Chapter 1 - THE OUTSIDE
Submitted July 26, 2004 Updated August 25, 2004 Status Incomplete | these are poems i have made from my heart and i would like it if you told me what you thought and please dont steal them i feel this if you want to make a poem make one on your feelings ^__^
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Chapter 1 - THE OUTSIDE
Chapter 1 - THE OUTSIDE
The Outside
When everyone around you just keeps walking by .and your all alone and lonely and they just don’t see you cry. When people sit and look at you with that careless empty stare. You decide to sluff them off but you know that their still there. You act like it doesn’t hurt you. But you know that’s a lie. It may not hurt like people think they just want to see you cry. When you come home and let it out that feeling you’ve held inside. And let that painful tear stream down your face from your reddened eye. You have been to the outside today. But remember what I say. I’ve been there myself but when I’m home it disappears. The out side is no more the pain inside is gone. Remember what I say right hear remember your not alone.
When everyone around you just keeps walking by .and your all alone and lonely and they just don’t see you cry. When people sit and look at you with that careless empty stare. You decide to sluff them off but you know that their still there. You act like it doesn’t hurt you. But you know that’s a lie. It may not hurt like people think they just want to see you cry. When you come home and let it out that feeling you’ve held inside. And let that painful tear stream down your face from your reddened eye. You have been to the outside today. But remember what I say. I’ve been there myself but when I’m home it disappears. The out side is no more the pain inside is gone. Remember what I say right hear remember your not alone.
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THAT_GUY on August 7, 2004, 5:07:28 AM
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NO!!!!SHES MY SISTER! hey emma thats awsum stuff *favs* o and thnx for the comment and the hugorange_head on July 27, 2004, 10:44:03 AM
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww OMG!GothicDancer on July 27, 2004, 4:19:19 AM
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I know what that feels like. It's such a horrible feeling to know that people reject you when you can't do anything about it. I feel good that I'm not alone in this world. :)RJ on July 26, 2004, 8:26:34 PM
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!