Chapter 1 - the death

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Foamyfan193:What about the story?
ANGLIZ308:i didn''t get your last line
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Foamyfan193:allen(erukas dad):WE HAVE TO FIGHT THAT THING?!
ANGLIZ308:yodime; with your life protect the village
Foamyfan193:allen:....i agree okay
ANGLIZ308:yodime; is everyone ready for battle........allen tell iruka to go home hes barely even genin right now
Foamyfan193:iruka: no I want my mommy and daddy they aren''t going without me!
ANGLIZ308:yodime; iruka its an order
Foamyfan193:iruka: noooooooo!yodime:take him home
ANGLIZ308:alysa; go home honey
Foamyfan193:yodime: ready?! Go!
ANGLIZ308:Allen; *jumped from tree to tree on to the fox''s head* I need back up!
Foamyfan193:*the fox jumped into the air and landed hared crushing everything under him! *
ANGLIZ308:Allen; *fell off the fox* ow!
Foamyfan193:alysa: allen! *throws sherican at fox''s eye*
ANGLIZ308:allen; *stands up* im ok
Foamyfan193:*fox gets pissed* fox:AHHHHHHH! *tries to step on aysa*
ANGLIZ308:allen; *pushes her outta the wy*
Foamyfan193:Alysa: ALLEN!!!!!!!
ANGLIZ308:allen; *
ANGLIZ308:gets stuck with a claw*
Foamyfan193:allen:ah...er... ya-ya DAMN FOX!*throws a bunch of sherikan at the 9 taoled fox
Foamyfan193:*
ANGLIZ308:yadomie; *sticks a giant kuni in the fox''s paw*
Foamyfan193:*fox jumps back screaming in pain!*
ANGLIZ308:yadomie; allen run!
Foamyfan193:*allen tries the chidory move* but the fox hit him befor he could finish
ANGLIZ308:yadomie; allysan get him away
Foamyfan193:*fox swung his arm as fst as possible and fill allen and allysan with no warning!*
ANGLIZ308:yadomie; allen! alysan!
Foamyfan193:minwhile: iruka left the house trying to fined his parents
ANGLIZ308:iruka; momma? papa? where are you?
Foamyfan193:out of the corner of iurka''s eye he saw two ppl laying on the ground in a pile of blood.......iruka:...m-m-mama..p-p-papa is..is that you.........?
ANGLIZ308:yodime; *walks up to him* iruka im sorry
Foamyfan193:iruka can brly hear him over the roring of the fox and irukas many tears....
ANGLIZ308:yodime; go home i have to kill the fox *summons the giant frog*
Foamyfan193:iruka:n-n-no!...im not losing you too!
ANGLIZ308:yodime; my job is to put my life on the line for my village i have to do this
Foamyfan193:*yodime and the frog jumped into the air and toward the frog as iruka just sat there looking at his parents cold...dead blodies
ANGLIZ308:kakashi; come on iruka lets go back
Foamyfan193:what about mom and dad?
ANGLIZ308:kakashi; you cant just sit and stare at them come on lets go
Foamyfan193:*randoly a guy comes shooting from nowhere covered on blood!* kakashi:whrere in the middle of a battle field so lets go
ANGLIZ308:iruka; *sniffs back some tears* o-o-ok
Foamyfan193:on they''re way back the see a huge explotion and the demond fall....the a scream everyone in the villige could here.......yodime''s scream...he died beating the fox
ANGLIZ308:Kakashi; lord hokage!
Foamyfan193:iruka: ...no...no i-i lost..........him too....
ANGLIZ308:kakashi; you still have me
Foamyfan193:Iruka....yes....
ANGLIZ308:kakashi; *puts a hand on his back* it''ll be ok
Foamyfan193:iruka became a great ninja and his parents went on the memorial rock
THE END [/b] hey lets continue

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