Chapter 1 - the one and only
Submitted September 9, 2007 Updated September 9, 2007 Status Incomplete | .........a poem I wrote
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Chapter 1 - the one and only
Chapter 1 - the one and only
Like a rose wilting and dying
so feels my heart.
You trampled the most fragile
thing in my body,
and you didn't even know it.
I thought you felt the same for me,
you smiled, touched my arm, and stood up for me.
My spirits were lifted.
This was the first time anyone did this.
For a time, I felt beautiful
because you made me.
I never wanted to leave your side,
afraid I would lose you.
But then the reality hit:
you never felt the same.
I had been floating on a fake cloud.
You trampled the most fragile thing in my body,
and you didn't even know it.
so feels my heart.
You trampled the most fragile
thing in my body,
and you didn't even know it.
I thought you felt the same for me,
you smiled, touched my arm, and stood up for me.
My spirits were lifted.
This was the first time anyone did this.
For a time, I felt beautiful
because you made me.
I never wanted to leave your side,
afraid I would lose you.
But then the reality hit:
you never felt the same.
I had been floating on a fake cloud.
You trampled the most fragile thing in my body,
and you didn't even know it.
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Love2talk11 on September 21, 2007, 6:56:05 AM
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XxAnarKissedxX on September 9, 2007, 9:12:36 AM
Wow... this is really good!It was under recent stories, and at first I thought it was going to be another bad emo poem, but this is amazing!
I'm going to check your gallery for more work!
I might even add you to my faves list!
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also very well written....i can feel my own sadness flowing along with the words.