Chapter 5 - Lonely Love Song
Submitted October 22, 2005 Updated February 28, 2006 Status Incomplete | these are all the poams ive done and not all of them fall under the catigories ive placed the collection under...oh yeah...i need a title for the colection of them...but i hope you like them please if anyone has a good title for this colcetion please
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Chapter 5 - Lonely Love Song
Chapter 5 - Lonely Love Song
Lonely Love Song
Completed melodies cease to play,
Only broken notes display.
Waiting for my loves return.
All the candels cease to burn.
Light them one by one and watch.
All the children play hopscotch.
But not I, I sit alone.
Writing songs my love has shown.
But everything comes out right no longer,
And my love for her grow stronger.
I miss her so, I cannot wait.
I'll find her now and set this striat.
Completed melodies cease to play,
Only broken notes display.
Waiting for my loves return.
All the candels cease to burn.
Light them one by one and watch.
All the children play hopscotch.
But not I, I sit alone.
Writing songs my love has shown.
But everything comes out right no longer,
And my love for her grow stronger.
I miss her so, I cannot wait.
I'll find her now and set this striat.
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Ichidou_Daisuke on November 14, 2005, 2:30:26 PM
Oh yeah. Obviously, I'mm'a be addin' this to my faves. ^^ Ichidou_Daisuke on November 14, 2005, 2:29:52 PM
Dude, this is so frickin' awesome! I love it! Err... sorry that such a melancholy poem is bringing me such bliss, but your vocabulary and rhyming sequences were spectacular.