Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted April 27, 2005 Updated April 27, 2005 Status Incomplete | this is a random creative writing story we had to write for english class. i added a couple of the lines my friends Bo and Sonmin wrote in there. its actually really bad but i find it funny, in a not so funny way. =3
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
the sky was turning red and the waves were going up and down like granpa's last breaths.
i found myself at my favourite pace and i smile at the welcoming sounds of the ocean.
i could see the trees dancing wildly in the wind. Then suddenly the sun was nowhere
to be found and the moon was floating almost lasily in the sky.One by one the people left
the beach, leaving me alone with only the moon to keep me company.The silver bracelet shone
brightly in the early evening sky.I walked past singing flowers reaching their fingers
towards the violet clouds.It felt good to get my shoes off and sink my feet into the gold
dust.I closed my eyes and let my hair dance. The crickets were singing their mellowdramatic
song of sorrow and depression. the waves reach their hands out and dampen my feet.I watched
the purple sky turn navy. The air smelt salty and filled with the sound of a Morpork.
i smiled and spent the night sleeping on the sof sand, allowing the sea to take me into her
arms, and then i drowned.
i found myself at my favourite pace and i smile at the welcoming sounds of the ocean.
i could see the trees dancing wildly in the wind. Then suddenly the sun was nowhere
to be found and the moon was floating almost lasily in the sky.One by one the people left
the beach, leaving me alone with only the moon to keep me company.The silver bracelet shone
brightly in the early evening sky.I walked past singing flowers reaching their fingers
towards the violet clouds.It felt good to get my shoes off and sink my feet into the gold
dust.I closed my eyes and let my hair dance. The crickets were singing their mellowdramatic
song of sorrow and depression. the waves reach their hands out and dampen my feet.I watched
the purple sky turn navy. The air smelt salty and filled with the sound of a Morpork.
i smiled and spent the night sleeping on the sof sand, allowing the sea to take me into her
arms, and then i drowned.
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WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on May 15, 2005, 3:45:40 PM
oi, dis ain't crap!! it's awesomne and u shouldn't put ya self down!! i like it!
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