Chapter 4 - Camp Meating
Submitted October 29, 2003 Updated November 4, 2003 Status Incomplete | A group of completly diffrent kids meet in a summer camp called CAMP LANDIE.
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Chapter 4 - Camp Meating
Chapter 4 - Camp Meating
"KNCOK KNOCK" said Joe. "Camp meating at the main Cabin"
"Ok" said Rex.
"Bye now" said Joe as he left to go tell the other campers.
"Lets go" said Rex.
I wonder what there is going to be at the meating. thought Tom.
"Hello and welcom to CAMP LANDIE" said a Women on the stage of the main cabin.
"Who is that?" asked Tom.
"She is the camp owner, Mrs.Randall" said Rex.
"Oh" said Tom
"NOW TO WELCOM A NEW SUMMER AT CAMP LANDIE, MY SON'S ROCK AND ROLL BAND RANDALL'S HOUSE" said Mrs.Randall.
The band was very good. Once the band was done, Mrs.Randalls Son came of stage and sat next to Tom were there was an open seat.
"Youre band was really good" said Tom to Mrs. Randells son.
"Thanks dude, My name is Dexter" he said.
"So Mrs.Randall in youre Mom?" asked Tom
"Well kind of, Im adopted" said Dexter.
"Oh, ok" said Tom.
"Ok" said Rex.
"Bye now" said Joe as he left to go tell the other campers.
"Lets go" said Rex.
I wonder what there is going to be at the meating. thought Tom.
"Hello and welcom to CAMP LANDIE" said a Women on the stage of the main cabin.
"Who is that?" asked Tom.
"She is the camp owner, Mrs.Randall" said Rex.
"Oh" said Tom
"NOW TO WELCOM A NEW SUMMER AT CAMP LANDIE, MY SON'S ROCK AND ROLL BAND RANDALL'S HOUSE" said Mrs.Randall.
The band was very good. Once the band was done, Mrs.Randalls Son came of stage and sat next to Tom were there was an open seat.
"Youre band was really good" said Tom to Mrs. Randells son.
"Thanks dude, My name is Dexter" he said.
"So Mrs.Randall in youre Mom?" asked Tom
"Well kind of, Im adopted" said Dexter.
"Oh, ok" said Tom.
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WolfsAllure on April 17, 2005, 11:35:37 AM
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Enjoying it so far as well, but when you capitlize a whole word it really annoys most people. Instead of capitlaqzing a word and adding more letters, a simple exclamation point gives the same effect. Im in no way trying to insult your story, it's very good. It's just kind of hard to read a story when a bunch of letters are capitalized in a row. Keep up the writing, look forward to more.Liger_Kid_12 on January 4, 2004, 2:13:43 PM
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MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! I wants to see Yaoi!!!! PLEASE WRIT MORE OF THE STORY!!!Azana on November 27, 2003, 10:22:40 PM
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you're making things go too fast, but it's still a good storyRiRiana on November 5, 2003, 4:30:11 AM
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continue! These are short but I wanna see what happens!