Dragon Ball- Artificial

YAY I NEW CHAPPY!!!


Yeah u need to add the color codes...I cant tell who it is...???

lol you just want to be smart and lok at the color key and find out who the girls is -.-

Yep^^ u read me like a book dont u? Hey have u decided if ur gonna join that story? Cause i need some guys and firehead is working on his form and that leaves one more spot...

HEY MY SKIN TONE IS MOCHO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NO!!!!!!!!!!!U CANT DIE YET!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wait...ur not gonna die...im such a moron...

So can u tell me whats gonna happen on ur next chappy edit? Or r u gonna torture me


well i have 2 go...I'm finishing something up 2night and i want it done very soon! Trust me u'll love it!

get on line!

Here's wut my outfit looks like...ur just to blonde to remember to ask ppl about that...


it looks exactly like thew Maks's on 'Dilated Love'

okay cool ^^

why did you mention it?

oh no reason...i figured it would give ppl a clear pic of wut our oc's look like...


oh and im not grounded so dont worry bout me! So whens the next edit?

when my mom gets back from visiting Hilary Clinton! ^^

EDIT SOON!!!!!!!!! WHILE IM FREE LIKE A BIRD!!!!!!!!!


sorry obut the cap locks...oh and good chappy so far! ad the reason i wasnt on last night is cause i was at a concert...i guess i like ppl with black hair and green high lites *drools*

lol

Well I just updated it, but it's not finished yet. I got distracted and updated just incase I axedentally X-d it out ^^

Name: Kurogin
Gender: Female
Species: Half Saiyen
Traites of Species:*Skin Color included as well as Any thing Special that Humans don't have* She has a serious attitude not to mention a kind heart like Gohan and she is always seen drawing or writing as if she is home schooled.
Is your Species Fan Made?: Well Duh! Yes!
Age: Gohan's age which I'm unsure on what it is.
Dream: To find out why she was sent to Earth, what happened to her parents, and then just kind of find a job when she gets a chance.
Physical Appearance: a normal size(5'4-5'5), Muscular for a child under 14, kind of an olive skin tone.
Hair: Black, and Saiyen blonde
Eyes: Black in normal state, then turn red in Saiyen form
Weapon/Equiptment: Physical attacks, Ki blasts, almost anything she can get her hands on
History: She comes to Earth and becomes friends with the DBZ characters, not to mention Gohan and Piccilo.
Phrases: "What's your Problem?" "I will never let you get all the fun." "Please tell me I did not just hear (or see) that." "I will not stop until you are in the ground dead." "You're mine!" And so on.
Attacks: Kamehameha wave, Raging Fireball, Wrath of the Dragon, Seal of the Enemy Dragon, and Finish Kamehameha Wave.
Why Do You Want the Dragon Balls?: To find out why my family has gone missing, and to gain a power to heal others.
Other Info: I have two sides, a light and dark side, and if my light side is gone, I will become unstoppable and if I get into the wrong hands, there is no telling what could happen. I also am a being of transforming myself into any shape and size, so I'm cursed with a shapeshifting stone in my chest.

I also have a question, is this after the Cell Saga?

waaaay after... It's a new saga

Okay, anyway is this Saga way after Majuun Buu and DBGT? Or is it just after the Majuun Buu Saga?

It's after ALL sagas ^^

So it's not exactly a DBZ story is it. It's more like a GT Saga.

lol kind of but still waay after that. lol

Okay dokay! What are you going to call this Saga? For example, the others were called Dragonball Z and Dragonball GT. So what are you going to call this awesome sounding one?

http://www.fanart-central.net/story-51694.htm

here check this out. there are many opportunities forthis story if you go here. You could find the dragon balls!

lol No Idea. I'v been thinking of alot of names ^^'

to be honest DBZ really inst my thing.

Name: San (Being her last name) Ebony
Gender: Female
Species: Terraion (Alien race from a planet called Terra)
Traites of Species: They have the same genetic make up as humans but are more powerful because they evovled to fight off the Saiyans when they came to attack their planet. There names are usally colours or types of wood (In any language)
Is your Species Fan Made?: Yes!
Age: Varies (Pending on what saga it is)
Dream: To be the feared female in the universe (because of her power), win a match against Goku and beat Vegeta when he's a super saiyan.
Physical Appearence: Average height (around 5,7 - 5,8), shoulder lenth hair (back of head is boy cut hair, right side of head has the most hair.) Slightly above average chest as well.
Eyes: Black
Weapon/Equipment: None
History: At the age of 12 the space she was on with her parents crash landed on earth, killing her parents. Ebony wondered around earth until she got run over by Goku on his flying cloud. When he apoligises he accidently pokes her in the eye with his magic staff causing it to bleed. He takes her back to Master Roshi's house to clean up. Since then her and Goku have been the best of friends (like brother and sister, so they kinda have brotherly/sisterly relationship), she even trained with Roshi and learnt the Kamehameha. She also dated Krillin for a short time during the 5 years between Dragonball and Dragonball Z. Back when her and Goku first met and she noticed his tail she knew he was a saiyan, just never said anything.
Phrases: "I hope you realise, i'm not youre average female!" | "Hey you punk!! I'm just as strong as those two. What are you afraid you'd lose to me?" | "I can do whatever you can do, just better" | (To Goku) "You Mellon!"
Attacks: "Kamehameha" | "Reapers Cradle" (A fury of large energy balls shot at the opponent) | "Solar Flare" | "Destructive Canon" (Large energy wave)
Why Do you Want the Dragon Balls?: The same reason as to why Goku and the others want them.
Other Info: She worries about her close friends when they do something noble, she's never died. Because of Earth's atmosphere she ages slower than everyone else. She's called Aunt Ebony and Gohan and Goten. Is nicknamed Ebs by Krillin. Finally In ranks on whos the strongest on earth (Goku being 1st and Vegeta being 2nd) Ebony is 3rd, gaining up closey against Vegeta.

Just as bad as yesturday

really?!?!?!? what makes everthing so bad?

lol I hate to ask another question seeing you are very trouibled but... Whats the personality of your character XD

To be honest i don't know myself.

XD Fine

I'll try to make it close to your personality... well When your Not sick ^^'

lol Your Character Just gave me a great idea! this is gona be great! XD

Ooo can't wait, keep me posted

AWESOME! TY FOR JOINING!!!

Your Profile is really nice!!! I might altar it a bit becuz you'll be one of my main characters *lol it'll be alot of fun*, But I don't see anything that really needs changing.


TY SO MUCH FOR JOINGING! XD

You're Welcome!

=)

O and does your character have a Love intrest? if so, is it your fan made character?

She has a love interst but its not a fanmade charrie and ....stuff

cool who is the love interest ^^??? I had this really cool Idea...

What if Maks (falloutgirlAARHinder's char) Killed your characters love interest like 100 years ago or what ever? Read her character down at the bottom of the comments and read my comment to her aswell XD

err well her love interest is Vegetto.....and it's complacted.

XD lol wow, That would BE VERY complex... Cool!!!

yeah, i guess

lol so... ooo oo IDEA! I Just had an Idea! I feel Like Albert Instine XD!!!

yeah?

You could Be the Kid of you OC!!!

OR

Your OC could Have a Kid and that's how you meet the gang

Lol thought still in progress XD

While I think YOU THINK TOO! XD It's hard, I'm only blond XD

Mean while Check this


http://www.fanart-central.net/story-51694.php

It has to do with this story ^^ You might like some of the drawings in there or they might give you ideas =D

Look i don't feel that all good today so im not really up for doing anything, let alone this.

cool, I understand ^^, I could tell you were downby the '...'s after every sentence XD

It's okay I'll do All the thinking I'll just surprise you Besides I also Got my Co-Writers to help me out with this decision XD

okay I have a question for you...

For the story, you WILL look young, But do you want to BE young? Cuz I was thinking of like 3 different things...

1) You could be the master of the young heros

2) you could have something wrong with you *like being taken out of your own time or something.(reason I say is becuz of 1 of the other characters is has time traveling powers)*

3) or you could b young and tag along with the young heros NOT as their Mentor.

all three have intresting side plots XD. you don't have to choose just tell me what you think ^^

err..well i dunno...

lol well I don't want you to be TO surprised when the first chappy comes out XD...

What do ya think?

its ok

u never asked wut out personality was Leo...BIG mistake...

i think i wanna be over 10,000 years old...

lol maybe 2 more people! XD and you will probably be around like 200. lol But when you very first awaken you think your like 15! XD

Sweet...i need to think of some ppl that like DBZ....hmmmm*light bulb appears but soon blows*

u got 4 ppl...how many do u need again?

Name:Maki
Gender:female
Species:human
Traites of Species:?
Is your Species Fan Made?:?
Age:15
Dream:to find the power within her
Physical Appearence:5 feet tall
Hair:brown with blonde streaks
Eyes:green
Weapon/Equipment:wand
History:being a slave for a evil person(still is)
Phrases:"my master and the moon is all i can count on
Attacks:doesnt know yet
Why Do you Want the Dragon Balls?:her master demands her to give them to him
Other Info:as a baby the evil person trained her to be evil

cooly ^^

I'll put you in on the dark side MUAHAHAHAHA!!! lol XD

hey the dark side rocks...though...im just stuck watching Time...no i can NOT reveal the future to u...

ok

and can i not be old

of coarse! I'd rather you not be old XD. Be young!

can i be human

just be sure to fill out the info XD

yes ^^

uhhhhh!what is that but anyway ill join

MEOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LEO U KNOW I DID LEAVE A REPLY ON MY PROFILE FORM UR COMMENT!!!!!!!!ANSWER IT!!!!!!!

Name: Maksime(Maks) Van Croft
Gender: Female
Species: Android...I think
Traites of Species:*Skin Color included as well as Any thing Special that humans don't have* ...Im normal like 17 and 18
Is your Species Fan Made?: ???wuh??? may I remind u I havent watced this show in many years
Age: 21
Dream: To be a actoress, model(V. Secret babii), violinist, artist, writer, and director, along with a singer
Physical Appearence: Very tall(5'6-5'9), muscular for a girl, almost mocho skin tone
Hair: Strawberry blond
Eyes: One eye is red(right) and the other is gold/amber
Weapon/Equipment: (sorry to much Sailor Pluto) Time staff...but the orb is not garnet its amynist
History: Doesnt have a history except for burning cities and villages to the ground and taking pleasure in killing ppl, or just fooling with time
Phrases: 'How can I help you when I cant even help my self', 'Blood doesnt make a family love does', 'I'll love for you no matter who you are and what youve done'
Attacks: 'Kronus Typhoon', 'Space Turbalance', 'Submarine Violin Wave'
Why Do you Want the Dragon Balls?: To bring all those that I killed back to life as babies
Other Info: A stronger force stole a egg out of my ovaries and took sperm from a unknown human and combined them in a lab which created a super being. Which also resulted into me being a mother of a unwanted child that became a cyborg from not being naturally born.

hey! Thanks for stopping by and joining!

Umm lets see here... Your Profile is really nice!!! I might altar it a bit becuz you'll be one of my main characters *as normal*, But I don't see anything that really needs changing except your Age. I might make you a little younger depending on the other main characters ages.

XD TY FOR JOINING!

Oh and...



By species I ment Race. You see Some People like to make up there Alien Race or like to be Saiyan or Nameik
Like a few characters from the show XD

Android= Artificial Human. Cyborgs are another form of Androids. Cyborg and Androids are the same in DBZ Apparently ^^'

I might make your character a little unkown of her past at first. What I meen is...

You would kind of have a Split personality. You were first normal Like any other human/android. When your Killing Instinc was some how released! And Them Some Hero Saved you from destroying the whole earth. You were then Sent into a coma like state and you qoke up in the middle of our story Not Knowing a thing about your Past ^^. lol AND your eyes change colors from being Human to Android when you become one of your other halfs.


YOu just gave me a great idea for the ending XD