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Test Story

This story exists only to test stuff.

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - test One - Version 1a
Submitted: June 13, 2003 • Updated: June 13, 2003
Word count: 2293 • Size: 11k • Comments: 194 • views: 4616

Chapter 6 - Chapter the sixth
Submitted: August 12, 2006 • Updated: August 12, 2006
Word count: 59 • Size: <1k • Comments: 18 • views: 1478

Chapter 7 - dfgdfgdf
Submitted: April 1, 2008 • Updated: April 1, 2008
Word count: 38 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 793

Chapter 8 - asdasdasd
Submitted: April 1, 2008 • Updated: April 1, 2008
Word count: 38 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 759

Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
Submitted: April 27, 2009 • Updated: April 27, 2009
Word count: 1 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 601

Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
Submitted: April 27, 2009 • Updated: April 27, 2009
Word count: 1 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 611

Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
Submitted: April 27, 2009 • Updated: April 27, 2009
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Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
Submitted: April 27, 2009 • Updated: April 27, 2009
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Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
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Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
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Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
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Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
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Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
Submitted: April 27, 2009 • Updated: April 27, 2009
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Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
Submitted: April 27, 2009 • Updated: April 27, 2009
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Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
Submitted: April 27, 2009 • Updated: April 27, 2009
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Chapter 9 - sdsdfsdfsdf
Submitted: April 27, 2009 • Updated: April 27, 2009
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Chapter 10 - blah
Submitted: April 27, 2009 • Updated: April 27, 2009
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luckylace222 on December 10, 2012, 1:23:23 PM

luckylace222 on (Chapter: index)
luckylace222I love how this is in Popular Stories. You are a wonderful writer, Denis.

Strata should learn a thing or two from you. 

Takahashi2Oki on January 10, 2010, 8:10:22 AM

Takahashi2Oki on (Chapter: 1)
Takahashi2Oki
Such plot exposition, character depth. The epic of the century!

CreamandPoppufan166 on October 22, 2009, 4:42:11 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 1)
CreamandPoppufan166epic

ANIMATIONmaster on April 9, 2009, 5:29:47 AM

ANIMATIONmaster on (Chapter: index)
ANIMATIONmasterThis story is so great that I want to marry marry it and have a bunch of little Test Stories!

2cute2bu on January 2, 2009, 11:46:59 AM

2cute2bu on (Chapter: 8)
2cute2buAwwh, poor F...

He believed in Sdf and what did Sdf do?

Why don't you ask D, S and Sd!?

{I'm really fake crying.

o :

I'm too good at this.

8]}

2cute2bu on January 2, 2009, 11:39:00 AM

2cute2bu on (Chapter: 1)
2cute2bu-sniffle-






































Beautiful.

diva96 on December 24, 2008, 4:50:17 AM

diva96 on (Chapter: 8)
diva96is so sad!!!! Sdf was cheeting on F with D,S and Sd TT.TT

Neon_The_Battlehog on September 20, 2008, 6:48:21 AM

Neon_The_Battlehog on (Chapter: index)
Neon_The_BattlehogI had to stifle a tear near the end of that story. It was so beautiful, so captivating.

It brought me to my knees, shining like a brand new copper penny. It stands tall among the best, matching up with Iliad and Odessey.

Amazing.

Hikairi001 on March 22, 2007, 7:09:39 AM

Hikairi001 on (Chapter: 1)
Hikairi001I DARE SOMEBODY TO COUNT HOW MANY TIMES THAT SAYS TEST!!!!

homiez502 on May 26, 2008, 4:50:29 AM

homiez502 on (Chapter: 1)
homiez502there 2293

IQQT on March 31, 2007, 7:56:37 AM

IQQT on (Chapter: 1)
IQQTI counted 2,288!

lemony_chan on April 10, 2008, 10:34:19 AM

lemony_chan on (Chapter: index)
lemony_chanThat story painted the most beautifully deep potrait of human emotion I've seen so far. It was a godly one. *o* Metaphorically paintings of course . . .

cassydiddles on February 22, 2008, 5:06:34 AM

cassydiddles on (Chapter: 6)
cassydiddlesO M G!!! A distraction!!
*points up in the air wide eyed*

kyuubi64 on February 17, 2008, 1:50:31 AM

kyuubi64 on (Chapter: 1)
kyuubi64Best story in the whole world. It made me laugh, cry, and i kept me at the edge of my seat the whole time.
*faves*

FullMetalAlchemist18 on January 27, 2008, 10:14:24 AM

FullMetalAlchemist18 on (Chapter: 1)
FullMetalAlchemist18It's my most fav story of all time!

KisaraChan1 on December 28, 2007, 3:14:23 AM

KisaraChan1 on (Chapter: 6)
KisaraChan1... I dont Get it... BUT DUDE THAT WAS AWESOME!

KisaraChan1 on December 28, 2007, 3:12:58 AM

KisaraChan1 on (Chapter: 1)
KisaraChan1This was a beauiful story, wonderfully written. It has a strong and exiting begginig, a very Interesting middle, and a emotionaly beautiful ending! I have to faveorite it!

Starofwonder123 on December 6, 2007, 7:26:22 AM

Starofwonder123 on (Chapter: 6)
Starofwonder123....?

Sasukegurl on September 5, 2007, 8:55:35 AM

Sasukegurl on (Chapter: 1)
SasukegurlThis is so...Beautiful...*smiles and faves* XD

Starofwonder123 on December 6, 2007, 7:25:41 AM

Starofwonder123 on (Chapter: 1)
Starofwonder123But all it says is TEST!!

Diomondcookie9 on November 28, 2007, 8:37:55 AM

Diomondcookie9 on (Chapter: 6)
Diomondcookie9???? Where r u ppl finding this stuff?

Diomondcookie9 on November 28, 2007, 8:35:56 AM

Diomondcookie9 on (Chapter: 1)
Diomondcookie9Huh..................?

Starofwonder123 on November 26, 2007, 8:06:01 AM

Starofwonder123 on (Chapter: 6)
Starofwonder123Omigosh! I can't belive Ariel ate sabastain! MY BRAIN!!!

FAINT

Starofwonder123 on November 26, 2007, 8:04:39 AM

Starofwonder123 on (Chapter: 1)
Starofwonder123I don't understand?

gonemad on October 27, 2007, 9:51:45 AM

gonemad on (Chapter: 1)
gonemadgorgeous...
faves...

jackerah on June 29, 2007, 10:23:41 AM

jackerah on (Chapter: 6)
jackerahok i understand.

mew54 on June 13, 2007, 12:33:17 PM

mew54 on (Chapter: index)
mew54uh!? O _o

cstdenis on May 21, 2007, 4:39:08 PM

cstdenis on (Chapter: 6)
cstdenisa

cstdenis on May 21, 2007, 4:39:14 PM

cstdenis on (Chapter: 6)
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cstdenis on May 21, 2007, 4:39:23 PM

cstdenis on (Chapter: index)
cstdenisc

NarutoFanGirl on May 17, 2007, 12:48:28 PM

NarutoFanGirl on (Chapter: 1)
NarutoFanGirlO.o...my brain hurts now.































btw i counted close to 436769376239814538594755 Million.

kagome99 on May 6, 2007, 6:55:28 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 6)
kagome99O__oThat's creepy!

kagome99 on April 27, 2007, 4:52:16 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 1)
kagome99WOW!
favin for no reason.

Hikairi001 on March 22, 2007, 7:10:48 AM

Hikairi001 on (Chapter: 6)
Hikairi001MY BRAIN!!!!!!!!!*FAINTS*

PsycoCoffeeMug on March 15, 2007, 11:58:38 PM

PsycoCoffeeMug on (Chapter: 6)
PsycoCoffeeMugmy brain!!

HalOtacon on March 13, 2007, 5:26:45 AM

HalOtacon on (Chapter: 1)
HalOtaconGreat story, i liked it. Has a good plot, and i can imagine the setting very well.

FallOutGirlAARHinder on February 10, 2007, 10:06:56 AM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: 6)
FallOutGirlAARHinderWha?O_O I'm a bit lost

Sakura_Yasha on February 17, 2007, 6:20:07 AM

Sakura_Yasha on (Chapter: 6)
Sakura_Yashaits not a story. its to test the program out.

jackie4ever on January 27, 2007, 11:09:20 PM

jackie4ever on (Chapter: 6)
jackie4everwhere is it??O__O?

jackie4ever on January 27, 2007, 11:08:28 PM

jackie4ever on (Chapter: 1)
jackie4everwow nice program test.my computer does this often.

FallOutGirlAARHinder on January 6, 2007, 9:29:29 AM

FallOutGirlAARHinder on (Chapter: index)
FallOutGirlAARHinder*holds head* my head hurts.......and you sound like my boyfriend from school when he makes stories *headache from story* MY HEAD HURTS!!!!!!! i will never understand smart stuff

Sakura_Yasha on December 28, 2006, 2:44:35 PM

Sakura_Yasha on (Chapter: 1)
Sakura_Yashawow.........(faves for no reason and stupid funnyness)

Lurking_Shadow_Creature on November 16, 2006, 7:59:26 AM

Lurking_Shadow_Creature on (Chapter: 1)
Lurking_Shadow_CreatureOmg! Test tested Test to see if his twin brother Test would be TESTED! :O Write the seuqel!

Sasukesgirlfriend on November 10, 2006, 7:44:04 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 1)
Sasukesgirlfriend*laughs out of chair*
Was it supose to be like
that? xD

*dies from laughing*

IQQT on November 6, 2006, 9:15:40 AM

IQQT on (Chapter: index)
IQQTI LOVE THIS STORY!
*favs*

diva96 on November 3, 2006, 11:28:48 PM

diva96 on (Chapter: 1)
diva96I'M FAVIN THIS 4 NO RAISON!!! <-------- get it?

homiez502 on November 3, 2006, 10:52:26 PM

homiez502 on (Chapter: index)
homiez502*favs*

silverstream on November 1, 2006, 9:08:37 AM

silverstream on (Chapter: 1)
silverstreamThis is funny. ( i don't mean that offensively if u think it is.)

Mattkur on August 30, 2006, 3:29:58 AM

Mattkur on (Chapter: index)
MattkurSEQUAL! SEQUAL! SEQUAL!

Mattkur on August 30, 2006, 3:29:09 AM

Mattkur on (Chapter: 6)
MattkurThats the best chapter yet! I dont get why the dolphin ate the tiger for fish and then said "lalalala" because it liked eating the tiger.

Meisaroku on April 19, 2006, 9:32:20 AM

Meisaroku on (Chapter: 1)
MeisarokuO.O;;;;...wow....you must be bored....so are you the main admin of the site?

GreenNinja on August 25, 2006, 5:32:53 PM

GreenNinja on (Chapter: 1)
GreenNinjaIt boggles the mind.

inuyasha_naruto_lover on August 16, 2006, 8:56:47 AM

inuyasha_naruto_lover on (Chapter: 1)
inuyasha_naruto_loverdeep dude. deep

SoaringKitty on August 12, 2006, 8:34:14 AM

SoaringKitty on (Chapter: 6)
SoaringKittyYes! Chapter 6!

*Bows to the almighty Denis*

MCRchick25 on August 11, 2006, 4:28:08 AM

MCRchick25 on (Chapter: 3)
MCRchick25test! o test! how sweet! it just keeps getting better and better!

MCRchick25 on August 11, 2006, 4:23:25 AM

MCRchick25 on (Chapter: 2)
MCRchick25TYPO!!!!!!
yay they made up good job test im very proud
but then...
HOW COULD U DO THAT TO TESST TEST? WHY TEST WHY??? *slappers test* ha. awwww poor tesst *huggles tesst* there we go i bet u feel loads better now *pats him/her/it on the back and smiles caringly*
incredible story, one of my faves! u r soooooooooo creative!!!

MCRchick25 on August 11, 2006, 4:19:18 AM

MCRchick25 on (Chapter: 1)
MCRchick25thats... so touching... test, how could you? i thought u loved her!!!! *sobbing* WHY TEST???? WHYYYYYYYY????????????
haha... great story very moving
*faves just for the hell of it*

cstdenis on August 10, 2006, 10:55:37 AM

cstdenis on (Chapter: 1)
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cstdenis on August 10, 2006, 10:57:45 AM

cstdenis on (Chapter: 1)
cstdenisTest2

cstdenis on August 10, 2006, 10:36:51 AM

cstdenis on (Chapter: index)
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cstdenis on August 10, 2006, 10:38:52 AM

cstdenis on (Chapter: index)
cstdenisTest3

Ollie_is_da_bomb on July 23, 2006, 11:39:52 AM

Ollie_is_da_bomb on (Chapter: index)
Ollie_is_da_bombLOL!!!!! XD I LUVED IT!!! O_o How could Test do that to Test?? Test will pay!! XD *favs*

OIDB

Mattkur on July 22, 2006, 11:05:26 AM

Mattkur on (Chapter: index)
MattkurMORE!!! I LOVE THE PART WITH THE TRAFFIC CONE AND THE GERBIL AND THE TOOTHPASTE!!!!

Spardel on July 15, 2006, 3:47:05 AM

Spardel on (Chapter: 5)
SpardelOMG TEST IS PREGNENT!!!!???? It's sooo touching... *sniffsniff* *favs*

Spardel on July 15, 2006, 3:45:05 AM

Spardel on (Chapter: 4)
SpardelWow, that was amazing. :P *favs*

Spardel on July 15, 2006, 3:42:37 AM

Spardel on (Chapter: 3)
SpardelAnd the drama unfolds... This is a great story! Keep writing! xDDD *favs*

Spardel on July 15, 2006, 3:40:56 AM

Spardel on (Chapter: 2)
SpardelJeez, who cares about the typos... IT'S STILL AN AMAZING STORY!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE TEST KILLED TEST!! *favs and rides on flying toaster to the next chapter*

Spardel on July 15, 2006, 3:37:34 AM

Spardel on (Chapter: 1)
SpardelWow... that's really touching. TEST, HOW COULD YOU?????? *sobs* xD *favs for no reason*

Sam400 on July 11, 2006, 6:19:36 AM

Sam400 on (Chapter: 5)
Sam400So Test broke up with Test cuz Test ate Test`s Test and Mrs. Test wont take her Test cuz the excuse Test eating Test`s Test was getting old? aaahhhh... Headache...

Sam400 on July 11, 2006, 6:16:47 AM

Sam400 on (Chapter: 3)
Sam400How is it touching there is only the word test everywhere o.O

Sam400 on July 11, 2006, 6:14:23 AM

Sam400 on (Chapter: 2)
Sam400I saw something on there! It said Tesst!

sword_dragon on July 2, 2006, 6:45:08 PM

sword_dragon on (Chapter: index)
sword_dragonhehee love the story!!!! really tests ur readin skills!!!!!

bloodblackrose on July 1, 2006, 8:34:51 AM

bloodblackrose on (Chapter: 2)
bloodblackroseo my test i cant belave the test cat test can test talk test!@

KitsuneMina on June 18, 2006, 1:23:43 AM

KitsuneMina on (Chapter: index)
KitsuneMinaI agree with randy-phantom11.please change it back.

Sister-of-Melody on June 16, 2006, 11:03:59 AM

Sister-of-Melody on (Chapter: 3)
Sister-of-Melody... don't like to take tests but *throws snot & tear covered tissue over shoulder* Soooooooooo touching... *sobs* 

Ollie_is_da_bomb on June 2, 2006, 4:49:20 AM

Ollie_is_da_bomb on (Chapter: index)
Ollie_is_da_bombLOL!!! XD TEST!!! ^_^ Great job I luved it!! T'was very... touching... *sniff sniff* Like I said I luved it awesome job :D *favs*
 
OIDB

Cartoonz on May 31, 2006, 12:25:18 PM

Cartoonz on (Chapter: 3)
CartoonzWhoa- How could Joe betray Bob like that?! The detail is wonderful, please write more!

Cartoonz on May 31, 2006, 12:23:13 PM

Cartoonz on (Chapter: 1)
CartoonzOMG- that was amazing! xDD hurry up and write the next chapter; I really want to know what happens next! xDD
 
lol

anime-junkie on May 29, 2006, 6:36:03 PM

anime-junkie on (Chapter: 4)
anime-junkiei love this story ^-^

anime-junkie on May 29, 2006, 6:35:08 PM

anime-junkie on (Chapter: 3)
anime-junkie!oh the twist thickens!

anime-junkie on May 29, 2006, 6:33:57 PM

anime-junkie on (Chapter: 2)
anime-junkie!i saw the typo! OMG!! THIS STORY IS GREAT!! I CANT BELIEVE MARY KILLED BOB~

cstdenis on May 22, 2006, 11:04:11 AM

cstdenis on (Chapter: index)
cstdenisTest comment

randy-phantom11 on May 19, 2006, 8:17:00 PM

randy-phantom11 on (Chapter: index)
randy-phantom11hey dude i dont like the new fac plz change it back
 

Blaze_kun_Xon on May 15, 2006, 3:43:33 AM

Blaze_kun_Xon on (Chapter: 2)
Blaze_kun_XonOMG YOU MADE A TYPO! You wrote TESST somewhere. But other than that... OMG THAT'S SO INFINITELY AWESOME.

deshwitatlover on May 14, 2006, 5:41:23 AM

deshwitatlover on (Chapter: 3)
deshwitatloverOMG, that is so touching *sniff* sooooooooooooo much better than the fist one *throws tissue over shoulder in a pile that is invading my room*

Neawolf on May 13, 2006, 9:03:38 AM

Neawolf on (Chapter: 3)
Neawolf*sob* it's...so...touching, i didn't know...that was going to happen...such an unpridictable ending...test..*breaks down*

The_Kyo-Ki_Twins on May 11, 2006, 7:00:08 AM

The_Kyo-Ki_Twins on (Chapter: 1)
The_Kyo-Ki_TwinsOMG!!!!! THIS STORY TOUCHED MY HEART!! * sobs* It made me think back to the days ol' skipper my panda before he...passed on due to an unfortunate light bulb changing accident. now i must go and look back on the happy years.

White_Spirit on May 8, 2006, 1:59:37 AM

White_Spirit on (Chapter: 5)
White_SpiritMORE MORE MORE!

jeff_ooh_a_tree on April 23, 2006, 1:34:58 AM

jeff_ooh_a_tree on (Chapter: 1)
jeff_ooh_a_treeThats deep dude, real deep

Meisaroku on April 19, 2006, 9:34:00 AM

Meisaroku on (Chapter: 5)
Meisarokupure.................

















...........SPAM!!!! LOL

Meisaroku on April 19, 2006, 9:33:40 AM

Meisaroku on (Chapter: 3)
Meisaroku-_-;

Meisaroku on April 19, 2006, 9:33:18 AM

Meisaroku on (Chapter: 3)
Meisaroku-_-;

Meisaroku on April 19, 2006, 9:32:42 AM

Meisaroku on (Chapter: 2)
MeisarokuO_O

jamacainprincess on April 18, 2006, 1:16:17 PM

jamacainprincess on (Chapter: 5)
jamacainprincesswhat do u mean the season is gonna end soon! i wanna see what test did so bad he is going to jail..test didnt do it!! T_T

¢¾~T.O.O.L~¢¾

Hieis_lover_and_obsessor on April 15, 2006, 3:16:05 PM

Hieis_lover_and_obsessor on (Chapter: 5)
Hieis_lover_and_obsessorYour writiong ish teh beautiful!

Mattkur on April 14, 2006, 6:03:16 AM

Mattkur on (Chapter: 5)
MattkurSEQUAL!!!!!!!!!

BandO on April 11, 2006, 9:45:20 PM

BandO on (Chapter: 3)
BandOUmm. Nice!! :)

hirataitokyo on April 11, 2006, 1:08:38 PM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 4)
hirataitokyooh my god i loveed it yuo inspired me oh so much

hirataitokyo on April 11, 2006, 1:08:01 PM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 3)
hirataitokyooh mty god i almost dies laughing its soooo funny

hirataitokyo on April 11, 2006, 1:05:34 PM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 2)
hirataitokyoat the end i almost cried its beautiful ~rolls eyes~ lol

hirataitokyo on April 11, 2006, 1:04:29 PM

hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 1)
hirataitokyooh my god its like my most fave story ever write more its real good ur so creative... ... ... ...

yaoi_rules123 on April 8, 2006, 7:03:04 AM

yaoi_rules123 on (Chapter: 5)
yaoi_rules123oooookkkkkk......your wierd & wierd is GOOD in my books X3

yaoi_rules123 on April 8, 2006, 7:01:47 AM

yaoi_rules123 on (Chapter: 4)
yaoi_rules123hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!! soooooo funny i love this story

yaoi_rules123 on April 8, 2006, 6:59:01 AM

yaoi_rules123 on (Chapter: 2)
yaoi_rules123graet story but you should spell it right some times *shows spelling mistacks 'TESST TST'*

yaoi_rules123 on April 8, 2006, 6:56:38 AM

yaoi_rules123 on (Chapter: 1)
yaoi_rules123*laughs so hard i fall out of the set* that was sooo funny *faves*

StoryMaker on March 30, 2006, 11:07:35 AM

StoryMaker on (Chapter: 1)
StoryMakerit's dumb so for

vincybike2005 on March 25, 2006, 11:48:41 AM

vincybike2005 on (Chapter: 5)
vincybike2005omg its soo sad *sniff sniff* :P i cannot belive that test shoted test and he thot test was test's best friend NOO TEST@ i cannot belviev test shot test! WHY TEST WHYYY and test got pregent and her babys where eating!

vincybike2005 on March 25, 2006, 11:44:37 AM

vincybike2005 on (Chapter: 1)
vincybike2005omg i cannot belive test cheated on test and test didnt do anything! *smacks test and test* TEST AND TEST YOU TWO MAKE UP
XD *favs story*

bunny038 on March 23, 2006, 12:19:28 PM

bunny038 on (Chapter: 3)
bunny03822,880 "TEST"s... good job

akirahiwatari on March 18, 2006, 4:57:36 AM

akirahiwatari on (Chapter: 5)
akirahiwatari-_-ddd

jamacainprincess on March 16, 2006, 6:06:58 AM

jamacainprincess on (Chapter: 2)
jamacainprincessMe:i love this chapter so test killed test?

Jp:really i thought test killed test!

jamacainprincess on March 16, 2006, 6:05:46 AM

jamacainprincess on (Chapter: 3)
jamacainprincessTEST how could you! and i thought cheating with TEST was enough!

Huapua95 on March 14, 2006, 8:06:48 AM

Huapua95 on (Chapter: 4)
Huapua95hey guys he was just testing the title length and its not a story!
not to be mean but, you really need to know the difference between stories and testng!
And J.R.R.Tolkien writes better than J.K.Rowling, even though rowling ia a great auther.

SoaringKitty on March 13, 2006, 10:25:04 AM

SoaringKitty on (Chapter: 5)
SoaringKittyA beautiful ending to a beautiful story. We commend you as a unified community of internet freaks.

Storm_Dragon on March 8, 2006, 11:35:11 AM

Storm_Dragon on (Chapter: 3)
Storm_DragonOMFG THIS THING IS MAKING ME DIZZY!!!!!! when you scroll down... the test thing goes down too...but its supposed to go up... wait... now which way is up? and which way is down????

kngfoo2200 on March 6, 2006, 8:36:15 AM

kngfoo2200 on (Chapter: 5)
kngfoo2200...

kngfoo2200 on March 6, 2006, 8:35:39 AM

kngfoo2200 on (Chapter: 3)
kngfoo2200OMFG! First there's endless TESTs, now there's endless COMMENTS!!!!

SPAWNOFTHEFLAMES on March 5, 2006, 7:03:00 AM

SPAWNOFTHEFLAMES on (Chapter: 4)
SPAWNOFTHEFLAMESchibi-cinnamoroll you do know who cstdenis is dont you ? Cstdenis built the layout for this site, check the credits at the bottom of every page. This is a test to see if the layout works. So don't have a go at the site creators ok ? They have provided us with a great site to talk and exchanged art and stories! They kick @$$, and these are funny, so leave em be!

SPAWNOFTHEFLAMES on March 5, 2006, 6:43:04 AM

SPAWNOFTHEFLAMES on (Chapter: 2)
SPAWNOFTHEFLAMESDID ANYONE SEE THE MISTAKE! There was a TESST ! OH MY MO FOING GOD ! PLOT TWIST !

scribbled_image on February 25, 2006, 5:32:02 AM

scribbled_image on (Chapter: 3)
scribbled_imageThis story brought tears to my eyes and drove the demons away from my heart. I've been moved by this amazing piece of literacy. I cried so hard when TEST realized that TEST had been decieving her, and when TEST found out his mother was killed on the journey to the land of TEST.

ALL HAIL THIS STORY OF TEST! HUZZAH!

Neopetgirl on February 24, 2006, 3:21:43 PM

Neopetgirl on (Chapter: 5)
NeopetgirlAwww man it's over ~THE END~LOL I STILL LOVED IT!

Neopetgirl on February 24, 2006, 3:16:34 PM

Neopetgirl on (Chapter: 3)
NeopetgirlLOL!THAT MUST TAKE A WHILE!

Neopetgirl on February 24, 2006, 3:14:24 PM

Neopetgirl on (Chapter: 2)
NeopetgirlLOL I TOTTALLY LOVE THIS!ITS SO FUNNY!

ILovePepsiTwist on February 21, 2006, 3:48:27 PM

ILovePepsiTwist on (Chapter: 1)
ILovePepsiTwistOoooh, I wonder what this story is about 8D

*starts reading*





















*keels over from exhaustion*

X.X

VergilC on February 16, 2006, 2:01:48 PM

VergilC on (Chapter: 2)
VergilCokay I see something you spelt one with two "SS" in the line...anyways it says that you really do sit there and type for hours on end...you make me seem to be not the only one who types alot..hehe XD Gratitude!!

VergilC on February 16, 2006, 1:59:59 PM

VergilC on (Chapter: 1)
VergilCLike my GOD!! did you use paste a thousand times or did you actually sit and do that for an hour or two??? Makes me think OUCH!! finger twitching from tapping too long any ways fav all they way..hehe I can't get over the fact you did that....

GalaxyDancer on February 13, 2006, 10:58:14 PM

GalaxyDancer on (Chapter: 2)
GalaxyDancerOh and then you followed it with one without the "E" lol omg that's funny!

GalaxyDancer on February 13, 2006, 10:57:22 PM

GalaxyDancer on (Chapter: 2)
GalaxyDancerYou spelled one of them with a double "S" lol

FFXgirl on February 12, 2006, 9:57:45 AM

FFXgirl on (Chapter: 5)
FFXgirlLOL!!!!!!!!! PLEASE make more or I will shake you until you do!!!!!!

FFXgirl on February 12, 2006, 9:55:35 AM

FFXgirl on (Chapter: 4)
FFXgirlROFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!

FFXgirl on February 12, 2006, 9:54:01 AM

FFXgirl on (Chapter: 3)
FFXgirlIt gets funnier each time!!!!!! LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

FFXgirl on February 12, 2006, 9:51:49 AM

FFXgirl on (Chapter: 2)
FFXgirlOMG... This was funnier than the first!!!! That was GREAT!!!!

FFXgirl on February 12, 2006, 4:42:52 AM

FFXgirl on (Chapter: 1)
FFXgirlLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS Is hilarious!!!!! *favs* Oh and I took your dare Live Like You Mean It there is 161 comments not including mine.

Live_Like_You_Mean_It on February 10, 2006, 5:40:05 PM

Live_Like_You_Mean_It on (Chapter: 1)
Live_Like_You_Mean_ItI *DARE* Some-one to count how many comments have been made on this chapter o.O

Headywon on February 10, 2006, 10:18:29 AM

Headywon on (Chapter: 5)
HeadywonGAH THE WORD TEST IS COMING TO EAT ME AAAAAAAAA!!!! *hides behind a rock* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!

Headywon on February 10, 2006, 10:15:31 AM

Headywon on (Chapter: 1)
Headywon*zombifys from being hypnotised from looking at the word test too much* TEST.......TEST......TEST *drools* TEST.....TEST.....TEST.............

RockStar2005 on February 6, 2006, 9:03:07 AM

RockStar2005 on (Chapter: 1)
RockStar2005SO BEAUTIFUL!!! WAAAAH! *starts bawling* hee hee *starts twiching for no reason what so ever* i think i commented, im not sure with all these other comments *confused* well if i re-commented guess what!! *waves two fingers in the air like a complete idiot* tee hee did anyone get that?? oh well... *favs*

Living_Dead_Girl on February 6, 2006, 6:44:22 AM

Living_Dead_Girl on (Chapter: 5)
Living_Dead_GirlI love the new way you wrote this!! So awsome!! Don't let it end there *sniff* this is a great story

Living_Dead_Girl on February 6, 2006, 6:43:22 AM

Living_Dead_Girl on (Chapter: 4)
Living_Dead_GirlWOA!!! This ch was soooo funny!!! 0.0 chibi-cinnamoroll doesn't seem to want to have fun with these at all -_-

Living_Dead_Girl on February 6, 2006, 6:40:33 AM

Living_Dead_Girl on (Chapter: 3)
Living_Dead_GirlAWSOME!!! This is a beautiful story!!! This is my fav ch so far!! So great!!!

Living_Dead_Girl on February 6, 2006, 6:39:33 AM

Living_Dead_Girl on (Chapter: 2)
Living_Dead_GirlWOW!!!!! You are a great writer!! This one was even better than the first ch!! My fav part was when there was an extra S in TEST 0.0 That pary almost had me falling out of my chair!!

Living_Dead_Girl on February 6, 2006, 6:38:05 AM

Living_Dead_Girl on (Chapter: 1)
Living_Dead_GirlWOW!!! This is an awsome story!! Tis defidently going on my favs!!!

GothicfarieluvinJack on February 4, 2006, 7:54:29 PM

GothicfarieluvinJack on (Chapter: 5)
GothicfarieluvinJackThis... This story its soo moving! *Bursts out crying* wahahahahaa! I want to see the sequal... Whispers to friend "i heard the other storie is gonna be in another font, juisy or wat!" *faves* *sniffle*

ShamanQueen1101 on February 4, 2006, 10:47:45 AM

ShamanQueen1101 on (Chapter: 5)
ShamanQueen1101You must be tired of getting all the e-mails.

ShamanQueen1101 on February 4, 2006, 10:47:03 AM

ShamanQueen1101 on (Chapter: 4)
ShamanQueen1101The best yet...

ShamanQueen1101 on February 4, 2006, 10:45:54 AM

ShamanQueen1101 on (Chapter: 3)
ShamanQueen1101Man...I've been mentally touched by this story.....T___T

Shadow7 on January 24, 2006, 9:27:09 AM

Shadow7 on (Chapter: 5)
Shadow7*Dangerous music comes on*

"This story makes ya want more. And they came back with the 5th one."
-says New York Times

Rolling stone gives it,
"5 stars and 2 toes and thumbs up"
-Rolling Stone

"Another strong hit by cstdenis"
-Nova weekly says
Directed by, cstdenis....
*music reaches it's climax*
Test Story 5, Test the IV
This story is not yet reated

In theaters everywhere friday

Shadow7 on January 24, 2006, 9:18:45 AM

Shadow7 on (Chapter: 4)
Shadow7The guests from Supernova and Spotlight were very impressed with this one. They're agreed to sponrce you storys on every theater in the world.

Shadow7 on January 24, 2006, 9:08:31 AM

Shadow7 on (Chapter: 3)
Shadow7I called some of my folks from Supernova Studios and Spotlight Entertainment. They are currenty viewing the perivous chapters and will continue the story. They will be here and alittle bit.

Shadow7 on January 24, 2006, 9:03:43 AM

Shadow7 on (Chapter: 2)
Shadow7AHHHHH! TESTZILLA RETURNS!

Shadow7 on January 24, 2006, 9:00:46 AM

Shadow7 on (Chapter: 1)
Shadow7I can't believe it. I actually had a nightmare about this and I wet my pants when I read this.
Fear the TEST.
Currently reading chapter 2

Bladed_Shadow on January 22, 2006, 11:29:24 PM

Bladed_Shadow on (Chapter: 5)
Bladed_ShadowLets all show our support
test! test! test! test!

(both shouting support AND reciting the epic story with feeling)

KaiLover91 on January 21, 2006, 5:06:19 AM

KaiLover91 on (Chapter: 3)
KaiLover91ZOMG.

Subliminal messaging...

NJ_PUNK on January 15, 2006, 12:20:42 PM

NJ_PUNK on (Chapter: 1)
NJ_PUNKthat story truly touched me, eww stop it!

shinzolove on January 10, 2006, 10:02:46 AM

shinzolove on (Chapter: 3)
shinzolovehow long did it take u 2 write that???

shinzolove on January 10, 2006, 10:01:29 AM

shinzolove on (Chapter: 4)
shinzolovei couldnt have siad it better my self

shinzolove on January 10, 2006, 10:00:44 AM

shinzolove on (Chapter: 1)
shinzoloveomg this is just soooo *startes 2 tear up*kooool i mean why did test have 2 die waaaaa

Teen_Titans_Lynx on January 9, 2006, 6:11:50 AM

Teen_Titans_Lynx on (Chapter: 1)
Teen_Titans_LynxI LOVED the part where test said "test test test". That will go down in history as a quote, i'm sure. XD

Ultimate_Lifeform on January 7, 2006, 8:57:41 AM

Ultimate_Lifeform on (Chapter: 2)
Ultimate_Lifeformcommentcommentcommentcommecommentnt *deal with the mess up!!* *reapeats, infinitely*

moppythemagicalmopdog on January 2, 2006, 12:46:27 AM

moppythemagicalmopdog on (Chapter: 5)
moppythemagicalmopdogThis is by far my favourite chapter. Such gr8 ideas and suprises (although the paragraphs could be arranged better)

moppythemagicalmopdog on January 2, 2006, 12:44:50 AM

moppythemagicalmopdog on (Chapter: 4)
moppythemagicalmopdoghmmmm...The first three chapters were so excellent. But this one wasn't as good. But it was still quite good though!

moppythemagicalmopdog on January 2, 2006, 12:43:31 AM

moppythemagicalmopdog on (Chapter: 3)
moppythemagicalmopdogThis is such a good story! Great Characters and Settings keep it up (^.0)

moppythemagicalmopdog on January 2, 2006, 12:42:05 AM

moppythemagicalmopdog on (Chapter: 2)
moppythemagicalmopdogWOW! It just keeps getting better...

moppythemagicalmopdog on January 2, 2006, 12:40:45 AM

moppythemagicalmopdog on (Chapter: 1)
moppythemagicalmopdogWow! what an excellent story! Hehehe!

usagi_moon on December 27, 2005, 8:56:00 PM

usagi_moon on (Chapter: 5)
usagi_moonsimply facinating it is great

usagi_moon on December 27, 2005, 8:54:28 PM

usagi_moon on (Chapter: 3)
usagi_moonlol that is good

Fumouffu on December 26, 2005, 1:41:16 PM

Fumouffu on (Chapter: 5)
FumouffuSo, good! This is even better detailed then the other four. Leep up this fantastic detail! The characters are so lovely! Keep it up!!!

Fumouffu on December 26, 2005, 1:35:43 PM

Fumouffu on (Chapter: 4)
FumouffuThis is so good! The best title ever! This title is so heart warming I could tear up right now! I love it!

Fumouffu on December 26, 2005, 1:33:17 PM

Fumouffu on (Chapter: 3)
FumouffuHow do you keep doing this? The characters, settings, this is just fantastic! These details of your characters eyes water, it's so good! Keep up this great, great, great work!

Fumouffu on December 26, 2005, 1:29:42 PM

Fumouffu on (Chapter: 2)
FumouffuYes, the second chapter! Once again you blew me away! The description is completely awesome, I mean wow! And these characters are so... GOOD! Yes, very good! Keep up the VERY GOOD work!

Fumouffu on December 26, 2005, 1:28:29 PM

Fumouffu on (Chapter: 1)
FumouffuWow! I loved this story!!! The details are great and the characters description is completely awesome. The setting is so good that I can't even type it out right! Keep up the fantastic work!

usagi_moon on December 26, 2005, 3:50:22 AM

usagi_moon on (Chapter: 1)
usagi_moonthe best story *applawds* it is so deep

ShamanQueen1101 on December 24, 2005, 9:03:09 AM

ShamanQueen1101 on (Chapter: 5)
ShamanQueen1101very well described!!!your sensory words are very well written!!*sobs and blows nose* its a masterpiece!!!!

ShamanQueen1101 on December 24, 2005, 9:01:52 AM

ShamanQueen1101 on (Chapter: 4)
ShamanQueen1101this should totally be published!!^^

ShamanQueen1101 on December 24, 2005, 9:01:17 AM

ShamanQueen1101 on (Chapter: 3)
ShamanQueen1101the best yet!!!!

ShamanQueen1101 on December 24, 2005, 8:59:10 AM

ShamanQueen1101 on (Chapter: 1)
ShamanQueen1101I've been hypnotized!!>__

ShamanQueen1101 on December 24, 2005, 8:58:17 AM

ShamanQueen1101 on (Chapter: 2)
ShamanQueen1101ohh!! i found a word that says"tesst" instead of"test"

ShamanQueen1101 on December 24, 2005, 8:57:38 AM

ShamanQueen1101 on (Chapter: 2)
ShamanQueen1101hehe!! wow this story has touched my heart!!^^

amyrose12 on December 23, 2005, 12:50:40 PM

amyrose12 on (Chapter: 5)
amyrose12Omg! You must dontinue writing! This is BEAUTIFUL!!!

amyrose12 on December 23, 2005, 12:49:47 PM

amyrose12 on (Chapter: 4)
amyrose12This chapter is the BEST yet!

amyrose12 on December 23, 2005, 12:48:16 PM

amyrose12 on (Chapter: 3)
amyrose12OMG! It gets better each time!

amyrose12 on December 23, 2005, 12:47:15 PM

amyrose12 on (Chapter: 2)
amyrose12Yes! This is better than the first it's so.....inspiring!

amyrose12 on December 23, 2005, 12:45:34 PM

amyrose12 on (Chapter: 1)
amyrose12*cries* OMG! That was SO touching! WAAHHH!!! *Favs...heh heh...*

YumiIshiyama on December 23, 2005, 7:24:41 AM

YumiIshiyama on (Chapter: 5)
YumiIshiyamaTHESE STORIES TOUCH MY HEART CONTINUE WRIGHTING... *SOBS* *LOL* (FAVES)

YumiIshiyama on December 23, 2005, 7:22:37 AM

YumiIshiyama on (Chapter: 3)
YumiIshiyamaHA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA

EvilPie on December 22, 2005, 11:56:58 AM

EvilPie on (Chapter: 5)
EvilPiethis is like a totally new spin on test.

EvilPie on December 22, 2005, 11:56:16 AM

EvilPie on (Chapter: 3)
EvilPieit just keeps getting better.

EvilPie on December 22, 2005, 11:55:17 AM

EvilPie on (Chapter: 1)
EvilPieAWSOME!!!

EvilPie on December 22, 2005, 11:54:37 AM

EvilPie on (Chapter: 2)
EvilPieSWEET!!!

EvilPie on December 22, 2005, 11:52:50 AM

EvilPie on (Chapter: 4)
EvilPietruly a masterpiece.

len-lover on December 21, 2005, 7:00:10 AM

len-lover on (Chapter: 3)
len-loverhow...touching...*sniff* It has inspired me.... i like the part where it says:TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST..... I love it ....*falls over for no reason* *twitch*

_code_lyk_neopets_1_2_3_ on December 18, 2005, 9:40:58 PM

_code_lyk_neopets_1_2_3_ on (Chapter: 1)
_code_lyk_neopets_1_2_3_HEY YOU GAVE ME AN IDEA. IM GOING TO MAKE TESTING

_code_lyk_neopets_1_2_3_ on December 18, 2005, 9:37:31 PM

_code_lyk_neopets_1_2_3_ on (Chapter: 3)
_code_lyk_neopets_1_2_3_I read the chater. NOT

mikita_inugirl on December 18, 2005, 6:29:00 AM

mikita_inugirl on (Chapter: 5)
mikita_inugirl*Goes insane* TEST! TEST! TEST! (Hilarious btw)*Favs* and TEST!

mikita_inugirl on December 18, 2005, 6:27:57 AM

mikita_inugirl on (Chapter: 4)
mikita_inugirl... test.

mikita_inugirl on December 18, 2005, 6:27:32 AM

mikita_inugirl on (Chapter: 3)
mikita_inugirl*Smiley and insanely giggly* Teeeeeeeeeeeest...

mikita_inugirl on December 18, 2005, 6:26:46 AM

mikita_inugirl on (Chapter: 2)
mikita_inugirl*Dazed look on face* Test... Test...Test..

mikita_inugirl on December 18, 2005, 6:25:49 AM

mikita_inugirl on (Chapter: 1)
mikita_inugirlLOL! ^_^

Ultimate_Lifeform on December 16, 2005, 6:20:49 AM

Ultimate_Lifeform on (Chapter: 4)
Ultimate_Lifeformi loved the part with the tazer, an old guy wanting to take a bath, the pretty ballet person, fred's butt, and a soapstone carving instructer

Ultimate_Lifeform on December 16, 2005, 6:17:03 AM

Ultimate_Lifeform on (Chapter: 3)
Ultimate_Lifeformcreative. (un-enthusiastically) you shouldn't have. (really)

Ultimate_Lifeform on December 16, 2005, 6:11:52 AM

Ultimate_Lifeform on (Chapter: 1)
Ultimate_Lifeformwrite a sequal!!! please!!!!

Ultimate_Lifeform on December 16, 2005, 6:09:55 AM

Ultimate_Lifeform on (Chapter: 1)
Ultimate_Lifeformyou have inspired me!! I'm going to write a novel. the first chapter will be for you. it will be denis denis denis denis denis denis (100,002 more times)

Blue_Bubble on November 27, 2005, 8:57:59 AM

Blue_Bubble on (Chapter: 5)
Blue_Bubble*wipes tear from eye* so beautiful! *bursts in tears*

EDismine_23 on November 24, 2005, 2:13:52 PM

EDismine_23 on (Chapter: 1)
EDismine_23what is this for? Why did you make this?

IcySnow on November 23, 2005, 12:13:44 AM

IcySnow on (Chapter: 3)
IcySnowwow 58 scrolls...Awesome!

theWriter on November 21, 2005, 9:09:17 AM

theWriter on (Chapter: 1)
theWriterWow. The "test" has hypnotized me. Clever. It's like a matrix. Now I got the word "test" flashing down the screen of my brain. :)

Enchanted on November 16, 2005, 7:35:12 AM

Enchanted on (Chapter: 1)
EnchantedVery inciteful! Sorry...I just had to review, because I wanted to make my contribution to the most popular story of all. Funny thing is, in a couploe of years, I'm sure this will be analyzed for further meaning...

cptShort on November 15, 2005, 6:33:15 PM

cptShort on (Chapter: 5)
cptShortANOTHER CHAPTER!! I didn't think it would be seen in my lifetime! Truly, this work of art - no - this masterpiece is the most brilliant of all the stories on this site... So vibrant! So full of life!

You can feel the emotion leaking out of the computer screen. You can literally SEE it, fading through in a light and impossibly bright blue mist. A slight chill emnates from it, and yet is is soothing, soft with promises of sweetness brought on later in the story... a gentle feeling mist, though human senses can barely register it, the sensations being too intense.

This magnificent and magestic tale is truly astounding in the way it reaches towards the deepest regions of your mind, and holds you in its clutches until the end, when it will release you.

I applaud you, my friend and superior (on this site, anyway). Congratulations on your progress, and I shall await any further installments in eager anticipation. Your talent knows no bounds.

Dragon_Buster on November 11, 2005, 9:21:33 PM

Dragon_Buster on (Chapter: 5)
Dragon_BusterThis is a masterpiece of subtle-ness. All it says is "TEST". But there's a deeper meaning to all of this...though I'm not quite sure what it is. :)

sis on November 9, 2005, 5:00:22 AM

sis on (Chapter: 1)
sisbawhahahaha great job!^_^

Shattering_Light942 on November 1, 2005, 7:58:54 AM

Shattering_Light942 on (Chapter: 5)
Shattering_Light942O.o This is soooo wrong. XD

Bloooo on October 25, 2005, 5:17:12 AM

Bloooo on (Chapter: 5)
BlooooCoooowelll. (even though i hate tests) I've read the hole story and it is so coooowelll! Wish I was as gud as u.

Bloooo on October 25, 2005, 5:14:46 AM

Bloooo on (Chapter: 3)
BlooooP.S. How long did it take to do this?!

Bloooo on October 25, 2005, 5:13:04 AM

Bloooo on (Chapter: 3)
BlooooOh no. It's a test. I haven't studied! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SerraRaven on October 20, 2005, 8:03:48 PM

SerraRaven on (Chapter: 2)
SerraRavenSo many TESTs... My eyes cannot take it! AAARRGH!

SerraRaven on October 20, 2005, 8:01:50 PM

SerraRaven on (Chapter: 1)
SerraRavenLike, totally deep man.

tortor on October 15, 2005, 6:05:36 AM

tortor on (Chapter: 1)
tortorsexy.

angel_writer on October 14, 2005, 11:57:29 PM

angel_writer on (Chapter: 1)
angel_writerthis storie really inspired me^^ lol

Jani on October 14, 2005, 8:43:58 PM

Jani on (Chapter: 5)
Janioooh this is the most kickass story eva so touching,I luv the part where test gets pregnant with test,even tough she's actually a man...

SandTL2003 on October 14, 2005, 4:11:17 PM

SandTL2003 on (Chapter: 5)
SandTL2003Just what I needed. (a good laugh) and i don't think that you have lost any popularity. lol

NEVERBENORMAL on October 14, 2005, 5:53:21 AM

NEVERBENORMAL on (Chapter: 1)
NEVERBENORMALhehheh...duh duh duh...hey pleez tell me you used copy paste O_o

*falls over at boring thought of typing TEST 100000000000000 times over and over again*

but wow...hey you have pacience!!!

NEVERBENORMAL on October 14, 2005, 5:31:26 AM

NEVERBENORMAL on (Chapter: 5)
NEVERBENORMALheh...i luv how people comment this stuff its really funny!!!!!!

KISSarmy76 on October 12, 2005, 10:19:09 AM

KISSarmy76 on (Chapter: 5)
KISSarmy76I am so touched.

GIT-R-Done!

Honjetan on October 11, 2005, 11:02:01 AM

Honjetan on (Chapter: 1)
HonjetanDAMN man. Never have I ever seen so many comments.

Lanathae on October 3, 2005, 5:24:14 AM

Lanathae on (Chapter: 5)
Lanathae*sniff* this is so moving *cries* ^^

Katsuyuki on October 2, 2005, 3:42:32 PM

Katsuyuki on (Chapter: 5)
Katsuyuki(This made me cry.) Kira you're pathetic. (You were bawling and humming tears in my beer.) Those were onions. (Onions what onions)

Dragoon892 on October 1, 2005, 6:52:30 PM

Dragoon892 on (Chapter: 1)
Dragoon892Oh screw you guys, SCREW YOU! WTF? What The F*!? This is... SCREW YOU! ARGH WTF!? Screw, SCREW YOU! ....(Deep breath...)
I'll put my novel up in this beyotch and show you, I'LL SHOW YOU! SCREW YOU!

RickRaccoon on October 1, 2005, 12:16:08 AM

RickRaccoon on (Chapter: 1)
RickRaccoonnow this is one of those inspirational storys that might actually inspire someone. Rock on!

Arctic_Wolf_Angel on September 29, 2005, 6:03:00 AM

Arctic_Wolf_Angel on (Chapter: 5)
Arctic_Wolf_AngelLOL! ^ ^ all the story is "TEST"
thats acually funny...but the comments you've got are wierd O.o' yeah...

TsunachiSpiritHolder on September 26, 2005, 12:23:42 PM

TsunachiSpiritHolder on (Chapter: 5)
TsunachiSpiritHolderWTF is wronge with you ppl this is the greatest story of all time i shalt tellith meh friends of the bravory of TEST and they shalt read upon this wonderful masterpice of a story -nods- ay tis brilling with wonderfullness ^^

TsunachiSpiritHolder on September 26, 2005, 12:23:26 PM

TsunachiSpiritHolder on (Chapter: 5)
TsunachiSpiritHolderWTF is wronge with you ppl this is the greatest story of all time i shalt tellith meh friends of the bravory of TEST and they shlt read upon this wonderful masterpice of a story -nods- ay tis brilling with wonderfullness ^^

FATE_The_Pirate on September 17, 2005, 8:15:25 AM

FATE_The_Pirate on (Chapter: 1)
FATE_The_Pirateok you got my attention

Kurenai-Kaze on September 5, 2005, 12:38:25 PM

Kurenai-Kaze on (Chapter: 1)
Kurenai-Kaze*sniff sniff* some one give me a tissue....That's.....That's genious!!! You should win an award!!!

kai_hiwatari22 on September 2, 2005, 4:12:45 PM

kai_hiwatari22 on (Chapter: 5)
kai_hiwatari22;_; No more!!! plz *sobs* i cant take it!! *sniff* *sniff* you are a Pure Writer!!! i wish i could write and express the word TEST with all the emotion and wat not the way you do!

Teehee111 on August 31, 2005, 9:55:49 PM

Teehee111 on (Chapter: 5)
Teehee111*GASP* well, i'm happy for test... it's a shame about test tho..*sob* he was my favorite...

Teehee111 on August 31, 2005, 9:52:54 PM

Teehee111 on (Chapter: 4)
Teehee111NOOO!! what happened to the tests!!! now i'll never find out if test and test got back to gether... oh cheesey poofs...

Teehee111 on August 31, 2005, 9:51:16 PM

Teehee111 on (Chapter: 3)
Teehee111*GASP* So test and test are both having an affair!? theat's a shocking twist... test's evil twin is trying to kill him? but is test really going to jump off that cliff? GAH! I'm hooked more then ever!!

Teehee111 on August 31, 2005, 9:47:25 PM

Teehee111 on (Chapter: 2)
Teehee111Noo! bt, test would never do that to test, would he? and... and i thought the we'd got test figured out in the last chapter.... *sniff* and test's a homosidal maniac? that's not right! such a cliff hanger...

Teehee111 on August 31, 2005, 9:40:10 PM

Teehee111 on (Chapter: 1)
Teehee111Oh my Lord!!! That is the best and most touching story I have ever read!!! you should get it published.

SoaringKitty on August 25, 2005, 10:27:31 AM

SoaringKitty on (Chapter: 5)
SoaringKittyPS: Back by popular demand!

SoaringKitty on August 25, 2005, 10:26:51 AM

SoaringKitty on (Chapter: 5)
SoaringKittyI LOVE YOU! YOU MADE A 5th CHAPTER! YOU ARE GOD!!!

evilsnowball7 on August 22, 2005, 2:53:23 AM

evilsnowball7 on (Chapter: 5)
evilsnowball7that part at the end was really touching and i almost cried. ;_;

evilsnowball7 on August 22, 2005, 2:51:59 AM

evilsnowball7 on (Chapter: 4)
evilsnowball7Wow! awsome! i laughed, i cried, it cahnged my life. :p

DarkPeach on August 21, 2005, 3:11:18 PM

DarkPeach on (Chapter: 5)
DarkPeachwow... you are a genius cstdenis, pure genius. XD! lol!

IAMSHUGO on August 21, 2005, 3:55:34 AM

IAMSHUGO on (Chapter: 1)
IAMSHUGOBrilliant. o.o;

Catgirlrocks on August 19, 2005, 6:09:37 PM

Catgirlrocks on (Chapter: 5)
CatgirlrocksUm...Theres a new problem with the story thing....can you go cheack it out?Please+favs

CresentStar on August 17, 2005, 2:45:42 PM

CresentStar on (Chapter: 5)
CresentStardude i was seriously cryin at that one.....so deep dude do deep

CresentStar on August 17, 2005, 2:44:40 PM

CresentStar on (Chapter: 3)
CresentStarwow you must get tired doin all that

Black_Breeze on August 15, 2005, 12:28:46 PM

Black_Breeze on (Chapter: 5)
Black_BreezeHa ha... :D

hipeople on August 14, 2005, 7:38:59 AM

hipeople on (Chapter: 5)
hipeopleWEEEEE!!!I READ ALL OF THE STORY,TOO!Its totally awsome!lol!

hipeople on August 14, 2005, 7:15:37 AM

hipeople on (Chapter: 1)
hipeopleOMG!THIS TOTALLY BEATS MY STORY!!!BY A LOT!IT MADE ME LAUGH!IT MADE ME CRY!WHY TEST?!WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DIE?!*cries*Oh,and for the people who said it was stupid to comment on this,you commented,didn't you?

Gerudowolf on August 14, 2005, 12:17:49 AM

Gerudowolf on (Chapter: 5)
GerudowolfOMG I've read the whole story! I love it *favs* Wish i could write as good as you do ^-^

Danny_Fantom on August 11, 2005, 7:56:08 AM

Danny_Fantom on (Chapter: 1)
Danny_FantomI dont think ive seen the word test so many times before. u broke the record

Lychee on August 9, 2005, 8:34:33 PM

Lychee on (Chapter: 5)
Lycheei think you're loosing popularity mate...

zamnza on July 30, 2005, 8:16:03 AM

zamnza on (Chapter: 1)
zamnzaI liked the part when it said "TEST" that was cool!

Lillu55 on July 26, 2005, 3:04:08 PM

Lillu55 on (Chapter: 3)
Lillu55lol. wow. my eyes hurt from scrolling down. ... very nice i supose. i can see you put a lot of effort into this..... lol. anywho, way to go. i love it to death.

ladymartian21 on July 25, 2005, 10:55:07 AM

ladymartian21 on (Chapter: 1)
ladymartian21Holy Crap denis you are a GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is the best danm story I have EVER read!!!!!
favs

--LadyM.

SoaringKitty on July 19, 2005, 1:44:29 AM

SoaringKitty on (Chapter: 3)
SoaringKittyDude. You rock. There is absolutly no other way to put it.

SoaringKitty on July 19, 2005, 1:42:09 AM

SoaringKitty on (Chapter: 2)
SoaringKittyWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! *sniff* I've never been so touched. My heart throbs with pity for TEST. Such an aching heart. Shakespeare couldn't have done better himself. I praise you forevermore!

TheLittleGothofDisney on July 15, 2005, 3:24:20 PM

TheLittleGothofDisney on (Chapter: 1)
TheLittleGothofDisneyWat de?

Thisisreallymyusername on July 6, 2005, 4:19:49 AM

Thisisreallymyusername on (Chapter: 1)
ThisisreallymyusernameThat was Horrible what YEST did to TEST!!!*voice full of emotion* I'LL NEVER TRUST ANOUTHER TEST AGAIN!!! TEST sounds cute! i wanna hear more about TEST!!!^_^

sk8rchick131313 on July 1, 2005, 12:44:00 AM

sk8rchick131313 on (Chapter: 1)
sk8rchick131313its just sad that that many ppl added that many stupid comments on this TEST story! amazing

SkyetheHedgehog on June 29, 2005, 2:03:17 PM

SkyetheHedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
SkyetheHedgehogit's... different! i like it! how long did it take? o_o

SoaringKitty on June 29, 2005, 12:11:30 PM

SoaringKitty on (Chapter: 4)
SoaringKittyI've been inspired! SOL SOL SOL SOL SOL SOL SOL SOL
HIGHERSTANTARD HIGHERSTANTARD HIGHERSTANTARD HIGHERSTANTARD HIGHERSTANTARD HIGHERSTANTARD
You get the point.

cresentmoonsL-Z on June 28, 2005, 3:52:38 AM

cresentmoonsL-Z on (Chapter: 3)
cresentmoonsL-Zso yeah, I thought it was gonna be a never-ending story,lol

cresentmoonsL-Z on June 28, 2005, 3:50:56 AM

cresentmoonsL-Z on (Chapter: 2)
cresentmoonsL-Zlol. my god.... *__*

Tedman on June 25, 2005, 3:32:14 AM

Tedman on (Chapter: 1)
TedmanI feal... edlightened! I want to do something good for the planet, maybe write a book, or help hungry people. I want..to make a difference.

CN5 on June 22, 2005, 5:48:02 AM

CN5 on (Chapter: 4)
CN5wow. best story EVER!!!!!!!! going on faves 4 sure. you're gonna be famous 4 sure!!!!!

CN5 on June 22, 2005, 5:47:44 AM

CN5 on (Chapter: 4)
CN5wow. best story EVER!!!!!!!! going on faves 4 sure. you're gonna be famous 4 sure!!!!!

CN5 on June 22, 2005, 5:45:53 AM

CN5 on (Chapter: 3)
CN5wow.*sniff*the best story ever.

fireball on June 21, 2005, 7:39:28 AM

fireball on (Chapter: 4)
fireballtoo cool and long lol

fireball on June 21, 2005, 7:38:58 AM

fireball on (Chapter: 3)
fireballO.O

fireball on June 21, 2005, 7:37:48 AM

fireball on (Chapter: 2)
fireballlol

fireball on June 21, 2005, 7:36:31 AM

fireball on (Chapter: 1)
fireballso many words!? O.O but cool

orangemusicnote101614 on June 17, 2005, 12:34:09 AM

orangemusicnote101614 on (Chapter: 1)
orangemusicnote101614What's it for?

Darkdust_cookie on June 4, 2005, 6:04:22 AM

Darkdust_cookie on (Chapter: 4)
Darkdust_cookieI so want a sequal to this it would be sooo exciting ^o^ Ending with length was too cool
*I am so bored*

Dragon_Buster on June 3, 2005, 11:06:51 PM

Dragon_Buster on (Chapter: 1)
Dragon_BusterWell, remember the time when T found out that he could transform ito a gigantic 16-foot cucumber pickle? Or when S found a Mobile Suit called the Gundam Stooge and had to defend the world from his 2nd cousin on his mother's side from the planet Galbarokykazadee in the Kaklebatobba Galaxy, T?
I don't get it. :P

zefi on May 27, 2005, 4:03:25 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 4)
zefiindeed.it is long....with the t and the i and the l and the e....it was all too good

zefi on May 27, 2005, 4:01:18 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 3)
zefiOMG!!....so epic...*sniff* look at the crowd! *crowd is crying and clapping* so beautful this is indeed the best

zefi on May 27, 2005, 3:58:25 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 2)
zefi*hugs and kisses* IT'S TOO GOOD FOR WORDS!! *cries*

zefi on May 27, 2005, 3:53:54 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 1)
zefiOMG! that's beautiful!!! X_X +favs!! *CLAPS LOUDLY* ENCORE! ENCORE!

zefi on May 27, 2005, 3:53:37 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 1)
zefiOMG! that's beautiful!!! X_X +favs!! *CLAPS LOUDLY* ENCORE! ENCORE!

bek-ee on May 1, 2005, 5:47:37 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 1)
bek-eethats amazing! wow!

Kurama_Rose on April 17, 2005, 9:32:56 AM

Kurama_Rose on (Chapter: 4)
Kurama_Roseyou shold like win a nobel prize!!! lol

EnergizerBunny2fst4U on April 12, 2005, 1:21:36 PM

EnergizerBunny2fst4U on (Chapter: 4)
EnergizerBunny2fst4UThat story brought tears to my eyes man. Deep deep stuff. You should make a book.

Sesshomaru1111 on April 9, 2005, 7:37:46 AM

Sesshomaru1111 on (Chapter: 4)
Sesshomaru1111*sobs* thats soooo sad!!!! ,V_V,

Sesshomaru1111 on April 9, 2005, 7:37:44 AM

Sesshomaru1111 on (Chapter: 4)
Sesshomaru1111*sobs* thats soooo sad!!!! ,V_V,

Sesshomaru1111 on April 9, 2005, 7:37:44 AM

Sesshomaru1111 on (Chapter: 4)
Sesshomaru1111*sobs* thats soooo sad!!!! ,V_V,

Sesshomaru1111 on April 9, 2005, 7:37:43 AM

Sesshomaru1111 on (Chapter: 4)
Sesshomaru1111*sobs* thats soooo sad!!!! ,V_V,

Sesshomaru1111 on April 9, 2005, 7:37:43 AM

Sesshomaru1111 on (Chapter: 4)
Sesshomaru1111*sobs* thats soooo sad!!!! ,V_V,

Sesshomaru1111 on April 9, 2005, 7:37:33 AM

Sesshomaru1111 on (Chapter: 4)
Sesshomaru1111*sobs* thats soooo sad!!!! ,V_V,

Sesshomaru1111 on April 9, 2005, 7:35:06 AM

Sesshomaru1111 on (Chapter: 1)
Sesshomaru1111*gasp* you should win an academy award!!!!! *faves*

A11_ on April 2, 2005, 11:54:57 AM

A11_ on (Chapter: 2)
A11_why is there only the word TEST there? i think we got it!

A11_ on April 2, 2005, 11:52:58 AM

A11_ on (Chapter: 1)
A11_wtf?

Tabery_kyou on March 27, 2005, 11:32:58 AM

Tabery_kyou on (Chapter: 4)
Tabery_kyouO.o
I think this is my favorite out of all your stories^^
Its awsome..your should write more like this!
*ads this story to faves*
XD

Tabery_kyou on March 27, 2005, 11:31:44 AM

Tabery_kyou on (Chapter: 3)
Tabery_kyouwow...this is even better than the last...they just keep getting better an better =^.^=

Tabery_kyou on March 27, 2005, 11:29:16 AM

Tabery_kyou on (Chapter: 2)
Tabery_kyouO.o
Now this is your best yet!

Tabery_kyou on March 27, 2005, 11:28:34 AM

Tabery_kyou on (Chapter: 1)
Tabery_kyouGood story^^
But it wasnt as good as the first one though...

Tabery_kyou on March 27, 2005, 11:27:30 AM

Tabery_kyou on (Chapter: 1)
Tabery_kyou=*.*=
*cries*
That has to be the best story I have evr read!*SNIFF SNIFF*
XD

The_Insanity_Group on March 19, 2005, 7:07:17 AM

The_Insanity_Group on (Chapter: 4)
The_Insanity_GroupI love it

The_Insanity_Group on March 19, 2005, 7:06:43 AM

The_Insanity_Group on (Chapter: 3)
The_Insanity_Group*sniff* so beutiful

AngelKite on March 17, 2005, 12:05:08 PM

AngelKite on (Chapter: 3)
AngelKiteHA HA HA HA HA HA HA!O_O

AngelKite on March 17, 2005, 12:00:45 PM

AngelKite on (Chapter: 4)
AngelKiteThis is crazy, nuts,not the story,but the comments.
HAHAHAHAHAHAH!*FALLS OFF CHAIR LAUGHING*
Anyway,To the whole world:Please come and see my pics!!!

Necromancer_of_Death on March 12, 2005, 1:32:25 PM

Necromancer_of_Death on (Chapter: 4)
Necromancer_of_Death*sniffs* So touching. I love all the interesting plot twists!!

Kstar on March 11, 2005, 3:37:55 PM

Kstar on (Chapter: 3)
KstarOMG! That was so beautiful... *Cries* I cried myself to sleep thinking of this story. It brings beauty to the world!*Cries more* SO BEAUTIFUL!

greyhound on February 14, 2005, 2:53:30 AM

greyhound on (Chapter: 2)
greyhoundwow you must have a lot of patience to m,ake something like this =) and to be able to stand stupid comments like this of stupid artists like me XD

Sorrow on February 10, 2005, 12:49:39 AM

Sorrow on (Chapter: 4)
Sorrowlovley................truley

Sorrow on February 10, 2005, 12:49:02 AM

Sorrow on (Chapter: 3)
SorrowOMG as i sed *snifs* gripping, tragic and funny all in one *bows* you truley are the master, tis a wander this hasnt been published

Sorrow on February 10, 2005, 12:46:35 AM

Sorrow on (Chapter: 2)
SorrowOMG this sooo gripping i just cant believe it, its funny and touching

TidusLuver on February 8, 2005, 9:47:19 AM

TidusLuver on (Chapter: 4)
TidusLuverI LOVE IT!!! I MAY BE CRAZY BUT When I read it I cried my @$$ out! I love it!! *Adds to favs.*

^_^

sheyla on February 4, 2005, 10:27:56 PM

sheyla on (Chapter: 4)
sheylawow! you are really good!
do you take request? ^^

EnergizerBunny2fst4U on January 30, 2005, 1:30:32 PM

EnergizerBunny2fst4U on (Chapter: 4)
EnergizerBunny2fst4UIt's so beautiful I can almost touch it, but so far away. You write some deep stuff man, some deep stuff.

EnergizerBunny2fst4U on January 30, 2005, 1:28:12 PM

EnergizerBunny2fst4U on (Chapter: 3)
EnergizerBunny2fst4UTO MUCH... ah forget it. I give up. HAHAHAHAHA just kidding. I like the Test fanfic, it's really deep. You should be a professional poet.

EnergizerBunny2fst4U on January 30, 2005, 1:26:39 PM

EnergizerBunny2fst4U on (Chapter: 2)
EnergizerBunny2fst4UI've said it once and I'll say it again, TO MUCH TIME!

EnergizerBunny2fst4U on January 30, 2005, 1:25:44 PM

EnergizerBunny2fst4U on (Chapter: 1)
EnergizerBunny2fst4UWow you must have a lot of time on your hands. O.O'

Silvanis on January 27, 2005, 11:23:04 AM

Silvanis on (Chapter: 1)
SilvanisWow. That's a touching story! Anyway, could you please tell me how to upload a pic? I e-mailed, but I'm sure you are busy. I'd really appreciate it. *howls*

Kami_no_Tsubasa on January 26, 2005, 10:16:56 AM

Kami_no_Tsubasa on (Chapter: 1)
Kami_no_Tsubasawow ^ so many comments, maybe you should give it 2 john howard or sum pop ppl to look and read and ask questions!! ^^

Sorrow on January 25, 2005, 12:42:20 AM

Sorrow on (Chapter: 1)
Sorrowomg omg this should be published

Asj on January 23, 2005, 10:08:29 AM

Asj on (Chapter: 4)
Asjhe, he. I guess everyone just thinks it's cool... (including me.) Reading the comments is like reading a story though, they would take up just as much space!
When are you going to be done with testing and add something, though? You can count on everyone reading it. ^_^
...Just be sure you have a character in the story named "Test"!

lan_far on January 18, 2005, 8:01:28 AM

lan_far on (Chapter: 2)
lan_farYAY!POINTLESS THINGIES!

Lilith_SpiritOfTheNight on January 8, 2005, 9:28:57 AM

Lilith_SpiritOfTheNight on (Chapter: 4)
Lilith_SpiritOfTheNightI have no life I just read all the test chapters...I mean...FABULOUS WORK AGAIN! And I mean...you can not end the story here. What happens to T E S T? I MUST KNOW! *runs around in circles* I hate cliff hangers, really I do. Test should meet Exam and name their kid Analysis who later dates Experiment! MUAHAHAH! *I know, I know! Seek help. Geez, I’m just bored.*

Lilith_SpiritOfTheNight on January 8, 2005, 8:59:56 AM

Lilith_SpiritOfTheNight on (Chapter: 2)
Lilith_SpiritOfTheNightWow! It's like TWICE as good!!!!!!!

Lilith_SpiritOfTheNight on January 8, 2005, 8:57:05 AM

Lilith_SpiritOfTheNight on (Chapter: 1)
Lilith_SpiritOfTheNightOh yeah RingoChan? I think S and E should of fell in love!! hahaha! These comments ARE funny.

red_wolf_hiaro on January 7, 2005, 1:31:54 PM

red_wolf_hiaro on (Chapter: 4)
red_wolf_hiaroWhenever i try to load my storys they come out blank like no words or anything just the title. umm yeah the upload thing said to talk to u so i am could u help me?

Maylia_Intusha on December 28, 2004, 10:15:42 AM

Maylia_Intusha on (Chapter: 1)
Maylia_Intusha-looks at all the comments- Holy..-has a heart attack-

:o Damn. That's TOO hilarious!!!! XD

FOX_fan999 on December 8, 2004, 10:12:06 PM

FOX_fan999 on (Chapter: 4)
FOX_fan999post the words "testing for people who would read this" please

AnimeloverRachel on November 23, 2004, 12:21:44 PM

AnimeloverRachel on (Chapter: 4)
AnimeloverRacheluh-huh...odd but funny...Oh can I ask you a question? WHY DID YOU LET GODZILLA BACK ON?!!? If you look at some of his previous comments, though they've probably been deleted out of anger, you'll see what an idiot he is. sorry...I'm just mad...

K93200 on November 23, 2004, 7:14:44 AM

K93200 on (Chapter: 1)
K93200lol this funny who wrote it?

TailsFan on November 22, 2004, 8:45:07 AM

TailsFan on (Chapter: 3)
TailsFanThat's a lot of tests...

TailsFan on November 22, 2004, 8:44:04 AM

TailsFan on (Chapter: 2)
TailsFanNu-uh! The second one's much better!

TailsFan on November 22, 2004, 8:42:48 AM

TailsFan on (Chapter: 1)
TailsFanThere's a secret message in there, I just know it!

Fire_lotus_flower on November 19, 2004, 5:07:18 PM

Fire_lotus_flower on (Chapter: 1)
Fire_lotus_flowerIs this that game on that radio station where you give an answer and I give a question for that answer?

Q: What is a teacher's favorite thing to give students who sleep in class?

...hey...wait...I SLEEP IN CLASS!!! S***!!!!!!!

unfocused on October 25, 2004, 5:44:25 AM

unfocused on (Chapter: 1)
unfocusedSuch an epic story. LOTR, WATCH OUT!

Black_Breeze on October 24, 2004, 6:12:02 PM

Black_Breeze on (Chapter: 1)
Black_BreezeOh my god, this is like the most best story EVER! . . . Eh who am I kidding. It's funny though.

Rinii on October 24, 2004, 4:01:06 PM

Rinii on (Chapter: 4)
Riniiaaaaaaand back by popular demand... ok maybe not always so popular... the sequal!! so i'm guessin thats what it means when the name is in red... its someone important? hahaha i feel intelligent. Do i sense some hostility there? lol

Rinii on October 24, 2004, 3:49:40 PM

Rinii on (Chapter: 3)
Riniidid you know that if you scroll down continuously that it looks all wavy? haha

Rinii on October 24, 2004, 3:46:41 PM

Rinii on (Chapter: 2)
Riniilol o my crap thats a lot ^^ this chapter's even more dramatic !

Rinii on October 24, 2004, 3:44:41 PM

Rinii on (Chapter: 1)
RiniiHow will this epic end?! Who knows!! FInd out nExt time! haha notice, it says story only exists for test purposes only and yet people still read and comment... i mean hey, it got my attention ^^

scarlet_rain on October 21, 2004, 2:43:53 AM

scarlet_rain on (Chapter: 1)
scarlet_raini love this story!! lol

Meredianna on October 18, 2004, 10:04:32 PM

Meredianna on (Chapter: 1)
Meredianna:3 the test story ~ !!

Meredianna on October 18, 2004, 9:57:17 PM

Meredianna on (Chapter: 4)
Merediannaheheh..nice .. , i wonder whats next !? xD

Meredianna on October 18, 2004, 9:46:53 PM

Meredianna on (Chapter: 3)
MerediannaNow thats plot ! =D

Meredianna on October 18, 2004, 9:42:45 PM

Meredianna on (Chapter: 2)
MerediannaxD keep it up ! such a great story , @$$ kicking. , i never saw a story like it ever before, Unique !

Otaku-Kitsune on October 16, 2004, 10:41:03 PM

Otaku-Kitsune on (Chapter: 4)
Otaku-KitsuneUm... chibi-cinnamoroll, don't mean to be rude, but this is exactly what the title says: A test. Denis is just testing everything out. This isn't really meant for anyone's amusement (I think) but apparently it it anyway. And we eon't get in trouble if we don't comment. ^^;; That really makes no sense. ^^;; It's a TEST! And other people have no art....I think Denis is just to busy... I agree with cptShort really.... I don't like yelling at ppl.... ^^;; She's right. It's just for FUN! And don't comment if you don't like, kie? revalationdreams, I have a bone to pick with you too. I'm not being mean.... just.... ranting.... -_-;; You ppl are the ones being mean..... -_-;' And if you don't like it here, delete your account and go somewhere else, kie? Oh, and byeeeeeeee..... -_- PS Sorry Denis for just posting a big rant.... ^^;;

StrikeClaw on October 12, 2004, 9:08:39 PM

StrikeClaw on (Chapter: 2)
StrikeClawMy eyes hurt from looking at the screen. ow!

Rikus_Lover_MINE on September 27, 2004, 11:22:51 AM

Rikus_Lover_MINE on (Chapter: 4)
Rikus_Lover_MINEthats ur best one ever!!!! ^^

sooty on September 24, 2004, 3:44:54 AM

sooty on (Chapter: 4)
sootyHey!!!!! J.K Rowling is mah hero people!>:( But this is an Extreamly great story!!(favs)

sketch on September 22, 2004, 3:40:17 AM

sketch on (Chapter: 1)
sketchOMG CHOCOLATE!!!(!(!( that was the best thing ever! write more fo shooooo=|

DarkKrystal on September 15, 2004, 4:34:21 AM

DarkKrystal on (Chapter: 1)
DarkKrystalowww. i got pomegranite juice in me eye... -_<;

Katrina_Madd on September 11, 2004, 11:47:48 AM

Katrina_Madd on (Chapter: 1)
Katrina_MaddTEST!!! I'M IN EXAMS!!! TEST! ....Ok better forget it ^^U

ShadowGal50 on September 11, 2004, 6:08:33 AM

ShadowGal50 on (Chapter: 2)
ShadowGal50XD! me and Pandymonium luved this! it was so beautiful...i did not get it. lol! keep it up!

revalationdreams on September 8, 2004, 5:00:10 AM

revalationdreams on (Chapter: 4)
revalationdreamsdont be mean to chibi she right cuz this is a lod of stupid. if u must know im chibis big sis so stop being sik if u all wanna stick up to the manager then you can because this is just a shoot hole that u stick ur doodles on thnx animefreek 4 stickin up 4 me sis she is nice if u get used to her byeeeeeeeee

ShadowOfDarkness on September 3, 2004, 7:45:08 PM

ShadowOfDarkness on (Chapter: 1)
ShadowOfDarknessTEST!!!!! *runs around screaming* TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST TEST!!!!!!!! *bangs into a wall* AAAAAAH! *runs away screaming* TTTTEEEEEEEssssssttt.....

thunderhead on August 30, 2004, 7:24:28 AM

thunderhead on (Chapter: 2)
thunderheadLol! seems a little testy! lmao!;D

Nevermore_Raven on August 22, 2004, 7:03:23 AM

Nevermore_Raven on (Chapter: 4)
Nevermore_RavenIngenious.

cptShort on August 22, 2004, 7:02:20 AM

cptShort on (Chapter: 4)
cptShortchibi-cinamoroll, lets get some things strait here. First, I don't think we're supposed to curse at people. Second, 'we posted on this story so we wouldn't get in trouble', yeah, right, like we would get in trouble if we didn't comment, uh-huh, sure. That makes LOTS of sence. Third, the storys may not be funny to you, and probably aren't funny to anyone else either, but thats not the point. It's FUN to comment on stuff like this, and thats the funniest part of the story is the comments! If you don't like it, don't read it, it's that simple. And you REALLY don't need to complain about it, grumpy-pants. >.< 'Kay, thats all. :)

Nevermore_Raven on August 22, 2004, 7:02:09 AM

Nevermore_Raven on (Chapter: 3)
Nevermore_RavenNow THAT'S talent.

Nevermore_Raven on August 22, 2004, 7:01:12 AM

Nevermore_Raven on (Chapter: 2)
Nevermore_RavenEven deeper.

Nevermore_Raven on August 22, 2004, 7:00:35 AM

Nevermore_Raven on (Chapter: 1)
Nevermore_RavenHow very deep.

chibi-cinnamoroll on August 20, 2004, 6:07:43 PM

chibi-cinnamoroll on (Chapter: 4)
chibi-cinnamorollyour not even funny i mean all these chapters that just say test its just a load of shoot and now ive sed im gunna get flammed but do you see me caring no all these ppl just complimebted you because they dont wanna get into trobule and dennis you havent even done any art why dont you just write a big fracking TEST and stick on this shoot hole my arts not great but atleast i have art and their are other places i can stick my work thats not up ur fracking @$$

PuNkPoP on August 19, 2004, 12:07:04 PM

PuNkPoP on (Chapter: 3)
PuNkPoPWEEEEEEEE! BOMB!

PuNkPoP on August 19, 2004, 12:05:33 PM

PuNkPoP on (Chapter: 1)
PuNkPoP*cries* that was so pritty *sniff*

Animemastermillenium on August 19, 2004, 3:52:54 AM

Animemastermillenium on (Chapter: 1)
Animemastermillenium0.0awesommeeeeee storyyyyyyy.(^^)lets all bowdown to denis king of suits!!!*bows trying to get on denises nerves

LongJohnSilver on August 17, 2004, 10:28:48 PM

LongJohnSilver on (Chapter: 1)
LongJohnSilverwow...just... wow.... incredibly moving and very intense. you will go a long way my friend.lol

Isis_lily_rose on August 15, 2004, 7:09:54 AM

Isis_lily_rose on (Chapter: 3)
Isis_lily_roseOOOOOOOOooooooooo! LMFAO!! ^_^

Isis_lily_rose on August 15, 2004, 7:05:42 AM

Isis_lily_rose on (Chapter: 1)
Isis_lily_roseeven better than pbj time or 67 things to do in an elevator. eight thumbs up ^_~

japan_girl_168 on August 14, 2004, 10:14:16 AM

japan_girl_168 on (Chapter: 4)
japan_girl_168i was right! this is by far the best story i ever read!!!!

japan_girl_168 on August 14, 2004, 10:12:17 AM

japan_girl_168 on (Chapter: 1)
japan_girl_168this must be the best story i have ever seen!

HiEiChAnSaMa on August 12, 2004, 1:50:02 PM

HiEiChAnSaMa on (Chapter: 4)
HiEiChAnSaMaThat is just freaking tear jerking... beautiful! XD i love it!

ShadowGal50 on August 12, 2004, 1:11:12 AM

ShadowGal50 on (Chapter: 1)
ShadowGal50O_______________O o k.

^______________^

o________________________O

very scary. very very scary.


>_________________________<

can't look....IT BURNS!

Hearsegurl on August 10, 2004, 4:00:44 AM

Hearsegurl on (Chapter: 4)
HearsegurlGreat title and chapter! hehe
^_^

dark-fairy on August 9, 2004, 5:46:41 AM

dark-fairy on (Chapter: 1)
dark-fairy~sniff~ that was so touching so moving

Creep_bomb_target on August 4, 2004, 5:04:13 AM

Creep_bomb_target on (Chapter: 4)
Creep_bomb_targetthat was magical *holy music*I loved that

darkdesire on August 3, 2004, 7:19:20 AM

darkdesire on (Chapter: 1)
darkdesireOMG!!!It's so beautiful,so deep,so moving!!!It's such a wonderful piece of work!!!!You should get this published1!!

mandark on August 1, 2004, 1:37:21 AM

mandark on (Chapter: 1)
mandarkDenis the menes ...hm....watever.

shadow01010111 on July 25, 2004, 4:54:32 AM

shadow01010111 on (Chapter: 1)
shadow01010111THIS *sniff* IS THE MOST AMAZING STORY I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!! It gets me right here *bangs her fist on her chest* *tear*

lovegoddess on July 25, 2004, 1:59:58 AM

lovegoddess on (Chapter: 1)
lovegoddess*laughs histarically*
i don't get it.

Kimyo_Neko on July 21, 2004, 1:21:43 PM

Kimyo_Neko on (Chapter: 4)
Kimyo_NekoWow! I totally couldn't understand the plot until i read it for the 13th time ^^ Please update soon! I look forward to the future chapters because they kick arse! AN dhtey make me feel happy

Kimyo_Neko on July 21, 2004, 1:20:42 PM

Kimyo_Neko on (Chapter: 3)
Kimyo_NekoLMFAO! That was awesome!WOW! This story is so awesome!

Kimyo_Neko on July 21, 2004, 1:16:04 PM

Kimyo_Neko on (Chapter: 1)
Kimyo_NekoOmg! +to favs. That story made me soo....soo sad! I cried! -sobs- I hope Test tests the test! ^_^

Marik_and_Bakura_lover on July 20, 2004, 8:00:43 AM

Marik_and_Bakura_lover on (Chapter: 1)
Marik_and_Bakura_lovertest! AHHHHHH! tests are evil...

BespectacledChicken on July 20, 2004, 7:02:58 AM

BespectacledChicken on (Chapter: 4)
BespectacledChickenThis is.... so.. beautiful... Woah....I can also delete all the comments on this fourm. Howd that happen? oO

ShadowGal50 on July 18, 2004, 9:10:36 AM

ShadowGal50 on (Chapter: 1)
ShadowGal50ohhhhh yeah... this has got to be the most descriptive story ever... what a MARVELOUS plot.....

scarlet11 on July 15, 2004, 4:43:49 AM

scarlet11 on (Chapter: 1)
scarlet11hi. i just have to say, that was very deep. is that a true story? how sad.

mephisto on July 13, 2004, 2:52:26 PM

mephisto on (Chapter: 1)
mephistohi humanity

blood_and_death on July 10, 2004, 5:54:48 AM

blood_and_death on (Chapter: 3)
blood_and_deathwow, i loved your story, maybe i'll make some fanart for it ^^

DazedPink on July 7, 2004, 7:37:50 AM

DazedPink on (Chapter: 4)
DazedPinkomg the title SPEAKS to me! its so touching, u Denis are the new Tolkien for sure!! *bows*

GuMbY_tHe_WoLf on July 3, 2004, 2:05:52 PM

GuMbY_tHe_WoLf on (Chapter: 4)
GuMbY_tHe_WoLfI LOVE IT!!! its like....''just testing title length'' thats hot. love the story!

~kiss kiss~
GuMbY_tHe_WoLf

Ayekami on June 29, 2004, 10:22:09 AM

Ayekami on (Chapter: 1)
AyekamiWow...That truly was a very touching story it has completely changed my thoughts on things...mainly life. You have such a good way with words! This should be turned into a novel You should definately have a sequal to this it would be awesome. This made me cry its not ften that i cry but it was so good i cried there were funny parts but t wwas sad too. I enjoyed this story very much it is going on my favorites and i really cant wait for the next chapter of test...until then...p.s. this is definately one of the best stories on fac definately. You should have a trophy for this and a pat on the back *pats back* good job!

Rocketman_Gurl on June 28, 2004, 7:53:02 PM

Rocketman_Gurl on (Chapter: 3)
Rocketman_Gurlomg!!!!!! i love this story!!!! i laughed, i cried, it moved me bob.

RANDOM VEGGIE QUOTE!!!

man it's late...am hyper on many sugar based products!!!!!!

now i'm just being stupid.....

Mr_Spooky_Muffin on June 28, 2004, 4:39:41 PM

Mr_Spooky_Muffin on (Chapter: 1)
Mr_Spooky_Muffinbeautiful! *adds to favs*

Maroon005 on June 24, 2004, 12:12:10 PM

Maroon005 on (Chapter: 2)
Maroon005uhhhh..umm...okeyyy...words seem to fail me..cant think of anything to say

Maroon005 on June 24, 2004, 12:09:35 PM

Maroon005 on (Chapter: 1)
Maroon005wow soo facinating.. thank u for increasing my knowledge..really educational!
so many TESTS hurt your eyes.

jomama on June 23, 2004, 2:38:06 PM

jomama on (Chapter: 2)
jomama*sniff*...u touched my heart ;.;

jomama on June 23, 2004, 2:37:25 PM

jomama on (Chapter: 1)
jomamahow....very intresting...it's so...beautiful and emotional ;.;

YoYo_Xvd93 on June 23, 2004, 4:08:06 AM

YoYo_Xvd93 on (Chapter: 1)
YoYo_Xvd93lol FUNNY!!!

LadyoftheDeadlyDance on June 20, 2004, 9:52:54 AM

LadyoftheDeadlyDance on (Chapter: 1)
LadyoftheDeadlyDance*sniffle* That story was BOOTYFUL! *Cries* It tested the very boundaries of the human SOUL! Better than Tolstoy's War and Peace!...-cough-...

Weasel on June 11, 2004, 12:36:36 PM

Weasel on (Chapter: 4)
WeaselUhm, the thing is, shaku, ANYONE can write better than J.K. Rowling. >_< Yuck.
Dude, this is on my faves. Like, seriously.

shaku on June 11, 2004, 6:36:35 AM

shaku on (Chapter: 4)
shakuI've never thought anyone could write better stories than J. K. Rowling, but,somehow, you managed to do so.....

cheesey_squeezey on June 10, 2004, 10:16:36 AM

cheesey_squeezey on (Chapter: 4)
cheesey_squeezeyWow. The title is so long and it just makes you want to jump into the story. It's so amazing.

Rei-chan on June 9, 2004, 8:49:55 PM

Rei-chan on (Chapter: 1)
Rei-chanomg...wat a long story here! haha...nice attempt for trying a so-long story! nice..nice...(saying pointless stuff but anyway,it's funny).... =^__^=

cptShort on June 8, 2004, 3:58:52 PM

cptShort on (Chapter: 4)
cptShortIts not the plot so much as the title. It really describes the story quite accuratly.

ren_fan on June 8, 2004, 10:09:47 AM

ren_fan on (Chapter: 4)
ren_fanIt must take you such a long time to think up such a complicated plot! I commend you!

ren_fan on June 8, 2004, 10:09:25 AM

ren_fan on (Chapter: 3)
ren_fanHow do you write like this?? You're the best author on here!

ren_fan on June 8, 2004, 10:08:18 AM

ren_fan on (Chapter: 2)
ren_fanEven better than the first chapter! This is the best story ever!!!

ren_fan on June 8, 2004, 10:05:52 AM

ren_fan on (Chapter: 1)
ren_fanMy god. What an idiot mithrandiljon is. they just did that on the admin story!! LOL. Stupidest thing to do. I commend you for your stupidity mithrandiljon.

By the way, this story is the most amazing thing I've ever read!!!

Ultima_Sephiroth on June 3, 2004, 11:30:57 AM

Ultima_Sephiroth on (Chapter: 3)
Ultima_SephirothOMFG!!!!!!!!! THE BEST STORY EVER!!!!! PUBLISH IT!!!!!!

chaoscontrolmage on June 1, 2004, 7:54:52 AM

chaoscontrolmage on (Chapter: 3)
chaoscontrolmage*crys 300 oceans*

chaoscontrolmage on June 1, 2004, 7:53:32 AM

chaoscontrolmage on (Chapter: 2)
chaoscontrolmageI was just........ Touched by this story.........

DarkDude on May 30, 2004, 11:35:45 PM

DarkDude on (Chapter: 4)
DarkDudeWOW so cool!!!!!

cptShort on May 28, 2004, 1:29:09 PM

cptShort on (Chapter: 3)
cptShortBTW, encore!

cptShort on May 28, 2004, 1:27:55 PM

cptShort on (Chapter: 4)
cptShortSomehow, I thought so.You should post some art cstdenis, I'm seriuse (<- however you spell that. :P).PLEASE? And by the way, do you actually read these?

cptShort on May 28, 2004, 1:24:13 PM

cptShort on (Chapter: 3)
cptShortif you keep scrolling down, you get hypnotised.

cptShort on May 28, 2004, 1:22:10 PM

cptShort on (Chapter: 2)
cptShortWow cstdenis, you really have a way with your word.

cptShort on May 28, 2004, 1:19:47 PM

cptShort on (Chapter: 1)
cptShortlol, I'm officially crazy. I'm commenting on a TEST! everyone who posted here or will post here should talk to 'test'. Really, their personality is as moving as this story.

Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fan on May 24, 2004, 2:38:25 PM

Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fan on (Chapter: 4)
Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fanthats awsome totally awsome

Mondo on May 21, 2004, 10:13:01 AM

Mondo on (Chapter: 3)
Mondolamo awight~!~~!

Niriian on May 20, 2004, 8:22:16 AM

Niriian on (Chapter: 1)
NiriianOh my god... I never cry during stories but, this was so touching... XDD I need a hug! +favs

EvilLiLSkater on May 20, 2004, 2:48:48 AM

EvilLiLSkater on (Chapter: 3)
EvilLiLSkaterHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA nice story u write really good lol

Fairygirly on May 18, 2004, 1:09:38 PM

Fairygirly on (Chapter: 3)
FairygirlyMy gosh! I envy your writing skills! You write WAY better than me! *sob* I'll never be able to write like you....

Mouse-chan on May 16, 2004, 10:38:50 AM

Mouse-chan on (Chapter: 3)
Mouse-chan((sarcasticlly)) Wow, so good, I cried at the end!....... har, har, very funny. How ever did you come up with that idea?

CrimsonDrips_XX on May 15, 2004, 11:22:50 AM

CrimsonDrips_XX on (Chapter: 1)
CrimsonDrips_XXomfg!!! why test why??? omg that story was soooo touching i think i'm gonna die!!!!!
*dies*

*super favs*

rachey on May 13, 2004, 8:55:27 AM

rachey on (Chapter: 1)
rachey*sniif* this story made me laugh and and cry and realize that I have no life because Im commenting on a test story!

Ban_Boredom on May 9, 2004, 8:52:11 AM

Ban_Boredom on (Chapter: 1)
Ban_Boredom-cries- wow that made me a better person... thank you so much. [lol]

Alexandra-chan on May 7, 2004, 4:45:38 PM

Alexandra-chan on (Chapter: 1)
Alexandra-chan"sob'. This was a truly wonderful,tragic and loving story.You have truly moved me (lolz ^^).

Papercut_Dragon on May 4, 2004, 3:24:03 PM

Papercut_Dragon on (Chapter: 3)
Papercut_Dragon......why would you spend all that time writing out the word "test"..........? Even if it was copy/paste.... that's a lot of effort right there..... Well, I hope you had fun writing it....

MerxinLava on May 2, 2004, 9:02:24 AM

MerxinLava on (Chapter: 1)
MerxinLavaso in the end it was all just test?! THAT'S SO SAD!!

*adds to favs* :)

Garfield on April 24, 2004, 11:34:55 AM

Garfield on (Chapter: 1)
GarfieldO.o thats really long!!!*+2 fav

Powtaz on April 22, 2004, 12:27:34 AM

Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
Powtazthat story touched my heart. im addin it to my favs.

cstdenis on April 20, 2004, 11:53:51 AM

cstdenis on (Chapter: 1)
cstdenisTHIS IS NOT A TECH SUPPORT FORUM. GO TO THE FORUMS TO ASK THAT KINDA QUESTION

Juli on April 16, 2004, 3:32:32 PM

Juli on (Chapter: 2)
Juliinsanity to the poitn of hilarity! LOL

Juli on April 16, 2004, 3:31:58 PM

Juli on (Chapter: 1)
JuliIt's really weird how so many people comment on this! LOL but you are the god of this site. Weirdness!

Tabery on April 15, 2004, 3:25:31 PM

Tabery on (Chapter: 3)
Taberywow! thats the best chapter yet!
write more!
*ads to favorite authors* yay!

Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fan on April 14, 2004, 1:44:16 AM

Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fan on (Chapter: 3)
Cloud_Strife_Biggest_FanI think I see a face too it looks like this T.T

Inu-Tasha on April 13, 2004, 11:41:02 AM

Inu-Tasha on (Chapter: 3)
Inu-Tashaiswear i see a face in that :o(

MANGA_ANIME_FREAK on April 12, 2004, 8:35:17 PM

MANGA_ANIME_FREAK on (Chapter: 3)
MANGA_ANIME_FREAKWith all the Tests that could be, it makes me almost want to study... almost

Siyengo on April 11, 2004, 10:13:18 PM

Siyengo on (Chapter: 3)
SiyengoThe story was very interesting, but your style, in the end, was the true victor... XD, reviewing this was a waste of time. I'm proud of myself.

Siyengo on April 11, 2004, 10:11:30 PM

Siyengo on (Chapter: 2)
SiyengoYour skill astounds me.

Siyengo on April 11, 2004, 10:10:24 PM

Siyengo on (Chapter: 1)
SiyengoA profoundly moving comment. The subtle repetition provides a strong underlying metaphor, directly linked to the meaningful and contemporary theme of... TEST TEST TEST

~Siyengo

PS - I would like to purchase the movie rights to this splendid story, but I fear that I lack the funding...

ZipperDollys on April 8, 2004, 2:36:19 PM

ZipperDollys on (Chapter: 3)
ZipperDollysAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!! PLEASE GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!NO MORE TESTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NONONOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ZipperDollys on April 8, 2004, 2:35:15 PM

ZipperDollys on (Chapter: 2)
ZipperDollysgreat scott! thats scary!

ZipperDollys on April 8, 2004, 2:33:32 PM

ZipperDollys on (Chapter: 1)
ZipperDollyshee hee thats kinda scary at the end tho.........

Hearsegurl on April 8, 2004, 12:22:13 AM

Hearsegurl on (Chapter: 3)
Hearsegurl*Add the Master to my favs*

Shadow-Phantasm on April 7, 2004, 7:35:28 PM

Shadow-Phantasm on (Chapter: 1)
Shadow-Phantasmthis is the most moving story I have EVER read...XD

Hearsegurl on April 6, 2004, 9:09:19 PM

Hearsegurl on (Chapter: 1)
HearsegurlI will be anticipating the next chapter! Cstdenis IS god!!!!!!*;D

foltzfarm on April 6, 2004, 4:33:56 AM

foltzfarm on (Chapter: 1)
foltzfarmWOWS!!! I wish I could writes that good!!! *that wasn't a sarcastic comment either!!!*^-^

Meredisu on April 4, 2004, 9:11:23 AM

Meredisu on (Chapter: 1)
MeredisuWow! o_o! One of the better stories i've read here on FC. Amazing! It's goin in meh favs! XD ;)

DarkDude on April 2, 2004, 5:21:35 PM

DarkDude on (Chapter: 1)
DarkDudethat was....*sniff**sniff* the best thing ever! *snif**tear*

tsumari-su on March 27, 2004, 10:30:49 AM

tsumari-su on (Chapter: 1)
tsumari-suUh.....theres not gonna be a test on this is there...cuz, I didn't take any notes...--b

duperando on March 25, 2004, 5:27:39 PM

duperando on (Chapter: 2)
duperandowow.. I really like the plot developement in this chapter. I like how your character TEST seems to grow and his character begins to improve. I must say, this is pretty well written, but I would suggest that you separate it in to paragraphs that make sense. *chomps on a muffin* Jolly good.

ratbrat on March 20, 2004, 10:34:39 AM

ratbrat on (Chapter: 3)
ratbratall i ahve to say is:survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey survey

XxFadedDreamxX on March 19, 2004, 4:11:25 PM

XxFadedDreamxX on (Chapter: 3)
XxFadedDreamxXSo dang wonderful! It brings tears to my eyes! Anyone got a tissue?

XxFadedDreamxX on March 19, 2004, 4:10:19 PM

XxFadedDreamxX on (Chapter: 2)
XxFadedDreamxX-is speachless-

XxFadedDreamxX on March 19, 2004, 4:09:22 PM

XxFadedDreamxX on (Chapter: 1)
XxFadedDreamxXOMIGOSH! I love it! Itwas so deep! Your reallt in touch with you feelings! ;-;

RoseDagger on March 18, 2004, 12:58:35 PM

RoseDagger on (Chapter: 3)
RoseDaggercaptured my heart with the T and the E and the S and the T i cried when S went int a coma....
*sniffle*
You are the best!

Ifrit-YoukaiSei on March 15, 2004, 6:15:46 PM

Ifrit-YoukaiSei on (Chapter: 1)
Ifrit-YoukaiSeiOMG!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!! *Sniff* I like so cried when Test fell in love with Test but Test didn't love Test back! THAT WAS SO SAD!!!!! *burst into tears*

KeywielderofHollowBastion on March 15, 2004, 1:33:11 PM

KeywielderofHollowBastion on (Chapter: 3)
KeywielderofHollowBastionit's beautiful. Even the part of the car chase. When shecried out his name, it echoes in my mind. *sniffle* but when he dies from severe pokes, i cried. Really hard. Please, write more!

alice_kazetsuya on March 15, 2004, 3:57:07 AM

alice_kazetsuya on (Chapter: 3)
alice_kazetsuyaNo I don't want to do a test today its to stressful its a monday for crying out loud you cant make me stay back or else I'll jumo from this stool here I ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ouch

Busiris on March 12, 2004, 2:05:32 PM

Busiris on (Chapter: 1)
Busiris"There is 2,288 of TEST how I found that out? Well you'll just have to read it!"

how? its called multiplication....count the vertical first row TIMES the horizontal first row

cheesey_squeezey on March 9, 2004, 9:45:27 AM

cheesey_squeezey on (Chapter: 3)
cheesey_squeezeyWow! Ever think of publishing it? Just when you think it ends it keeps on going.

Borrowed_Wish on March 7, 2004, 4:11:40 AM

Borrowed_Wish on (Chapter: 1)
Borrowed_Wishwow....so...moving...
in fact, it almost moved me right out the the room! hehe ^.^

Killua_Bakura on March 6, 2004, 6:00:51 PM

Killua_Bakura on (Chapter: 3)
Killua_BakuraI love all the beautiful language you put into this truely wonderful and moving story. The love, the fear, the hate, the treachery!!! All there!!! It's absolutely lovely!!!

yuyuyasha33 on February 28, 2004, 7:09:11 AM

yuyuyasha33 on (Chapter: 1)
yuyuyasha33I'm glad you have a good sense of humor...
-_-'''''''''''''

Kung_Fu_Princess on February 26, 2004, 3:44:24 AM

Kung_Fu_Princess on (Chapter: 3)
Kung_Fu_PrincessI almost forgot MORE MORE MORE!

Kung_Fu_Princess on February 26, 2004, 3:43:48 AM

Kung_Fu_Princess on (Chapter: 3)
Kung_Fu_PrincessI love it all so much!

Kung_Fu_Princess on February 26, 2004, 3:43:20 AM

Kung_Fu_Princess on (Chapter: 2)
Kung_Fu_Princessthis is like all that and a bag of pink!

Kung_Fu_Princess on February 26, 2004, 3:42:45 AM

Kung_Fu_Princess on (Chapter: 1)
Kung_Fu_PrincessLOL thats so good its the best thing that happened to me since pink!

Ocean_Star on February 25, 2004, 8:27:06 PM

Ocean_Star on (Chapter: 3)
Ocean_StarWOOOOOW thats was relly long and really hard but I counted and there is 22,880 TEST! A new record again again!

Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fan on February 25, 2004, 11:42:33 AM

Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fan on (Chapter: 3)
Cloud_Strife_Biggest_FanThat was soooo beautiful the pain the horror its like music to my hears TEST...TEST!

xWildfirEx on February 25, 2004, 8:20:32 AM

xWildfirEx on (Chapter: 3)
xWildfirExWow, I wonder what the topic is. I'd like this to be part of my literacy test... Wait, I wouldn't know what the frack the genre is...

Sakura_Sagara on February 25, 2004, 6:22:10 AM

Sakura_Sagara on (Chapter: 3)
Sakura_Sagara*cries* that was beautiful... damn... *sniffling* so emotional...

Collen on February 25, 2004, 12:56:31 AM

Collen on (Chapter: 3)
Collenfalls down laughing* That's great! Sniff* So beatuful :) are you going to continue? Sniff* sighs* beautiful......

Ocean_Star on February 24, 2004, 4:20:12 PM

Ocean_Star on (Chapter: 2)
Ocean_StarHe is right this one is much longer there is 4576 TEST! Man I need a life keep up the good work and make another one!

Ocean_Star on February 24, 2004, 4:18:19 PM

Ocean_Star on (Chapter: 1)
Ocean_StarThere is 2,288 of TEST how I found that out? Well you'll just have to read it!

alice_kazetsuya on February 24, 2004, 4:14:40 PM

alice_kazetsuya on (Chapter: 2)
alice_kazetsuyaI agree with everyone else make another one!

alice_kazetsuya on February 24, 2004, 4:14:13 PM

alice_kazetsuya on (Chapter: 1)
alice_kazetsuyaI thought it was really sad when he was all like TEST TEST it was so how can I say it Test?

DrewGardner on February 21, 2004, 9:38:40 PM

DrewGardner on (Chapter: 1)
DrewGardnerLet me guess, this is a test to see which of the smartass members of FanartCentral will leave a sarcastic comment here..
oh, I think I just failed.

ps. FanartCentral is FANTASTIC!
You do an extremely commendable service to all amature (and otherwise) artists. BRAVO!

Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fan on February 21, 2004, 4:36:08 PM

Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fan on (Chapter: 2)
Cloud_Strife_Biggest_FanYa I thought it couldnt get any better but it just did and in the words of the Teletubies AGAIN AGAIN!

Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fan on February 21, 2004, 4:34:21 PM

Cloud_Strife_Biggest_Fan on (Chapter: 1)
Cloud_Strife_Biggest_FanCheese Cheese Cheese Cheese Cheese Cheese My hand hurts.....What copy past? Now you tell me!

ShadyFazy on February 21, 2004, 2:06:54 PM

ShadyFazy on (Chapter: 1)
ShadyFazyWow....*sniffle sniffle* This is the most inspiring piece of work iv'e ever seen! *wipes tear from eye*

Tenchigirl15 on February 21, 2004, 10:47:12 AM

Tenchigirl15 on (Chapter: 1)
Tenchigirl15LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is the most FUNNIEST story on EARTH!!!!!!! LOL!!!! all it says is "test" thats it!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dies on the floor laughing*

CatWhoHas14Tails on February 19, 2004, 12:32:03 PM

CatWhoHas14Tails on (Chapter: 1)
CatWhoHas14TailsThat story was awsome!!! It touched me so many times!!! Like the time with the T and the E met the S and T's twin brother?! It was great!!! I almost cried!!! You know what?! This story gave me a WHOLE new outlook on life!!!

Collen on February 18, 2004, 1:03:13 PM

Collen on (Chapter: 2)
Collencrys with joy* thisis my faaaaaaaaaaaavvvvvvveeeee storry!! The best of the best!

WalMart_Manager on February 6, 2004, 11:09:10 AM

WalMart_Manager on (Chapter: 1)
WalMart_ManagerOMG Phunky Monkey, I did that to one of my friends, and she didn't know, so she said "T******E!" really loud and freaked! GO YOU!

Linkstarking on February 1, 2004, 5:20:57 AM

Linkstarking on (Chapter: 1)
LinkstarkingI hate the word test *runs screming*

zerofoxie on January 31, 2004, 5:37:14 PM

zerofoxie on (Chapter: 2)
zerofoxieman, that has to be the most GRIPPING climax I've ever read!! Sequel! Sequel!!!! FEED ME MORE!!! (lmfao)

Mondo on January 31, 2004, 5:06:36 PM

Mondo on (Chapter: 2)
MondoTHe best one

Mondo on January 31, 2004, 5:06:06 PM

Mondo on (Chapter: 1)
Mondonice story

takashi_maze on January 29, 2004, 1:53:29 AM

takashi_maze on (Chapter: 1)
takashi_mazeFloats like a butterfly and stings like when I pee

cheesey_squeezey on January 27, 2004, 10:11:22 AM

cheesey_squeezey on (Chapter: 1)
cheesey_squeezeyThat is like so scary. It just says test test test over and over. =O.O= It reminds me of school. And then it says "The end.....Or is it?". *gasps* How horrible. =O.O= *faints*

Collen on January 27, 2004, 9:13:44 AM

Collen on (Chapter: 2)
Collenchokes wile laughing* this is funny lol

Sk8erPunk on January 25, 2004, 11:05:12 AM

Sk8erPunk on (Chapter: 2)
Sk8erPunkOMG! That was like the best story I've ever read! You MUST write more. XD

cheesey_squeezey on January 18, 2004, 3:52:36 PM

cheesey_squeezey on (Chapter: 2)
cheesey_squeezeyOMG! I'm like your biggest fan! Like OMG! *faints* (lol :p) 3rd Chapter!!!!!! We need more!

Kaze on January 11, 2004, 3:15:10 AM

Kaze on (Chapter: 1)
Kaze*claps* that was the most touching story i ever read!, please say there will be a sequal!

HieisAngel on January 11, 2004, 1:57:21 AM

HieisAngel on (Chapter: 1)
HieisAngelFabelous story loved it soooooooooo sad and touching

Killua_Bakura on January 2, 2004, 4:15:28 AM

Killua_Bakura on (Chapter: 2)
Killua_BakuraThis is the best story I've eva read... *sniff* so heart-warming!

KeywielderofHollowBastion on December 25, 2003, 3:27:18 AM

KeywielderofHollowBastion on (Chapter: 2)
KeywielderofHollowBastion<enter sarcasm>you must write more! this is the best!<exit sarcasm>

CuteAngelChik on December 23, 2003, 2:32:46 AM

CuteAngelChik on (Chapter: 2)
CuteAngelChiklol xD

Topaz_TheDark on December 23, 2003, 12:35:13 AM

Topaz_TheDark on (Chapter: 1)
Topaz_TheDarkTesting :P

PhunkYMunkY on December 16, 2003, 12:55:14 AM

PhunkYMunkY on (Chapter: 1)
PhunkYMunkYMay I Ask... If Quizzes Are Quizzical, What Are Tests?!

CindyTheKingdomHeartsLuver0 on December 15, 2003, 5:56:23 PM

CindyTheKingdomHeartsLuver0 on (Chapter: 1)
CindyTheKingdomHeartsLuver0...Or is it what?

Jaduna on December 14, 2003, 4:14:36 AM

Jaduna on (Chapter: 2)
Jaduna*sniffle* oh denis that was beautiful!! *wipes tear* XD

KuroNeko on December 12, 2003, 12:14:58 AM

KuroNeko on (Chapter: 1)
KuroNekoWow, this has to be the best friggin' thing in the UNIVERSE! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! *AHEM* sorry.

SpireBlayder on December 11, 2003, 12:53:32 AM

SpireBlayder on (Chapter: 2)
SpireBlayderIs this a joke?

RoseDagger on December 9, 2003, 7:08:43 PM

RoseDagger on (Chapter: 2)
RoseDaggerYes a second chapter. Mabie u should get this published!

RoseDagger on December 9, 2003, 7:07:48 PM

RoseDagger on (Chapter: 1)
RoseDaggerwow i think you should write more! ^.^

cstdenis on December 3, 2003, 12:28:30 PM

cstdenis on (Chapter: 2)
cstdenisThis is not the place to report such things.

Fairygirly on December 1, 2003, 2:00:15 AM

Fairygirly on (Chapter: 2)
FairygirlyWow, Denis! You have such a way with words! =P

baby-kitty on November 29, 2003, 1:05:42 PM

baby-kitty on (Chapter: 1)
baby-kittythis is totally my favorite!!

Sheiksluvr on October 26, 2003, 9:51:14 PM

Sheiksluvr on (Chapter: 2)
SheiksluvrOMG!!! this is like, the BEST story i have ever read!! YOU'LL BE FAMOUS!!! OMFG!! you should seriously make a chpater three! i know i would read it! how about you guys?
crowd: *randem yesses, a few grumbles*
random person: whatever.
me: GAH! SAY YES OR ELSE!!
crowd: *monotone* yes.

there, see?!?! AWESOME STORY!!

Sheiksluvr on September 23, 2003, 2:45:22 AM

Sheiksluvr on (Chapter: 1)
Sheiksluvrwow denis...it has inspired me to make a sequal : QUIZ QUIZ QUIZ QUIZ lol. j/k.

Sheiksluvr on September 23, 2003, 2:45:21 AM

Sheiksluvr on (Chapter: 1)
Sheiksluvrwow denis...it has inspired me to make a sequal : QUIZ QUIZ QUIZ QUIZ lol. j/k.

darkcherry on September 13, 2003, 7:23:39 AM

darkcherry on (Chapter: 2)
darkcherrythis rivals the first chapter by far lol

NaokoMoon on July 3, 2003, 6:02:59 PM

NaokoMoon on (Chapter: 1)
NaokoMoonwow... denis that was deep...

Sorakoibito on June 25, 2003, 8:58:30 PM

Sorakoibito on (Chapter: 1)
SorakoibitoHihihi I can't wait 'till the next chapter...^_~ lol!!!!

ne1cab on June 18, 2003, 12:58:27 AM

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ne1cabI love it..best story yet to come....hahaha