Chapter 3 - Pain
Submitted March 9, 2009 Updated March 12, 2009 Status Incomplete | this story is told from seven different point of views. they change every chaoter. here is who they are; leopardface, mousefoot, smokebird, ceadertail, littlepaw, gorsespring and tigerstreak.
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Chapter 3 - Pain
Chapter 3 - Pain
Gorsespring yowled and thrashed.the feeling of blood seep through his fur made him cold. Ripping him to shreds, the shadowclan leader had him pinned.He struggled, but with each passing heartbeat the pain increased. Gorsespring felt blood spill out of the huge gashes on his side.Will this be the end of him... he began to pass out from the loss of blood. but suddenly the weight of the huge cat vanished. gorsespring managed to see who or what relieved his weight.Smokebird!
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daisythedog on March 10, 2009, 9:11:52 AM
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this one is kinda short...