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Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled
I made a promise to myself that when i got you back

i was going to show you what i was made of

but all you did was take up some of my love

now the voice in my head is telling me to leave

to leave this place

my life is just one big race

a race to see who can hurt me the most

but now ill haunt you when i leave

ill haunt you like a ghost

here we are

stareing into the stars

the stars are just my tears

the tears you made

now i cant move im to afraid

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RiversBlood on August 7, 2005, 4:40:02 AM

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RiversBloodHmmm. Well, its free verse, but once again paragraph form=NO! Not to mention that isn't really a scheme, its more like a diary entry.

kaieshakai on November 15, 2004, 8:27:35 AM

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kaieshakaiaww that's so sad that you feel that way but good peom

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xSlipknotMunkEEx on September 25, 2004, 7:30:53 AM

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xSlipknotMunkEEx on September 25, 2004, 7:30:09 AM

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