Chapter 1 - Suicide:The victims that wish to be victims
Submitted October 3, 2006 Updated October 3, 2006 Status Incomplete | This is not a fanfic (for once...) It's a poem I wrote about suicide for health class last year. Just somethin' to post....kinda sad...but suicide isn't generally a happy thing....o well. Just read and comment!
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Chapter 1 - Suicide:The victims that wish to be victims
Chapter 1 - Suicide:The victims that wish to be victims
The victims that wish to be victims,
The innocent people they hurt,
Tore out their heart and soul,
And ground them into the dirt,
After they were done,
They left their love to grieve,
And carried out their plan,
To really, truly leave.
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Hope u like....I know, short....still, PLEASE COMMENT!
Just a little fact: Twice as many ppl die from suicide than homicide every year.
The innocent people they hurt,
Tore out their heart and soul,
And ground them into the dirt,
After they were done,
They left their love to grieve,
And carried out their plan,
To really, truly leave.
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Hope u like....I know, short....still, PLEASE COMMENT!
Just a little fact: Twice as many ppl die from suicide than homicide every year.
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NumaChoji on June 25, 2007, 4:03:01 AM
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awesome...u r my fanpower9x on June 7, 2007, 10:07:00 AM
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Awesome! That was a great poem. You're really good actually. Most stories I've read here are really, well, bad. Even my are okay. Though, that was great. [faves this]sflower250 on December 29, 2006, 1:45:13 PM
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woooow that was beautiful ^______^sisaTao on October 10, 2006, 9:13:08 AM
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Thats really good.^_^It's AWESOME!!=DDDD
Sasukesgirlfriend on October 9, 2006, 12:57:25 AM
goodxxCrashxTrashxx on October 3, 2006, 9:09:22 AM
Ehh the end is a bit edgy, but it's nice.