Chapter 1 - Night to Day
Submitted October 16, 2007 Updated May 20, 2008 Status Incomplete | YAYAYAY my poetry shtuff!!!! read my sonnets and limeriks, por favor!!!
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Chapter 1 - Night to Day
Chapter 1 - Night to Day
Night to Day
Apache tear sky full of silver stars
A golden moon reflects in glassy pools
Mauve scales sleep in coral caves afar
A tranquil, silent, peaceful night that's gloomed.
A sugared wax hanging from limb of quake
A gold and black fat beast resides within.
It's fast asleep, reluctant to awake
As farmer's rooster crows at the new sun.
Stained glass erupts from burning topaz sun
The horses flit across lace-agate sky
To stain the tow'ring stones blue, to atone
For the bright sphere's absense from the black night.
And to tree's alarm, the bright afternoon
Will grow dark and reveal gold crescent moon.
Apache tear sky full of silver stars
A golden moon reflects in glassy pools
Mauve scales sleep in coral caves afar
A tranquil, silent, peaceful night that's gloomed.
A sugared wax hanging from limb of quake
A gold and black fat beast resides within.
It's fast asleep, reluctant to awake
As farmer's rooster crows at the new sun.
Stained glass erupts from burning topaz sun
The horses flit across lace-agate sky
To stain the tow'ring stones blue, to atone
For the bright sphere's absense from the black night.
And to tree's alarm, the bright afternoon
Will grow dark and reveal gold crescent moon.
Constructive crit is encouraged!!! (no, I do not think saying "it's stupid" is constructive criticism.)
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Kira1 on November 18, 2008, 10:06:28 PM
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aeris7dragon on November 25, 2008, 9:12:02 AM
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fave line you used: lace-agate sky (wooooowwwww good comparison!)