Chapter 1 - poam/song riddle
Submitted January 17, 2006 Updated January 17, 2006 Status Incomplete | just a poam/song riddle.i'm going to make a story adicted(or something like that) to this poam/song riddle^^
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Chapter 1 - poam/song riddle
Chapter 1 - poam/song riddle
I try to hold back my tears,
Fight back against my greatest fears.
I try to be cold and dead,
But my emotions are a treath to that.
The pain inside is just to mutch to bare,
All i can do is just stand and stare.
At the reflection of my face,
And punch the that place,
Where my eyes would be,
But there is only cold i see.
In those deep blue pools,
When you look in them you loos all your cools,
Thanks to the eyes that kill,
If there is only 1 look on you to spill.
You'll be frozen in your place,
Stopt in the middle of your pace.
Seeing the hate and pain,
Feeling all your life being drane.
I dont know why,
I call a frustrated cry.
I just want to hold on so bad,
Dont wanna be sad nor mad.
I try to stand up again,
Hold up again,
And walk further again.
Not just giving up,
And not going to a suiside club.
Just have to do it on my own,
And make a heart of stone.
Now i cant be hurt no more,
And let myself become sore.
So now i am here all alone,
With my lttle heart of stone.
Wel people what do you think? I'm going to make a story wear this poam/song riddle belongs to bye^^.snif snif (i think the poam/song riddle is a little sad)
p.s:this is my 1e englisch poam/song riddle so dont be to harsch wil you *puppy eyes*
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Darksideofme on April 17, 2006, 4:42:53 AM
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o0oo0o0oooooo nice poeem!! ^___________^ ....can't believe i never noticed this b4 T_________T;;..*shifty eyez*anywayyyzzzz....can i make a picture with this...comment on me artist comment place k? if u don't want me too than thatz fine ^-^