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Chapter 1 - jealousy?

this is my first ever spyro story

Chapter 1 - jealousy?

Chapter 1 - jealousy?
this is my first spyro story! yay!
(this one's got characters from "a heroes tail")

spyro was in dragon village. he was bored big time.
ember was in a tree talking to the birds.
spyro was just underneath that tree and he looked up.
"o no, not her, anyone but her!" he muttered.
ember saw spyro and glided down.
"hey spyro!" she smiled.
she is pretty, spyro said to himself
who were you talking to? he asked.
the birds! she answered.
o, right, well, i'll um, see ya later! and he quickly ran
the oposite way to stop ember seeing him blush.
ember shrugged and flew back up.
spyro went to see the professor.
hiya!
o, hello spyro! i have a new gadget!
uh-oh!
i'll tell you all about it!
no thanks! i'm um, i'm busy! yeah, busy!
o, well, i'll tell you about it later on
yeah if i'm here

spyro ran out before the professor could ask or say
anything else

on the way he bumped into sparx
hey sparx
hi spryro!
whatcha doin'?
looking for you
well you've found me!
yeah,
well, i'm going to see hunter you comin'?
yeah ok

they were on their way to see hunter
when spyro saw something.
it was ember and flame. they were playing in a waterfall
and to be honest, spyro was jealous.

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Triarii on January 15, 2006, 5:53:20 AM

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TriariiThis has potential but your presentation needs SERIOUS work. You need to do it mroe like this...

"This doesn't look good," said Cetril .

"Support's one the way, just hang in there," said a voice over the com.

The voice could only belong to captain Terent of the support frigate Kaal-Teaa, a vessel which had probably seen more combat than any other ship in the Kushan fleet despite never having fired it's weapons even once.

"Good to see you Kaal-Teaa," said Ront. "We need to dock immediately, we're low of fuel and have taken heavy damage."

See? That's how you set it out properly.