Chapter 1 - lyoko-introduction
Submitted August 26, 2006 Updated December 21, 2008 Status Incomplete | its my oc's journel the intro is very long Oo I WILL EVENTUALLY GET TO THIS BUT NOW THIS STORY IS NOT GONNA CONTINUE
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Chapter 1 - lyoko-introduction
Chapter 1 - lyoko-introduction
daddy..daddy! w-whare are you!*sob*I-i need you daddy! please!don't leave me!*sob* daddy...
12 years later
BAM!OW! said hyru as she took some damage. now whare is my sythe! ah there it is!*looks over the hill* hmmm... AILETA!
HEY!AILETA!said Hyru. but the loud blast muffeld her voice. hm..mph. said Aileta.darnet!the only way is to blow one of those hornets up.yeah!said hyru.
BANG! the gang looked over there sholders and saw Hyru. Hyru said: hi,SIS!
12 years later
BAM!OW! said hyru as she took some damage. now whare is my sythe! ah there it is!*looks over the hill* hmmm... AILETA!
HEY!AILETA!said Hyru. but the loud blast muffeld her voice. hm..mph. said Aileta.darnet!the only way is to blow one of those hornets up.yeah!said hyru.
BANG! the gang looked over there sholders and saw Hyru. Hyru said: hi,SIS!
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hakkohu on September 19, 2006, 8:36:37 AM
hakkohu on
Short but very nice.=Dtainted_truffle on August 27, 2006, 3:29:58 AM
? its so short?inuyasha_naruto_lover on August 26, 2006, 9:32:04 AM
coolPrite on August 26, 2006, 7:24:01 AM
Prite on
...As far as stories go, this one... isn't much of a story. One line does not a great tale make. ^_^()
I'd suggest actually making the chapters longer, or more journal-like if this is indeed your character's journal.
diva96 on August 26, 2006, 7:23:18 AM
diva96 on
sorry that was short.T-T