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Chapter 28 - the crash...

i hope u guys like this, maybe i might consider adding people from games, t.v. shows and ur characters if u want me to add them to this story anyways heres a story i hope u all might like ^^

Chapter 28 - the crash...

Chapter 28 - the crash...


*about to leave*

Yoh: wait you guys we need to lock the keyhole!

Yoshi: oh shoots that's right!

Shadow: I think its over there! *points at windmill*

Yoshi: good *they all point at it*

*the windmill shows keyhole and they lock it*

Rachel: good work. Now lets go back inside. *they all go to the gummi ship*

*blasts off*

Yoh: *leans* so where do we go to now?

Yoshi: I don't know.

Rachel: uh oh *see's something*

Shadow: what is it?

Rachel: I think were ganna crash with that comet…

Yoshi: comet? *looks* O.O!!!!! oh shoot!!!

Yoh: Yoshi hurry and turn it!!!

Yoshi: it's to late were ganna get hit!!!!!

*they get crashed with comet*

Rachel: AAAA!!!!!! Am too young and beautiful to die!!!!!

*they all get pushed hard by it and into the unknown*

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