Chapter 1 - Disaster strikes.
Submitted March 9, 2009 Updated March 12, 2009 Status Incomplete | this story is told from seven different point of views. they change every chaoter. here is who they are; leopardface, mousefoot, smokebird, ceadertail, littlepaw, gorsespring and tigerstreak.
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Chapter 1 - Disaster strikes.
Chapter 1 - Disaster strikes.
Leopardface stretched,enjoying the newleaf sunshine.the island seemed to be peaceful. Prey was running well, no sight of twolegs, and no sign of battle.
Mosspelt stretched out beside her. "Im going hunting."
Leopardface bounced to her paws." Im coming to." she declared.
Mosspelt flashed out a paw. A silver flash glinted in the sun. She killed the fish with a single swipe of the paw.
Now it was her turn. Leopardface catches her fish differently-but its effeective.she bent her head close to the water, careful not to let her shadow fall in.as soon as she saw a fish, she grabbed it with her teeth, killing it faster.
Leopardface met Mousefoot on the way home. then she stopped dead. the fish fell to her paws as she heard the screeching and yowling of battleing cats.
she burst into the clearing. Shadowclan!
Mosspelt stretched out beside her. "Im going hunting."
Leopardface bounced to her paws." Im coming to." she declared.
Mosspelt flashed out a paw. A silver flash glinted in the sun. She killed the fish with a single swipe of the paw.
Now it was her turn. Leopardface catches her fish differently-but its effeective.she bent her head close to the water, careful not to let her shadow fall in.as soon as she saw a fish, she grabbed it with her teeth, killing it faster.
Leopardface met Mousefoot on the way home. then she stopped dead. the fish fell to her paws as she heard the screeching and yowling of battleing cats.
she burst into the clearing. Shadowclan!
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daisythedog on March 10, 2009, 9:09:59 AM
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the action starts soon,huh?