Chapter 1 - demons torture
Submitted March 24, 2004 Updated August 7, 2004 Status Incomplete | It's true belive me if you wish.....but be warned. I'm only grade five, and they say I've got a writing level ubove average.
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Chapter 1 - demons torture
Chapter 1 - demons torture
I'm a demon they say.
Well I've got something to tell them......
I may be.I may not.
But I know a fire from hell burn's inside me.
It eats me alive from the inside out.
I scream in pain, but no one comes.
I plead to the heavens that someone comes to help.
But nothing happens and I remain in pain.
I feel like dying but I can't
I must not leave the ones who raised me.
I hope that someone will help,
But still no one comes.
I know now there might be a demon taking over me
I'm only young, but those demons dont care.
They will kill me...in time
So I wish to live to be a least 40.
Well I've got something to tell them......
I may be.I may not.
But I know a fire from hell burn's inside me.
It eats me alive from the inside out.
I scream in pain, but no one comes.
I plead to the heavens that someone comes to help.
But nothing happens and I remain in pain.
I feel like dying but I can't
I must not leave the ones who raised me.
I hope that someone will help,
But still no one comes.
I know now there might be a demon taking over me
I'm only young, but those demons dont care.
They will kill me...in time
So I wish to live to be a least 40.
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Marik_and_Bakura_lover on August 16, 2004, 1:05:33 PM
Hey youre kinda like me. Im in year 9 but my writing levels ecceed year 12 high acheivers. That is a very emotional piece and i can tell it comes from the heart. is this poem from your troubles at school? if so, i know exactly how you feel cuz i too have some troubles there too. If you need someoner to talk to, ill be here cuz i think i understand what your going through. just give us a buzz if you need sum1 to talk 2.Raven_Orton on May 19, 2004, 8:00:35 AM
Raven_Orton on
Poor soul.... :(Irshdragon on March 28, 2004, 3:55:02 AM
Irshdragon on
Thats pretty sad....