Chapter 1 - part 1- One of the Heartless
Submitted December 16, 2004 Updated January 20, 2006 Status Incomplete | i hope u guys like this, maybe i might consider adding people from games, t.v. shows and ur characters if u want me to add them to this story anyways heres a story i hope u all might like ^^
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Chapter 1 - part 1- One of the Heartless
Chapter 1 - part 1- One of the Heartless
It was a normal day to the very smart Yoshi. Until a dark and cruel day came to his planet Fruitopia. A giant black ball struck Yoshi's home. Then when it crashed on his home a dark mysterious creature came up and took one of the yoshi's heart. Then the heatless jumped to Yoshi and then did something horrible. He took his box of donuts. Yoshi responded with a NOOOOOOOO! The heartless then ate his donut's one by one the heartless ate them. Then yoshi ran away to cover because he knew those things were too powerful for him to handle. But then Yoshi accidentally dropped his destruction remote the heartless then grabbed it and destroyed many buildings. One of them even had a yoshi in a kid suit on a tricycle and had a lollypop and that yoshi then said, UGHHHH this isn't what it looks like. Then Yoshi was then swallowed by the darkness. But then yoshi was then saved by a mysterious light it was a big key but on the end of it was a egg and had a egg chain. Yoshi knew something had to be done…
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ANIMATIONmaster on December 15, 2005, 8:05:52 AM
funny story yap you problay need to start usi ng quotes ""
Lysergs_Kitty on June 28, 2005, 1:35:12 PM
O__O *gets out SDRHMF* HEY! YOU HEARTLESS! DON'T YOU TOUCH THAT YOSHI, OR I'LL HAVE TO BRUTALLY MURDER YOU!!!
Heartless: O__O *runs off*
Mehlee: +____+ That's better... Hmm.. Great story.. I can't wait to see what happens to poor li'l Yoshi... *reads other chappies*
P.S. Check out Wheel of Torture Chapter 2 if you have time, please!
Heartless: O__O *runs off*
Mehlee: +____+ That's better... Hmm.. Great story.. I can't wait to see what happens to poor li'l Yoshi... *reads other chappies*
P.S. Check out Wheel of Torture Chapter 2 if you have time, please!