Chapter 1 - Looking at roses.
Submitted May 3, 2005 Updated May 3, 2005 Status Incomplete | This was submitted into a poetry competition, and will be published in a book soon. I can't remeber what the books name was, but it was on Poetry.com. Anyway, i hope you enjoy! Please post comments, or ideas on how i can make it better.
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Chapter 1 - Looking at roses.
Chapter 1 - Looking at roses.
When I see roses,
I start to cry.
What I wouldn't give, my dear,
To see you smile again.
But now I weep.
Death should not have taken you.
You were not ill.
Nor were you depressed.
You had me.
I had you.
We had each other, and a life of happiness ahead.
Sometimes I wonder,
About what might have been.
Had your life not have been stolen last week.
You would be laughing at my sad lament.
When I see roses,
I cry, I cry.
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Dragga_Ryuu on November 20, 2005, 9:51:22 PM
Dragga_Ryuu on
This is really good. Congrats on the publication, by the way. And it seems perfect to me. I need to fix my two.Randomobssesedeasilyentertaine on June 11, 2005, 2:26:59 PM
wow.....that like was all *sniffle* sad and clse to my heartPLEASE DONT CRY!
good job
i loved it
now when i see a rose ill think of this poem
=ww=
WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on May 27, 2005, 8:10:18 AM
i know i posted three times, but ignore that last comment please. I think i was drinking fizzy drink then.WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on May 8, 2005, 4:13:37 PM
aw, is this poem that bad????? MY MORALE CANNOT COPE WITH THIS!!!! *hits head against wall*(oh, and thanks Beck-ee for commenting. and anyone else who chooses to)
WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on May 3, 2005, 6:23:33 PM
i'm pleased you like it! thanx.bek-ee on May 3, 2005, 4:55:49 PM
bek-ee on
T.T so sad. i love it! keep writing!