Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted July 17, 2005 Updated July 17, 2005 Status Incomplete | If the format's messed up, sorry but this is my first time uploading writing. Anyway, I used Edgar Allan Poe's style of writing for this so I hope you enjoy it!
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
Deep in Hell's infernal core,
Vast travelers wander evermore,
No ghastly monarchs bare remorse,
For their kingdoms taken in unearthly force.
Their life a dim-remembered story,
Pale memories a fleeing quarry.
Lost in a sea of forgotten dreams.
An extravagant bird without its wings,
Dispersed into darkness never again to be seen.
Silent in their eternal prison,
Malevolent thoughts hidden deep within,
Trapped in a myriad of nameless graves,
All that entrap the assailed knaves.
Whose wrong-doings and faults cannot mend,
That brought the souls to such tragic end.
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Xiakeyra on March 21, 2006, 3:29:20 AM
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Hey! Why I didn't comment this before? It is so good! *faves*bluestar on March 21, 2006, 3:06:29 AM
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oh wow! you are so intelligent to think of something like that! i love it. its very dark and mysterious! i agree with sanctuary on fav part!!Rei_Anul_Sama on March 18, 2006, 3:47:40 AM
Hey, nice poem^_^ and thank you for commenting on my pics^_^Hey, i would really appreciate it if you would read my poems. In my story list, they're all together under 'My Life, My Death' so please check it out^_^
Es-plodes_On_You on March 14, 2006, 7:32:22 AM
That's deep. I luff this! Very cool! Gotta love Edgar Allen Poe. His creepyness is da bimb.Darling_425 on February 25, 2006, 5:24:44 PM
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So beautiful!Betty_Boo on February 6, 2006, 4:18:17 AM
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I am so not good at writing poems! So - yeah its awesome.***!!!FAVES!!!***
smilingcheerios on January 23, 2006, 5:04:19 AM
wow, this is a great poem! I love Poe's work and I think you brought it out. nice job! Ichidou_Daisuke on January 16, 2006, 1:59:04 PM
I-i-i... I don't know how to comment! This is so awesome! Definately gonna be Favouritized. IIIjonIII on December 11, 2005, 8:54:28 AM
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I like this poem.It has an Edgar Allen Poe quality.Great job.ZeonicSkunk on December 10, 2005, 9:37:10 AM
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Very nice, dose flow like one of his works.Whatsername on November 11, 2005, 3:22:52 AM
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wow...spigin' awsome!_Sanctuary_ on September 8, 2005, 3:32:01 AM
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This is really good! Very EAP! My favourite part is:
Lost in a sea of forgotten dreams.
An extravagant bird without its wings,
Dispersed into darkness never again to be seen.
Silent in their eternal prison.
Cool poem!
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