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Chapter 2 - Orochimaru attack and kira's awakening

my first story for naruto so go easy on me well any way this is a story how 5 siblings that are possened be a type of metal come from anthour world and the conter part comes in later and the olderest of the 5 people some how nows GAARA (and she act like h

Chapter 2 - Orochimaru attack and kira's awakening

Chapter 2 - Orochimaru attack and kira's awakening
"RUN FOR IT" shouted naruto but then stoped when foxy was face-to-face him "ah naruto you ever heared of refleshen or simitie there was a mirour there and it refleces you and the reflectun is real until you break it" said foxy "really but why me" he asked "cus well it's one of me hobie annoying every one and i like it but wait......three.....two....one" foxy counted "AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH" someone shouted every one turned to see a girl with pink hair smuvering kakashi "HE IS SO CUTE!!!!!" shouted the girl "baka...kira you do now i said that wial your body is healling you stay in my colons body and that if you abuse the privalige i'll tell every one your secreats" said foxy to kira "ok sis but THIS GUY IS SO CUTE!!!!" she said.

'wasent she in the hospitel but pink hair just like (blushes)sakura-chan' naruto thourt "aren't you in hospite dieing" said naruto confussed "ya but i notest that when i when to talk with me cuven in the spirt world were we are from,my body did not reacted to the possen witch means it only kills when a gods spirt is in a body so my sister kira vollented to see if it was right" said foxy "i see very intesting but coplacated way so your her sister" said kiba looking kira in the eye "princess kira ecidna hedgehog,youngest of the 5 children of queen sonia,17 reincarnashen of goddess,soursess and element gate gardian of earth" she said saluting "your cute" kira finished off witch made kiba blush but foxy hit her on the head "sis to much information and ...do you thing every guy is cute?" said foxy pissed off look "but there all cute but he's the cutest guy i've ever seen"she said hugging kiba witch made him blush more.foxy had a face witch said 'what a idiot'.

after kira's 'hugging' fas every got back to training foxy bet every one there but healed them with sakura and the trained with her but she never even brock a sweat then something made kira and foxy nereves "hay guys do you now any thing that move fast and is 56 feet long" asked kira every one frooze at the question "why?" asked a very neveres sakura foxy stoped and so did kira they both (even with them 3m apart and back to back) closed there eyes "huh" was all foxy said before she opened her eyes and the earth shake then out of no were a giant snake appeared "enamy of your" said foxy with a look on her face witch said 'this is pafetic' or'i wandder why its so big' (wait she's doning A GAARA only she is more emosional) then as you exsped Orochimaru appeared from the top of the snake "so this is the girl i've heared so much about"

"FOXY RUN!!" shouted naruto kira and foxy at the same time said "huh here we go again" Orochimaru looked at sakura 'shes cute if i take her and this one here they will both be my slaves and sasuke will have something to pleased him and the over too be a good well a secret weopen for a soilger' he looked at foxy again but she looked angry "AH SECRET WHAT" yelled kira "you bastered id raver die then have that LIFE AGAIN" foxy shouted fire serounded her and turned in to the fire its self "and leave sakura along" shouted kira "how did you know what i was thinking about" Orochimaru asked kira ran up next to foxy(turned normal) and both poked there heads and said "mind readers" "well thats see how you handle this" with that orochimaru snake lunged at kira and hit her "KIRA!" shouted foxy but as kira fell back orochimaru jumped of the snake and grabed sakura and jump back on the snake "BASTERED!!" foxy was getting angryer and so was naruto.

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