Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted September 15, 2004 Updated September 15, 2004 Status Incomplete |
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
I made a promise to myself that when i got you back
i was going to show you what i was made of
but all you did was take up some of my love
now the voice in my head is telling me to leave
to leave this place
my life is just one big race
a race to see who can hurt me the most
but now ill haunt you when i leave
ill haunt you like a ghost
here we are
stareing into the stars
the stars are just my tears
the tears you made
now i cant move im to afraid
i was going to show you what i was made of
but all you did was take up some of my love
now the voice in my head is telling me to leave
to leave this place
my life is just one big race
a race to see who can hurt me the most
but now ill haunt you when i leave
ill haunt you like a ghost
here we are
stareing into the stars
the stars are just my tears
the tears you made
now i cant move im to afraid
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RiversBlood on August 7, 2005, 4:40:02 AM
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Hmmm. Well, its free verse, but once again paragraph form=NO! Not to mention that isn't really a scheme, its more like a diary entry.
kaieshakai on November 15, 2004, 8:27:35 AM
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