Chapter 1 - chapter one~ the begining

an akatsuki story[br]
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( it all started with a huge explodion, far off into a distant forest, stood a tall, blond man, they called him deidara. he and his partner along with itachi's team were on a recriuting mission)[br]
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deidara: tobi, how long is it, until we reach our much needed recruit?un.. *sigh*[br]
tobi: not long, deidara senpai! we are almost to our desegnated aera! [br]
itachi: shut up will you? we need to get our new recruit before something happens![br]
kisame: yeah, i heard that she has a demon in her...one that no one knows about.[br]
itachi: then, kisasme, how do you know about it?[br]
kisame: i dont...it was just a rumor i heard the other day...[br]
itachi: alright...[br]
deidara: was it specified what village or contry we could find her in, yeah?[br]
itachi: yes...she can be found in...the hidden earth village.[br]
deidara: h...hi...hidden earth? un![br]
itachi: yeah...thats what sir leader said.[br]
tobi: but itachi, tobi said lets head north.he knows a short cut![br]
itachi: stop speaking in thierd person...but yeah, thats the same route kisame and i took when we had to resruit deidara![br]
deidara: dont reminde me of that day, un![br]
itachi: ok.. he also said that she had a very bad background so she's probably a tough opponet...and unfortunatly, i am the one she has to fight.[br]
deidara: tsch! it's like you know when to quit, itachi, yeah![br]
itachi: ok, we are here(they are now at the hidden earth gates)[br]
kisame: y..you first deidara(he pushes deidara into the village gates and they are welcomed warmly by a coulpe of deidara's relatives.)[br]
deidara: oh, my, un! i cant belive it, yeah! it's you two hm![br]
*cousin 1: deidara! we were woriied about you![br]
**cousin2: yeah deidara! um... mom wanted to see you and when auntie melane told us that you were gone we were scared![br]
deidara: listen, dreinaki and deime, i was scared too...oh and who am i not to introduce my friends, tobi is the one in the swirly orange mask, then itachi and kisame. yeah..[br]
**deime: hi! (she looks questionly at kisame) why does he look like a fishy?[br]
kisame: i have no clue why i even look like this...all i know is that i was born like this![br]
*dreinaki: why does itachi have red eyes? (he looks softly at itachi, who shruggs)[br]
deidara: have you heard of a girl, who by no doubt looks kinda like me and is part demon? yeah...[br]
deime: yeah! every day she helps us out by teaching us realy cool moves![br]
dreinaki: yeah, we could show you what she's shown us![br]
deidara: not right now, do you know where to find her? un...[br]
deime: yeah! she lives next door to where you used to live, cousin deidei![br]
deidara: ok guys, can you take us? un?[br]
deime: yeah![br]
(she and her twin brother*dreinaki* takes them to their tutor's house and then they are inside)[br]
deime: jennifer! it's me, deime![br]
jennifer: hey guys!(she comes in her front room and sees deidara and three other akatsuki) oh..i see you broght friends, i know one of them by look.[br]
deime: what one?[br]
jennifer: your cousin, deidara.[br]
deidara: are you by chance that girl containing a mystery demon and having a nack for art?[br]
jennifer: yeah! why are you here for me?[br]
deidara: yeah,(peers down at his two little cousins) guys, tell you mother i am only here on businniss..ok?[br]
deime: ok...see you around deidara!(they walk out of the house and the lone five ninjas, four akatsuki and one non-akatsuki, is left standing)[br]
jennifer: why me?[br]
deidara: our leader has a huge interest in you...and he wishses you to join...all you need to do is beet itachi and you are in if not, then you are free to go.[br]
jennifer: i never lose i battle! no matter what the odds are! but first i need to go tell my boss to teach my squad...but i am afraide that my students will not forgive me but i want to leave this place....[br]
deidara: ok...let's go to a more romote place. yeah![br]
jennifer: i can get us there..i place i like to go that only i now about.(she instantly transports them to a forets)[br]
itachi: ready?[br]
jennifer: hell yeah![br]
itachi: ok...[br]
deidara: and begin![br]
jennifer: (she transeforms her right foot into a dragon's claw and she kicks itachi in a bad spot*for itachi, not her*)[br]
kisame: she uses a nasty techneque![br]
itachi: aaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrgh!(her foot is helt there for a minute and she lets him drop off of her foot)[br]
jennifer: heheh! secret dragon's techneque! dragon's foot of three-year pain![br]
itachi: arrrrrrrrrrrrrg!ye-aaaaaaaah! (he has his left hand over that spot and he is rolling on the ground in pain...and a lot of it.)[br]
deidara: itachi, i'd sure hate to be you right now. yeah....[br]
tobi: that looks like it hurt.[br]
itachi: y...yo..you...th....think!? (he screams alittle more as he tries to get up) aaarrrrgggh![br]
jennifer: had enough yet?[br]
itachi: n..no!(he gets up, by suprizingil, he his standing up because her one realy strong attack had injured him almost severly)[br]
jennifer: if you want more, i have a near-infanite jutsu and fighting technueques list![br]
itachi: ok..*oh shoot!*[br]
deidara: itachi! get out of there! un![br]
itachi: n...not until...i...i be...beat her![br]
jennifer: tsch! as i said, no one has beaten me, i cannot be taken down that easily! ( this time instead of trancforming again, she did a jutsu that has not been heard of yet)[br]
itachi: oh shoot!(her exploding dragon's replicate was off of deidara's bomb-measure chart.)[br]
deidara: oh...my...god!...th...that's...a... c-10 explosion! more powerful then what i can do![br]
tobi: diedara senpai's been out done?[br]
deidara: shut it tobi! (he jumps on tobi, wrapping his feet around tobi's throat) death by suffocation![br]
tobi: d..dei...deidara...s...sen...senpai! l...let...g..go of me![br]
jennifer: huh! had enough now!?[br]
itachi: yeah...you have deafeted me...you win.(he falls uncontious)[br]
jennifer: didnt mean to knock you out, itachi.[br]
deidara: and the winner is, jennifer.[br]
tobi: welcome to the akatsuki! now to go to pein and tell him the news![br]
deidara: tobi, you go, i'll stay and take care of things here.[br]
tobi: ok deidara senpai!(he dissapears into a puff of smoke and deidara is looking at what is infront of him)[br]
deidara: wow, powerful, un! where did you learn that?[br]
jennifer: m..my demon.....[br]
deidara: can you tell me, what demon?[br]
jennifer: a dragon, she has revealed herself to me, she calls herself timakibakuu. an unkown demon to other lands...she was once a peace demon until the nine-tails attack...but now she is rarly used for village destruction and i can control what size she is...any size from your standard pure-bred great dane to the size of a three-story building.[br]
deidara: wow! what a nice range! yeah.[br]
jennifer: yea...i'd advise that we get itachi, there and head to the akatsuki cave..pronto.[br]
deidara: nice advice....un.[br]
(they start running[after picking up itachi] to the akatsuki cave and their leader, pein, is waiting)[br]
pein: i see she defeated itachi...what happend?[br]
deidara: i am sure itachi will tell you when he gets up from being uncontious...[br]
konan: she dosnt even look hurt.[br]
jennifer: that's becaause of this..(she turns timakibakuu lv.one infront of them*this form is a great-dane sized dragon* and she looks at pein with deep-blue eyes)[br]
pein: that explains alot....(he looks stunningly at the dragon with swirly-purple eyes and then back at deidara) she is one hell of an adversary..i'd advise, while she's around that you guys, epseacally you hidan, behave and listen to her or else she can do whatever she wants to you.[br]
hidan: WHAT THE frack MAN![br]
pein: and that is precicly why! your cursing! it is too damned anoying![br]
jennifer: hmph!(she breathes a small amount of blue fire on hidan who likes it but still runs in a circle)[br]
hidan: PUT THE DAMN FIRE OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(he runs around saying and screaming several curse-words as jennifer laughs at his weal=k attempt to put out her blue dragonflames)[br]
jennifer: in order for it to be put out, you must first listen to your leader.[br]
pein: jennifer, you've earned the right to call me by name.[br]
all akatsuki(exept pein): now that's a high honor![br]
jennifer: thank you...and hidan, if you really want the fire out, you must ask for forgiveness to both your god and pein, akatsuki leader first.[br]
hidan: y..you know of my religion?[br]
jennifer: yes i do...jashism, right?[br]
hidan: yes! and sir leader, i am sorry for my curse words and my actions to the other akatsuki *and sorry jashin god for my offending actions!* (the fire goes out on it's own and hidan is in bad need of a new cloak) my cloak....[br]
kisame: ok...now what?[br]
pein: konan and i have appointed the problem of deidara and tobi not getting along and therefor asign him a new partner...the new girl, jennifer. and tobi you will now be with...hmm....zetsu until we figure something out.[br]
tobi/zetsu:WHAT!?[br]
pein: yeah...now that that is done, konan and i have an anouncement, she and i will be on a two-month vacation, leaving one person fron one team in charge...but this has not been decided...this is how it works, i will host a game of vollyball and whoever's team gets ten or eleven points before thier opponets will go and play in all rounds until they are defeated or they win the final round. no cheating wich encludes; no buddy-spring-boards, no clones, no rituals, no weapons, no water moves/animals, no using your inner deamons, no using replicate jutsu including buddy repication, no jutsu and no using your head to hit the ball, do i make myself clear?[br]
all akatsuki(exept pein): yeah![br]
pein: our first duo vs duo round is tiachi and kisame vs tobi and zetsu. oh and one last rule, no eating anything wile you are on the feild and no using explosives, deidara.[br]
konan: and begin! [br]
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