Chapter 1 - The hours

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December 12, 2004
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A down to earth poem.I think it is my best poem so far.I think most people will like it.It is depressing yet in an odd way.Two verses.Read & review!^_^

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Chapter 1 - The hours

At dawn of day

Life shall not obey

My drowsy peril

Will not stray

And the time will not sway me

And the hours will not obey me

For your death there is truly sorrow

For your soul there is still twomarrow

So shall your spirit slay me

Remember,

The hours do not obey me

Verse Two

And by gods witness

The hours shall not pain me

For life is just twisted forms and maiming

As midnight draws near

I break down

My pain shall finally slay me

Then,

Only then,

Shall the hours obey me

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FrozenPirate on March 17, 2005, 10:31:15 AM

i like it i shall fave *faves*