Chapter 3 - Dejected Me
Submitted January 9, 2006 Updated December 1, 2006 Status Incomplete | This is where i am going to add all of my random poems and stuff P.S. Extreme hatred towards Preps. (gotta kill'em all)
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Chapter 3 - Dejected Me
Chapter 3 - Dejected Me
Dejected Me
I find sweet release in death
you might think that I do meth
you think that I'm not all here
because my mind's continually seared
All my life has been a lie
I just with that I could die
I just want to end this pain
This is where my body's lain
I feel like my mind is torn
My friend gives me funny porn
Am I gay or am I straight
I'm not sure but I feel faint
I think I'm fracked up in the head
many would rather see me dead
I have contemplated suicide
I will need more cyanide
I wish someone would listen more
and for more sanity in my store
and then I wish that I could love
but it is fleeting, like a dove
why am I insane, you may ask
do not delegate to me such a task
of finding out why, why
I would want to die
you have not lived my life
you know not of my eternal strife
I just want this pain to end
It is just too much to mend
My Broken Life
--Tyler Nelson
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brent on February 1, 2006, 9:05:31 PM
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unfocused on February 1, 2006, 12:42:26 PM
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"you might think that I do meth you think that I'm not all here" -nice start with the humor.
"I feel like my mind is torn
My friend gives me funny porn
Am I gay or am I straight
I'm not sure but I feel faint" -this part makes me crack up laughing.
and then you say "I think I'm fracked up in the head" thats the best, damn funny.
"I have contemplated suicide
I will need more cyanide" -hahahaha, damn, you know that one was good ;)
those were the funniest parts.
and you can find fallenangel on the forums XD
unfocused on February 1, 2006, 12:23:04 AM
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haha, ya, it is a nice one, made me laugh at some good parts. I really like it. I also love the name. And the friend who gives me funny porn is the Administrator Fallenangel on the forums. Ichidou_Daisuke on January 28, 2006, 4:48:02 PM
Nice poem. Personally, I like it better than your prep ones, no offense. >> Nice use of vocabulary, and I like your rhymes. A lot were pretty original. brent on January 28, 2006, 5:10:20 AM
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the feeling is mutual.*kisses back*
punked_out_panda on January 28, 2006, 4:46:13 AM
Oh freakin god!!! I love it!!! Like thats pretty damn close to my life!!! the questions and all...And love..Ahhh the most troubling thing..The search of love....GOD I LOVE YOU!!! *kiss* brent on January 25, 2006, 11:25:26 PM
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yay, people are actually COMMENTING on my stories. (and not bad comments either, *cheer*) thx for the compliment, and yes, these stories are hard to write. It usually takes me a couple of hours to get (the poems) right.--Tyler Nelson
TheLittleGothofDisney on January 25, 2006, 10:08:32 PM
Beautiful mate, that shot me deep like an arrow, & I suffer pain as well *favesbrent on January 24, 2006, 10:58:19 PM
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thank you set.setsuna_marie_meioh on January 24, 2006, 10:43:21 PM
Wow, that's deep. I like your writing style, I must say, very interesting. Keep me updated on your poem!
--Tyler Nelson