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Final Distance Book 1: Revolution

Phantompaw longs to see the world outside ThunderClan's camp but at what cost?

Book 1: Revolution
Book 2: Dust to Dust
Book 3: Broken
Book 4: Break Out

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Mischief Managed
Submitted: May 4, 2008 • Updated: October 15, 2008
Word count: 598 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 402

Chapter 2 - Introduction to Blood
Submitted: May 5, 2008 • Updated: May 5, 2008
Word count: 601 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 595

Chapter 3 - Tainted Words
Submitted: July 1, 2008 • Updated: July 1, 2008
Word count: 423 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 353

Chapter 4 - Interior and Extertior Scars
Submitted: July 1, 2008 • Updated: July 1, 2008
Word count: 346 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 376

Chapter 5 - My name is Phantom
Submitted: July 2, 2008 • Updated: July 2, 2008
Word count: 336 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 358

Chapter 6 - Abandoning StarClan
Submitted: July 2, 2008 • Updated: July 2, 2008
Word count: 401 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 536

Chapter 7 - Another Casualty
Submitted: July 2, 2008 • Updated: July 2, 2008
Word count: 370 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 386

Chapter 8 - Blood Against Blood
Submitted: July 8, 2008 • Updated: July 8, 2008
Word count: 323 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 381

Chapter 9 - Rise Of A New Scourge
Submitted: July 8, 2008 • Updated: July 8, 2008
Word count: 368 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 353

Chapter 10 - Give Them Blood
Submitted: July 17, 2008 • Updated: July 17, 2008
Word count: 303 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 366

Chapter 11 - Our Rightful Place
Submitted: July 29, 2008 • Updated: July 29, 2008
Word count: 285 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 346

Chapter 12 - Ready For Anything
Submitted: July 29, 2008 • Updated: July 29, 2008
Word count: 251 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 361

Chapter 13 - Lights Out
Submitted: July 30, 2008 • Updated: July 30, 2008
Word count: 327 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 362

Chapter 14 - Destiny Calls
Submitted: July 30, 2008 • Updated: July 30, 2008
Word count: 341 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 383

Chapter 15 - Making The Ultimate Sacrifice
Submitted: July 31, 2008 • Updated: July 31, 2008
Word count: 551 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 354

Chapter 16 - Soundtrack
Submitted: August 3, 2008 • Updated: August 3, 2008
Word count: 91 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 337

Comments

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daisythedog on June 25, 2009, 10:08:42 AM

daisythedog on (Chapter: 1)
daisythedogcool

DancingWithFire on January 19, 2009, 2:08:34 AM

DancingWithFire on (Chapter: 1)
DancingWithFiregreat story

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 5:00:51 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 15)
ginathehedgehogSuch a sad ending but it was an amazing story!

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:57:52 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 14)
ginathehedgehogNo, he died! Poor Flare!

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:55:52 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 13)
ginathehedgehogOh noes! Don;t let Phantom die! T_T I kinda feel sorry for Cloudtail when Brightheart went to join Phantom

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:53:42 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 12)
ginathehedgehogCan;t wait for the battle!

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:51:59 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 11)
ginathehedgehogYay! They are so cute together!

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:50:07 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 10)
ginathehedgehogAmazing!

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:48:33 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 9)
ginathehedgehogOmg, intense! XD

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:46:17 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 8)
ginathehedgehogWoah, an intense fight should happen soon!

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:44:16 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 7)
ginathehedgehogWoah, Firestar is cruel in your story! XD

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:41:47 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 6)
ginathehedgehogPhantom's lost for words! XD

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:39:09 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 5)
ginathehedgehogCoolio!

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:37:13 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 4)
ginathehedgehogCool but that sounds more like Tigerstar, not Firestar XD Awesome chapter though! :D

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:34:52 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 3)
ginathehedgehogAwwww, so cute!

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:32:34 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 2)
ginathehedgehogAwesome!

ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2008, 4:29:27 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
ginathehedgehogAwesome start!

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 12:07:40 PM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 13)
darkyoshi555he...died? oh, poor guy! he went through so much suffering and he started turning evil, but i liked him!

desertbreeze on August 6, 2008, 5:23:57 AM

desertbreeze on (Chapter: 13)
desertbreezeI never much considered him evil LOL I just wanted to make FIrestar a bad guy cause I don't believe he is perfect

darkyoshi555 on August 7, 2008, 12:17:28 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: index)
darkyoshi555lol, yeah....

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 12:15:53 PM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 15)
darkyoshi555that...was...AWESOME!
omg i loved it sssoooooo much!
*faves* a bagillion timez!!!!!

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 12:11:17 PM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 14)
darkyoshi555oh no! he did die! thats so sad!

but this story is awesome!

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 12:03:16 PM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 12)
darkyoshi555oh, here comes a big battle...

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 12:00:07 PM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 11)
darkyoshi555aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww........^__^

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 11:57:23 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 10)
darkyoshi555wow...he really has become a BloodClan cat....

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 11:54:01 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 9)
darkyoshi555'-' .............he just killed his own father...........

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 11:49:56 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 8)
darkyoshi555oh no! he's going to fight his own father!

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 11:46:38 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 7)
darkyoshi555Firestar is so cruel!

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 11:42:03 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 6)
darkyoshi555oooohhhh ;D he loves her!

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 11:32:26 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 5)
darkyoshi555I wouldn't believe Firestar that the BloodClan cats did it!

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 11:16:19 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 4)
darkyoshi555i think Firestar overreacted...0__0

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 11:04:19 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 3)
darkyoshi555omg, cute/cool!
i will keep on reading!

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 10:50:38 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 2)
darkyoshi555oooo cool

kaitlin_mckitrick on August 4, 2008, 10:17:07 AM

kaitlin_mckitrick on (Chapter: 15)
kaitlin_mckitrickAwww... good story, but it's sad...

kaitlin_mckitrick on August 4, 2008, 10:14:45 AM

kaitlin_mckitrick on (Chapter: 14)
kaitlin_mckitrickOMG! He did die.... That's sad.

kaitlin_mckitrick on August 4, 2008, 10:12:57 AM

kaitlin_mckitrick on (Chapter: 13)
kaitlin_mckitrickWow! O_O Did he die? OH god! I like him... even if he was a little evil...

icestorm on July 31, 2008, 4:23:34 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 15)
icestormThe story was AWESOME!!!!

desertbreeze on July 31, 2008, 4:36:50 AM

desertbreeze on (Chapter: 15)
desertbreezeI'm so glad you liked it! I cried when I decided to kill Phantom T-T I'm gonna miss him

icestorm on July 31, 2008, 4:20:27 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 14)
icestormO_O He really did die!!

Wow! This is AWESOME!! ^^

icestorm on July 31, 2008, 4:18:10 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 13)
icestormooooooooo!!! he...he died....or did he? O_O

kaitlin_mckitrick on July 21, 2008, 1:00:45 PM

kaitlin_mckitrick on (Chapter: 4)
kaitlin_mckitrickIt's a good story, but I don't think Firestar is that cruel...

desertbreeze on July 28, 2008, 9:33:01 AM

desertbreeze on (Chapter: 4)
desertbreezesorry LOL sometimes I let my dark side get the best of me

kaitlin_mckitrick on August 4, 2008, 10:18:03 AM

kaitlin_mckitrick on (Chapter: index)
kaitlin_mckitrickHeheh! That's fine. This story has inspired me to write my own!

Warriorloverperson on July 22, 2008, 11:45:27 PM

Warriorloverperson on (Chapter: 10)
Warriorloverpersonwonderful...truley wonderful

kaitlin_mckitrick on July 21, 2008, 12:53:01 PM

kaitlin_mckitrick on (Chapter: index)
kaitlin_mckitrickCool story!

darkyoshi555 on July 16, 2008, 1:38:15 PM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 1)
darkyoshi555oo, cool story, i'll read more later

icestorm on July 7, 2008, 9:37:52 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormI LOVE the story! Keep up the good work!

JamietheGuardian on June 28, 2008, 5:07:41 AM

JamietheGuardian on (Chapter: index)
JamietheGuardianHow cool. You should read my Warrior story.