Chapter 2 - she'll be fine
Submitted January 29, 2006 Updated April 23, 2006 Status Incomplete | This is a love story! when Blitz Meets Haze! But the problem is Blitz is good and Haze is Bad. And Haze has a job to do.
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Chapter 2 - she'll be fine
Chapter 2 - she'll be fine
The Plan That Back Fired by Darkness42
She'll be ok
Blitz, Tye, And Shade are walking home.
Tye- it's a slow night.
Shade- they're probably planning something.
Blitz- you guys hear that?
Shade- Yeah, of course we did. (Sarcasm)
Tye- what does it sound like?
Blitz- like….someone screaming…
Tye- all right! Let's kick some tail!
Blitz- na, you guys go home. I got this one.
Sneaks inside the where house.
Haze- What are you going to do to me? (Frightened)
Gangster- don't worry we won't hurt you………………. That much. (Gang surrounds her)
Blitz- you won't be hurting anybody!
Sorry I don't know how to make big fight scene so you'll have to image so yourself
When fights over
Haze- (passed out on the ground)
Blitz- Better take you to the hospital……
Cell phone- Ring…..Ring……..
Blitz- Hello?
Shade- Blitz! We need your …………………… (dial tone)
Blitz- ……well…..er……..um……… she'll be fine. (then runs to help his friends)
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darkness42 on February 3, 2006, 8:01:33 PM
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ok i'll have to try..........it's hard............Link_the_hedgehog_magician on February 3, 2006, 1:49:57 PM
I am sorry I couldn't be read this sooner, but my cousin was hogging up the computer, Any way great story, hope to see more chapters.Ultimate_Lifeform on February 3, 2006, 11:02:17 AM
cool chapter! can't wait for more! and to write fight scenes just put likeBlitz:*jumps up, does a backflip, and kicks the gangster on the head*
Gangster:*fell to the ground but recovered and took out a knife*
Blitz:*tries to kick the gangster again but he slices her shoe*
something like that. just make up a cool tv show fight. sorry if this sounds disrespectful, your stories rock anyway!
darkness42 on February 3, 2006, 10:52:43 AM
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sorry if somethings are misspelled my spell checker's broke again.