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Lost Souls

If the format's messed up, sorry but this is my first time uploading writing. Anyway, I used Edgar Allan Poe's style of writing for this so I hope you enjoy it!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: July 17, 2005 • Updated: July 17, 2005
Word count: 94 • Size: <1k • Comments: 13 • views: 716

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Xiakeyra on March 21, 2006, 3:29:20 AM

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XiakeyraHey! Why I didn't comment this before? It is so good! *faves*

bluestar on March 21, 2006, 3:06:29 AM

bluestar on (Chapter: 1)
bluestaroh wow! you are so intelligent to think of something like that! i love it. its very dark and mysterious! i agree with sanctuary on fav part!!

Rei_Anul_Sama on March 18, 2006, 3:47:40 AM

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Rei_Anul_SamaHey, nice poem^_^ and thank you for commenting on my pics^_^

Hey, i would really appreciate it if you would read my poems. In my story list, they're all together under 'My Life, My Death' so please check it out^_^

Es-plodes_On_You on March 14, 2006, 7:32:22 AM

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Es-plodes_On_YouThat's deep. I luff this! Very cool! Gotta love Edgar Allen Poe. His creepyness is da bimb.

Darling_425 on February 25, 2006, 5:24:44 PM

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Darling_425So beautiful!

Betty_Boo on February 6, 2006, 4:18:17 AM

Betty_Boo on (Chapter: 1)
Betty_BooI am so not good at writing poems! So - yeah its awesome.
***!!!FAVES!!!***

smilingcheerios on January 23, 2006, 5:04:19 AM

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smilingcheerioswow, this is a great poem! I love Poe's work and I think you brought it out. nice job!

Ichidou_Daisuke on January 16, 2006, 1:59:04 PM

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Ichidou_DaisukeI-i-i... I don't know how to comment! This is so awesome! Definately gonna be Favouritized.

IIIjonIII on December 11, 2005, 8:54:28 AM

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IIIjonIIII like this poem.It has an Edgar Allen Poe quality.Great job.

ZeonicSkunk on December 10, 2005, 9:37:10 AM

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ZeonicSkunkVery nice, dose flow like one of his works.

Whatsername on November 11, 2005, 3:22:52 AM

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Whatsernamewow...spigin' awsome!

_Sanctuary_ on September 8, 2005, 3:32:01 AM

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_Sanctuary_This is really good! Very EAP!
My favourite part is:

Lost in a sea of forgotten dreams.
An extravagant bird without its wings,
Dispersed into darkness never again to be seen.
Silent in their eternal prison.

Cool poem!
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Sanctuary