Chapter 1 - Ryuu
Submitted September 9, 2007 Updated September 9, 2007 Status Incomplete | ............something to let out the feelings of me and my friends.
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Chapter 1 - Ryuu
Chapter 1 - Ryuu
"She hates me. She hates me. She hates me." Were the words flowing into my mind as my brother told me the horrible news. The girl I had loved had not loved me back. My heart was torn into bits. I felt betrayed, lost, confuzed, and used.
"She had used me for items" I breathed to myself. I sat on the ground, my thoughts a whirlwind of confusion and hurt. Pain shot into my heart. I couldn't beleive it. I wouldn't believe it. Everything was blurry from tears.I wanted to scream. I wanted to die. And maybe, I could.
"She had used me for items" I breathed to myself. I sat on the ground, my thoughts a whirlwind of confusion and hurt. Pain shot into my heart. I couldn't beleive it. I wouldn't believe it. Everything was blurry from tears.I wanted to scream. I wanted to die. And maybe, I could.
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princessazarath on September 11, 2007, 10:44:39 AM
awsome, so dramatic, i like it very much, i wish it was longer though.........XxAnarKissedxX on September 9, 2007, 8:59:19 AM
Nice writing skills!I wish this was longer though...