Chapter 1 - Rain's Birth

A/N: Hi reviewers this is my first Spirit Fanfic! (Second story) I do respect constructive criticism and all reviews so please do not be lenient I always enjoy getting help from more experienced fanfic users! I hope you like my story! Enjoy!



Spirit was making his rounds around the herd checking on every mare and foal in the herd. Spirit was proud of his large herd. He had twenty mares in all and fourteen of them carrying Spirits foals. Rain was one of them and that brought joy throughout the herd.



11 months later

Rain felt a sudden pain surge through her abdomen and knew the time had come. She looked at Spirit with a painful look upon her face and Spirit knew right away that it was time for the foal to be born. He nodded knowingly and Rain walked to a place in the woods where she could have her foal peacefully. Hours passed and Spirit paced around very concerned and almost got up the nerve to go search for Rain when he saw Rain coming back from the woods with the expected little miracle. He neighed a joyful neigh and everyone in the heard looked and when they saw Rain they all came rushing towards her with joyful neighs all being passed around the herd. Some farther back then others because the mares that did not have their foals yet were trying to get there as fast as they could. Rain was overjoyed still licking her little wonder back to the rest of the herd.

The foal was beautiful! She had Rain's Paint color but instead of having a reddish color she had Spirits deep golden Buckskin color on top of Rain's White. The little filly's fluffy mane and tail was as black as the mid-night sky with no stars in it. She also had a large fat thick Blaze that looked like white paint was being poured over her Buckskin color and the paint got caught between her eyes and that was where it stayed. It ran all the way to her nostrils and stopped abruptly and a little white ran down her lip to make a snip on her nose. She was spunky like Spirit but had the deep blue eyes of Rain. Rain looked into Spirits deep brown gentle eyes she said

“What do we name her Spirit?”

“We will have to think on what we want to name her.”

“Something symbolical to her personality” Rain suggested

“I think that is a good idea Rain.” Spirit said supportively

“Well I will have to think on it for a while Spirit, you go do your rounds and gather the herd back up.”

“Okay Rain but you rest a little, you were through a lot today.”

Spirit then galloped off to gather the heard that is now spread out through the valley exited and hyper for the birth of Rain's foal. But Rain was worried. What if I wasn't a good mother, what if I didn't know what to do? Rain thought

But Rain took one look at her beautiful foal, tucked away under her stomach suckling her mother's milk and said out loud.

“Everything is going to be okay.”

As Spirit got the herd into a pack again Rain and her new foal joined them. Spirit and Rain thought for days on what they were going to name their new foal and finally Rain thought of a name for the little filly. She trotted to Spirit her foal keeping up behind her.

“Spirit!”

“What is it Rain is everything okay?” Spirit said with a worried look on his face

“Oh yes I am sorry to scare you like that.” Rain said

“I thought of a name for the foal.” Spirit and Rain said at the same time

“Oh really what did you think of Spirit.” Rain said first

“I thought of the name Fighting Blaze.” Spirit said proudly

“What!?”

“That is stupid Spirit I can't believe that you like that name, plus that is a name you would call a colt not a filly!” Rain said madly

“You do know that I had a filly Spirit!” Rain said

“Well what did you think of Rain!” Spirit said angrily

“I thought of the name Shadow Flower.” Rain said just as proud as Spirit

“What!?” Spirit mocked in a high mareish voice

“That is so stupid Rain.” Spirit mocked again

“That name sounds dark and drawn back.” Spirit said

“We could call her Flower, Spirit if you think that Flower sounds like a dark and drawn back name there is something wrong with you!” Rain said getting louder and louder each word she spoke

“And on top of that Spirit what would we call her if we did call her fighting Blaze?” Rain interrupted Spirit, as he was about to explain

“Blaze?”

“That is a colts name!”

Rain turned around and was still saying words to thin air while she was walking away. Spirit then ran in front of Rain and said in lame attempt to fix everything

“Lets call her Sprain, so we could both have our names in her name.”

Rain just looked at Spirit and gave him a stupid look, sighed then walked away. Spirit looked at me with a puzzled face,

“What? Was it something that I said?”

Rain walked with her filly to a nice patch of summer grass and started to munch on it.

“What about the name Valley?” Rain thought out loud

“Or something with the name Charity in it, I like the name Charity.”

“What about…Charity's Blazing Rose?” She thought again out loud

“They all sound like good names.” an unfamiliar voice said

“Who is that?”

Rain looked up and couldn't believe her eyes!

“Oh my gosh!”



A/N: Well I thought of a good idea (At least I think so) that would be something a little different from the other Spirit FanFics. I have the names Valley, Fighting Blaze, Charity's Blazing Rose, and Shadow Flower, all names I mentioned in the chapter. I thought that I would think of a few names and let the reviewers decide the name of Rain's filly. I also welcome any names reviewers think of, just send them my way! What do you think? Please review and send me the name you like best of the names I thought of or think of a name yourself and send it to me! I am going to wait to post another chapter until I get enough reviews, I am thinking around 3 or 4. Thank you for reading my fan fic! And I am going to make my next chapter much longer don't worry!

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