Chapter 1 - new friends
Submitted July 13, 2006 Updated September 1, 2006 Status Incomplete | my first story for naruto so go easy on me well any way this is a story how 5 siblings that are possened be a type of metal come from anthour world and the conter part comes in later and the olderest of the 5 people some how nows GAARA (and she act like h
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Chapter 1 - new friends
Chapter 1 - new friends
naruto was on a mission to find a very powerful chakra source it might be orochomaru but then he saw a horrible site four people 2 boy''s and 2 girl''s where laying on the floor of the forest but another girl with red hair caring them, there was blood every were she simed sad but then she looked at the tree where he was sitting "you now hiding won''t work I can sense you miles away" she said naruto was scared she looked series and then naruto jump from the tree. the girl tried to get up but feel her left arm seemed to hurt her "are you ok? what happen to you and this people? and why is there a huge source of chakra here?" ask naruto "none of your bissuse , I’m fine and what''s chakra oh never mind help me up and get my siblings to safety". naruto didn''t know any one that did not know what chakra was but helped her to the village of leaf.
30 minute later
in the hospital the red head was up looking at her brothers and sisters in deep thought. any one that came in ever got a death gleans/yelled or attacked but when naruto came in the room she just looked at him and looked out the window. "T Thanks’ for helping me get here" she said "no problem but it’s no good attacking people you now they look like they need help badly"(pointing at her siblings)."oh and i forgot to intrigues myself I’m uzumaki naruto" yelled a happy naruto. She smiled "I’m known as 4-tails or foxy or kima" she said naruto looked confused "why 3 names" "when i was 8 4-tails was my code name, foxy is what my uncle and friend called me and kima because that’s what my mum calls me that but you can call me foxy" said foxy (I’ll call her that fro the whole story) then she grade her arm as if in pain "a. are you ok?" ask naruto "WHAT DO YOU THINK" foxy yelled then remembering something and gave him a scroll "give this to the person that is in charge of this village and you have to read it, it’s a warning and intrusion list when I get mad and the over’s" said foxy naruto nodded and walked away. he opened it up and it stretched right across the room the first thing he thought was ''home work''
at tsunade office: "what do you mean intrusion list?" ask tsume looking at the piece of paper in front of her reading it "I don''t now but she only trust me near her and her siblings ill try bring her out of the hospital she can leave but she won''t" said naruto a little concerned little did he now was has foxy what behind him "ow and she did tell me her name it was a fo-fox something" he continued "foxy you twit" foxy shouting in his ear "THATS IT wait..(turns around) you followed me hear" said naruto every one ''sweat drop'' "i left a clown at the hospital beside''s baka(idiot) I can sense things around me" she finished "wait you can do jitsu but you don''t now chakra" said a even more confused naruto "I’ll from an over world ok, I’m a fire goddess in that world well reincarnation at list and the fire sources and fire gate guardian as well so HOW THE HELL SHOULD I NOW WHAT CHARKRA IS!!!" she shouted
"so that explains why you charkra level is so high do your now anything that would make your siblings sick" said tsunade interrupting them foxy looked down and upset "it’s the only thing that can kill use and we can’t cure it, it''s call sunsion metal touching it or having it inside use can kill use, there got it injected near the heart i got scratched by the metal they’ll die before me.(starts crying)I WHON''T LET THAT HAPPEN THERE MITTE BE A WAY TO CURE IT BUT I JUST CAN''T" foxy then started to break down crying naruto put his hand on her shoulder it’s ok how long do they have" he said "them 3 weeks, me 1 year because it scratched me and I don''t use a heart but a power source instead that’s why it a year for me" trying her hardest not to cry "sorry to hear that...........but in the mean time why not train with the over teams and get to know the village" said tsunade trying to get her to lighten up and it worked foxy and naruto left and went to the training grounds
when they got there each team was training but stopped to look at the new girl "hi naruto who''s your friend" said kiba "hi in foxy or kima my mum calls me kima but call me foxy, or fox for short" said foxy "nice hair color kid so you''ll be joining use of training" out of nowhere kakashi was be hide them and that creped naruto out "ya how the best fighter cus I’m bored and I need to prates a new move" said foxy with a motionless face and that creped naruto out even more foxy just shook her head and walked to a tree and poked it and...............it broke it to millions of pieces that was scary "ok chaos pulse needs to turn to normal" said foxy to herself "sorry guys but I need to send out excess energy" she continued then shot something it to the sky a bright light she poked an over tree this time it didn''t brake "ok anyone want to fight" she said
"I WILL" shout neji getting in to fighting stains foxy just put a hand in the air "fire disc" she shouted and a fire appeared in a disc formed in her hand she throw it at neji but bogged it he attacked her but when he was about to strike she vanished "transformation" she said but there was no sign of her "AH!!!! neji look she’s turned herself in to me!" said what sounded like two naruto’s he looked around to see two naruto’s I now she won’t be able to do this(puts hand to gather) sexy no jitsu" poof the two naruto’s where then well you now two naked girls in a sexy passion and looked alike (could not resist) all the guys had nose bleeds but neji was closest and lost 3/4 of his blood by the nose bleed the girls where horrified "BAKA!!!!!" shouted the girls hitting them both on the head "shoot WARNING 3 ON THE INTRUSION LIST IS DON''T HIT HER ON THE HEAD" shouted one of the naruto after turning back to normal.
well hope you like this story so far.
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