Chapter 1 - Wolfs Cry
Submitted November 27, 2003 Updated November 27, 2003 Status Incomplete | poem
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Chapter 1 - Wolfs Cry
Chapter 1 - Wolfs Cry
When you hear a wolfs cry,
its not their joy and pride,
its the lonelyness he holds in side,
for which he held in for so long,
like it was his favorie kind of song,
the song of sadness leaves him weak,
were he is unable to speak,
on the ground he will wait,
until the next night awaits,
he gets up and howls at the moon,
the others howl back too,
to let him know hes not alone
its not their joy and pride,
its the lonelyness he holds in side,
for which he held in for so long,
like it was his favorie kind of song,
the song of sadness leaves him weak,
were he is unable to speak,
on the ground he will wait,
until the next night awaits,
he gets up and howls at the moon,
the others howl back too,
to let him know hes not alone
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JSLOVE on May 11, 2007, 2:07:44 AM
JSLOVE on
very goodbegin on July 27, 2006, 10:14:25 AM
begin on
that was awesome loved the poemÂ
Silvanis on March 12, 2005, 9:34:35 AM
Silvanis on
SO true. I luv it! Must fave! *wags tail and faves*DarkDusk on June 11, 2004, 6:03:36 PM
DarkDusk on
eeep it's asomely cool!! *glomps poem* wolves rock!! omg I gots ro show this to mah friend!!( if I remember but I miht hide it to her and keep it to myself XP ) great job!! it's a really powerful poem +favesAyumie on January 21, 2004, 8:16:06 AM
Ayumie on
dude this is totally cool.... im a punk and i luv wolves too... u should see my collection.... hehe nice poem its koo bu-bi ~paine/ayumieWeirdopunkwolf on January 18, 2004, 2:22:22 PM
if youant i could make up another one for ya tiler_james on January 6, 2004, 2:34:05 AM
tiler_james on
O_O i love this poem! ^-^ Wolves are my fav animals!!! *adds to favs* XD do u have anymore to do with wolves??Weirdopunkwolf on November 27, 2003, 6:03:09 AM
plz make comments thanks ;)