Chapter 1 - Drowning
Submitted August 23, 2004 Updated August 23, 2004 Status Incomplete | justa poem-i hope you peoples like it!tis alot better that the others...so plese read and comment!!:3
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Chapter 1 - Drowning
Chapter 1 - Drowning
im drowning,drowning in this hate
im sad,angry but i must await my fate
an ocean of tears a river of fears
my sorrow makes me drown.
im alone wet and darkness surounds me
is there anyone who will
come and hold me?
wet and dark and i go under.
drowning, wet, alone.
all alone.
im sad,angry but i must await my fate
an ocean of tears a river of fears
my sorrow makes me drown.
im alone wet and darkness surounds me
is there anyone who will
come and hold me?
wet and dark and i go under.
drowning, wet, alone.
all alone.
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BeautySeeker on August 29, 2004, 6:39:22 PM
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Wow, this is very good! Hmmmm, great minds think alike then, huh? ^^ I love it, I'll add this to my favs. Very nice, oh, and thanks for the comment ^_~A_dork_you_dont_know on August 23, 2004, 11:01:57 AM
cualll!!!! . . .dark lonely, and ........................................................................... drowning . . . and cuaallllllllllllllll1!!!! very nice monkey!