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Chapter 4 - The Red Snow Begins To Fall

yeah i got really bored so my story kind-of suck oohhhh weelll... enjoy!

Chapter 4 - The Red Snow Begins To Fall

Chapter 4 - The Red Snow Begins To Fall
Chapter 4: The Red Snow Begins To Fall

Ayame has had a hard life, and the future for her isn't going to hold much hope.Sky said

it all began that unfaithful day
(starts to snow)

Her brother was the only family she had left, because her parents died after she was born. He meant the world to her.

"Big brother." the sweet little girl said
he didn't repile, they were walking down a dark alley way with some thugs at the end of it. when they reached the end, he let go of Ayame's hand and she quickly ran behind him.

" I believe we had an agreement." he said

a man that was leaning against the alley way wall grabed Ayame by the wrist, and she tried to struggle free.

the other thugs slid out there katananas and killed the boy in seconds

"BBBRROOTTHHER!!" she scream as tears ran down the sides of her face.

The thug that was holding her spoke
"Your brother couldn't take care of you any longer so he payed us to take care of you unfortuanly he didn't have enough money so he payed with his life."
Ayame finally was realesed and then ran down the opening of the alley.
there stood a silver haired ninja.

Ayame ran right at the ninja he just held out his hands and she jumped into his arms. Her tears rubbed up against his green vest and stayed there.
The silver haired ninja finally spoke

"You are consider lower than scum"he said and then glared

Ayame just contiuned to cry so the ninja just put her down and ran at the thugs and repeatly kicked them in the stomach there was two thugs that layed on the ground and moanned while the other two thugs threw their katananas down and ran out of the alley.

Ayame saw the faces of the men running away she felt something wrong with her eyes she grabbed at them in pain. the silver haired ninja walk towards Ayame to see what was wrong, the sharigan eye shinned brightly.

She fell forwards toward the ninja and the pain seemed to melt away she shut her eyes.

when she awoke she found herself inside a cozy little house there was ramen and tea beside her bedside. she chowwed down and burped with satasfaction writen all over her face.

the ninja appaired out of no were and smiled at the little ayame.

"What's your name?"he said
"Ayame" she said
"Ayame it suits you"
"Mines Hatake Kakashi do you have any family to stay with?"

Ayame looked down at her empty bowl and had tears wealing in her eyes.

"You can stay here for the momment" he than patted Ayame on the head and blew out the lantern

"you should get some sleep." Kakashi said
Ayame's eyes grew heavey with sleep, the sounds outside grew louder and the footsteps cruched the leaves the door from outside that connected to Ayames room slowy slid open...

hahaha left u hanging again!^^

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rikusgirl55 on March 5, 2007, 9:23:35 AM

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rikusgirl55good chapter

MidNightWander on March 4, 2007, 1:21:07 AM

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MidNightWandersad,but well written, luv it C=

1mangalover on March 3, 2007, 5:42:33 AM

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1mangaloverthat was soooo cool! it was kinda sad too... but o well! your very good! please continue!!! -><-

AlleyCat17 on March 2, 2007, 5:26:54 AM

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AlleyCat17that was a nice chapter.