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Chapter 9 - Revenge

What if Ben never found the Omnitrix,what if it never landed in Ben's part of the cartoon world.

What if...it landed in the Foster's backyard?

Chapter 9 - Revenge

Chapter 9 - Revenge

The holidays have been very busy,meaning I haven't been on much.~Cactar

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Mac was walking to Foster's in the rain.

For some reason he wasn't rushing,he didn't mind the rain.

Foster's seemed so far away.

suddenly Mac saw Frankie running.

She seemed worried about something.

Frankie tripped over him.

"Mac!"she yelled as she grabbed him and started to hug him.

"What happened?"he said being constricted by Frankie.

Frankie suddenly had a serious face.

She stared him in the eyes.

Suddenly a lightning bolt hit Frankie in the back.

She fell over.

Mac was paralyzed with fear as he heard a voice so familiar and so evil.

"Don't worry,she's not dead,but you will be."

Mac looked across the street and up the street light.

He saw Jamez,his face covered in scars from the Awesoman attack,there were to floating figures with him.

"Pulse,Zapp,Go."

The strange floating figures multiplyed as they constricted Mac.

They were tiny yellow and black aliens with a plus and minus signs on there backs.

"So,Mac,Want to know why I attacked the people at school?"said Jamez,asking a retorical question.

"You."

"Me?!"replied Mac.

"The day after we hung out at the rock a rumor got out that I was a nerd."

"I tried to prove them wrong,but they just kept spreading and spreading it."

"So I took any dare people would throw at me."Jamez chuckled,then continued.

"And one day,someone told me to go to the power plant."

"Along came my powers and then I got revenge on those who spread the rumor and anyone that believed it."

"And to get revenge on you,I Attacked Foster's."

"No."

"But frankie here escaped after your imaginary friend told her to find you."Jamez finished.

"No..."Mac couldn't believe it.

"And now I'm going to steal your watch!"Jamez yelled as he jumped on top of Mac's arm.

Suddenly there was a green flash.

The copies of Pulse and Zapp disappeared.

Musslehead was standing out of the flash.

He grabbed Jamez.

"I hate you."Musslehead said as he pulled out the street light beside him.

He through Jamez in the air,then hitting him withe the street light.

Jamez flew far away.

Frankie!

Musslehead picked her up and lept block by block to Foster's.

Jamez must not have been there that long because the house only had minor damage.

Musslehead set Frankie down in the clock room.

The Omnitrix timed out.

Little did Mac know that he was in for a big surprize waiting for him just entering the solar system.

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Gee on January 1, 2008, 2:44:47 AM

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GeeWow, this was the longest chapter in this story, I suppose! It was full of action and emotions, I liked that.;D
I wonder, when Jamez will obtain his combined form? (if he ever will)
Anyways, nice job again!

cactar on January 1, 2008, 5:04:42 AM

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cactarThis chapter is very important with Jamez and your question will soon be answered.

Gee on January 1, 2008, 11:09:18 AM

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GeeGreat!;D I can't wait to see the next chapter!