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Chapter 1 - Untitled

A poem I won honerable minchin 4

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled


First snow whiteness





The first snow I ever saw

was white but who knows



it could turn red Yellow bright

green even Chock-O-let brown



but the snow is white everything

is white even the popcorn bushes

are white the white is so bright

and so pretty I make a snow girl

and dress her in bright red clothes



She looks so pretty against the white white snow.











A black Dog





A black dog in the night

See its shadow

See its yellow eye

A black dog at night.






















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sorafan_cupcake on June 25, 2005, 3:24:00 PM

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sorafan_cupcakeya it not retarted at all!!! me and my friend thought it was pretty neat!

RiversBlood on June 2, 2005, 6:17:10 AM

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RiversBloodThis is pretty good. Keep working and I'm sure you'll make even better poems in the near future! Surf the net for poetry and get other people to critique it. This is really good, I like it!

xoxoAMERICANIDIOTxoxo on May 29, 2005, 7:25:53 AM

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xoxoAMERICANIDIOTxoxothis story is awesome
uhhh ^>^ or @.@

UNITED_WE_SUCK on May 29, 2005, 7:23:57 AM

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UNITED_WE_SUCKCailin!!

heartless-sinner on May 22, 2005, 3:52:53 AM

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heartless-sinnerit is really awesome!! ^-^

cresentmoonsL-Z on May 21, 2005, 6:17:12 AM

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cresentmoonsL-Zthis poem's kewl,lol ^_____^

weewoo on May 20, 2005, 7:21:48 AM

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weewoonaa!! it's not retarded!! it's better than my pomes on this site!

UNITED_WE_SUCK on May 19, 2005, 1:25:39 PM

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UNITED_WE_SUCKYou really Think I thought It was RetArded

love_2_write_stuff on May 19, 2005, 12:33:47 PM

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love_2_write_stuffI like! Very creative! *claps*
chya! ^-^