *I'm not being mean to her, she's my best friend in reality...*You make a very true point! Good job!
draga on October 21, 2004, 12:23:03 AM
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OMG! that's so sad. but the really sad thing is that it's true! i depise animal abusers! they are pure evil!good poem. tis a very good way to express how you feel about these things.