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Chapter 1 - Endless Loss...

This is how I feel when someone close to me dies or has to move. One of my best friends died a while ago so..... If you have any suggestions for my first poem plese tell!

Chapter 1 - Endless Loss...

Chapter 1 - Endless Loss...
I fall,
never seeming to stop.
Into a bottemless pit,
no bottem and no top.
pure darkness,
nowhere to run and hide.
stuck in the middle,
of the oceans tide.
No one to trust,
no one to love.
So, I just gaze,
At the endless stars above.....

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