Naruto:Last Year of Middle School
Submitted November 18, 2007 Updated August 1, 2008 Status Incomplete | This is about the Naruto group going to Middle School they are in 8th grade so friends,school,drama,fun,and middle school romance.Comment please!
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 0 - Prologue
Submitted: November 19, 2007 • Updated: March 1, 2008
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Chapter 1 - Chaper 1
Submitted: December 11, 2007 • Updated: February 12, 2008
Word count: 551 • Size: 2k • Comments: 21 • views: 450
Chapter 2 - Chapter 2
Submitted: December 21, 2007 • Updated: February 12, 2008
Word count: 848 • Size: 4k • Comments: 20 • views: 429
Chapter 3 - Chapter 3
Submitted: December 23, 2007 • Updated: December 23, 2007
Word count: 1462 • Size: 7k • Comments: 14 • views: 473
Chapter 4 - Chapter 4
Submitted: January 12, 2008 • Updated: June 21, 2008
Word count: 1510 • Size: 7k • Comments: 18 • views: 435
Chapter 5 - Chapter 5
Submitted: February 3, 2008 • Updated: February 3, 2008
Word count: 1135 • Size: 6k • Comments: 12 • views: 436
Chapter 6 - Chapter 6
Submitted: February 10, 2008 • Updated: February 10, 2008
Word count: 1476 • Size: 7k • Comments: 8 • views: 513
Chapter 7 - Chapter 7
Submitted: February 17, 2008 • Updated: February 18, 2008
Word count: 971 • Size: 5k • Comments: 9 • views: 405
Chapter 8 - Chapter 8
Submitted: March 1, 2008 • Updated: March 2, 2008
Word count: 1403 • Size: 7k • Comments: 11 • views: 466
Chapter 9 - Chapter 9
Submitted: March 8, 2008 • Updated: March 8, 2008
Word count: 1066 • Size: 5k • Comments: 16 • views: 413
Chapter 10 - Chapter 10
Submitted: March 16, 2008 • Updated: March 22, 2008
Word count: 1974 • Size: 10k • Comments: 10 • views: 394
Chapter 11 - Chapter 11
Submitted: March 22, 2008 • Updated: March 28, 2008
Word count: 2897 • Size: 15k • Comments: 12 • views: 413
Chapter 12 - Chapter 12
Submitted: March 28, 2008 • Updated: March 31, 2008
Word count: 2227 • Size: 11k • Comments: 13 • views: 441
Chapter 13 - Chapter 13
Submitted: April 5, 2008 • Updated: April 6, 2008
Word count: 1552 • Size: 8k • Comments: 10 • views: 372
Chapter 14 - Chapter 14
Submitted: April 6, 2008 • Updated: April 11, 2008
Word count: 1708 • Size: 8k • Comments: 12 • views: 406
Chapter 15 - Chapter 15
Submitted: April 13, 2008 • Updated: April 14, 2008
Word count: 2344 • Size: 12k • Comments: 13 • views: 464
Chapter 16 - Chapter 16
Submitted: April 19, 2008 • Updated: April 19, 2008
Word count: 1709 • Size: 9k • Comments: 10 • views: 424
Chapter 17 - Chapter 17
Submitted: April 22, 2008 • Updated: April 22, 2008
Word count: 1296 • Size: 6k • Comments: 8 • views: 406
Chapter 18 - Chapter 18
Submitted: April 26, 2008 • Updated: April 26, 2008
Word count: 1533 • Size: 7k • Comments: 8 • views: 364
Chapter 19 - Chapter 19
Submitted: May 2, 2008 • Updated: May 2, 2008
Word count: 1422 • Size: 7k • Comments: 8 • views: 408
Chapter 20 - Chapter 20
Submitted: June 13, 2008 • Updated: June 21, 2008
Word count: 1741 • Size: 8k • Comments: 6 • views: 443
Chapter 21 - Chapter 21
Submitted: August 1, 2008 • Updated: August 1, 2008
Word count: 456 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 330
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erandor3 on December 5, 2008, 9:12:40 PM
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hey watsup just stoppin by to see if u might continue this since it says u might =Peelchic on December 7, 2008, 8:30:08 PM
eelchic on (Chapter: index)
yup i mite continue but im not sure i dont really have many ideas for this story but im back for gooderandor3 on July 9, 2009, 7:54:26 AM
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YAY!-glomps hug-:3kogalover2013 on August 17, 2008, 10:49:47 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 21)
loleelchic on August 18, 2008, 8:45:08 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 21)
yeah i got the idea from shes the manzerotimberwolf on August 1, 2008, 1:46:23 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 21)
Oh god that was priceless, I could imagine the guys screaming like little girls lmfao!eelchic on August 5, 2008, 11:29:08 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 21)
yeah it waz funny writting it 2 bad my bros arent scared of spiders lolz got the idea from Shes The Man,but ill be adding more latr just reading currently so i dnt have time 2 finish nowerandor3 on August 4, 2008, 12:12:38 AM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 21)
awwww that was mean but funny :P u should make it so erandor has a room next to them and comes over and says "Hey can you guys keep it down?I'm trying to sleep....wait Naruto,Sasuke,Neji,Shikamaru?"then make them have a happy reunion and all that stuff and make them introduce him to the girls and yada yadda yadda blah blah blaheelchic on August 4, 2008, 3:45:01 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 21)
well i already have plans 2 put him in ingeious i must say i came up with it in ride 4 the magnum XL 200 best ride ever...vaca was just wat i needed cuz i have a million ideas 4 this story lolzeelchic on August 4, 2008, 3:46:22 AM
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&&& im going 2 add more 2 that chapter we ended up leaving early 4 vaca friday so i couldnt finnish so ill prob finnish once i finnish reading breaking dawn lolzkogalover2013 on June 19, 2008, 5:49:29 PM
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love iteelchic on June 20, 2008, 9:27:58 AM
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Thanks!!^-^ missed u where have u been??lolzkogalover2013 on June 24, 2008, 12:49:11 PM
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idk i found this 1 site deveant art with bad stories u should chek it outeelchic on June 25, 2008, 1:45:39 PM
eelchic on (Chapter: index)
Oh actually I have an acount on their I read my cuz's art well more like comics but still...I only go their for the fan art lolzkogalover2013 on June 25, 2008, 4:12:16 PM
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me 2 my buds r herezerotimberwolf on June 13, 2008, 12:49:15 PM
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This is going to be SOOOOOOOOOO funny I can telleelchic on June 14, 2008, 2:04:07 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 20)
Yeah it is....the reaction will be priceless!erandor3 on June 13, 2008, 12:43:26 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 20)
OH NOES HTEY GONNA TORTURE THE BOYS!why is it most girls r so evil....not including u eelchic ^^; ur not evileelchic on June 14, 2008, 2:01:17 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 20)
aawww thanks =) but my brothers have a second opinion on that,lol! well most girls like to get back at guys 1 cuz they like em 2 cuz they started it 3 which is most popular cuz its fun lol,but the revenge wont be very drastic,just funny,and the guys will prob get the girls too! so it will be funny! again thanks ^-^ i dnt think im evil just 2 little nusinces think that...lolerandor3 on June 25, 2008, 1:42:42 AM
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lolz *hug*=3eelchic on June 25, 2008, 1:46:40 PM
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lol thanks *hugs back* ;)erandor3 on July 1, 2008, 4:17:54 AM
erandor3 on (Chapter: index)
so u have any idea when the next chapter might be up?eelchic on July 1, 2008, 5:05:47 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: index)
soon i hope my bros have been starting up alot of trouble so ive been busy wit babysitting,but im starting the next chapter 2dayerandor3 on July 6, 2008, 11:10:19 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: index)
kewl cant wait for it =3 oh and if u want u can put Erandor in your story all you have to do is ask =3eelchic on July 7, 2008, 6:33:11 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: index)
thanks! ill keep that in mind when i get writters block new characters always help,lolzerandor3 on July 16, 2008, 10:08:30 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: index)
Yeah you can put him as the boys friend from back where they moved from and he moved there to for his families butchery and that he could hang out with them from that point on =3erandor3 on July 16, 2008, 10:12:25 PM
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and he also works at the butchery since it runs in the family =3 lols im so smart oh oh oh i has an idea!you can make it so that a couple fo the boys and girls go to pick up some meat for their family and Erandor turns around and then then he gets glomped by naruto if u need a refrence pic of what he looks like just go to my favorites =P and yes you will have to keep his tail and dog ears those run in the family also =3 but idont care what you will make him wear as long as its cooleelchic on July 17, 2008, 4:32:09 AM
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um I'll try 2 write that into the next chapter but I'm trying 2 type and its not relly working out so well cuz it sort of hurts since I sort of broke my left ring finger but i'm gunna try this weekend. but ur idea is helpful it mite not come up next chapter but proboly the next cuz I've had some plot ideas.But thanks so very much for helping me out I really appreciate it.erandor3 on July 17, 2008, 10:02:36 PM
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no problem do i get a reward of some sort o.o?eelchic on July 19, 2008, 1:37:37 PM
eelchic on (Chapter: index)
how do u want rewarded?? a cookie maybe or watevererandor3 on July 22, 2008, 10:56:22 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: index)
idk u pick how ot reward me =3eelchic on July 23, 2008, 11:36:37 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: index)
no i dont know how so u can choose your own rewarderandor3 on July 27, 2008, 6:34:33 AM
erandor3 on (Chapter: index)
how bout a kiss? XD lol yeah right like that would happen =Peelchic on July 28, 2008, 12:00:10 PM
eelchic on (Chapter: index)
lol i wouldn't say never....;)darksasuke on May 10, 2008, 1:51:35 AM
darksasuke on (Chapter: 1)
love it!!! you should so keep writing. from one Naruto fan-another!!!eelchic on May 10, 2008, 2:04:39 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 1)
Thanks! I proboly will...kogalover2013 on May 4, 2008, 7:08:38 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 19)
awsome ur story not only rocks but is geting very intresting james and naruto cant wait loleelchic on May 4, 2008, 10:37:08 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 19)
thanks & thanks but not many people comment so I'm not sure if that many people like it.& it'll just keep getting more interesting with those 2!kogalover2013 on May 5, 2008, 2:11:56 PM
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yaykogalover2013 on May 4, 2008, 6:39:56 AM
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awsomeeelchic on May 4, 2008, 9:37:53 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 18)
thanks! =)erandor3 on May 3, 2008, 9:41:13 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 19)
XD "and no do not believe it."XDeelchic on May 4, 2008, 2:21:46 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 19)
^-^ Yeah maybe they should or maybe they shouldn't believe it lol! who knows?lolsailoraqua13 on May 4, 2008, 12:26:12 AM
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I likes it! ^^eelchic on May 4, 2008, 1:52:00 AM
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Thanks!^^zerotimberwolf on May 2, 2008, 1:58:15 PM
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Nice update looking forward to the nexteelchic on May 3, 2008, 1:04:01 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 19)
Thanks! hopefully it'll be up soon!sailoraqua13 on April 29, 2008, 8:59:53 AM
sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 18)
Hey, that little fact I told u about Reiko, I have a funny feeling your going to put something like that in your next chappie. R u?eelchic on April 29, 2008, 9:12:52 AM
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Thanks!! and Maybe... u'll just ahve to wait and see! but it mite or mite not be in the next chapter,idk,it depends on how everything goes.=)sailoraqua13 on April 29, 2008, 9:48:46 AM
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Coolness! ^^erandor3 on April 26, 2008, 9:12:08 PM
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WATER GUN WAR WOOHOO!*pulls out super soaker*YEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAAAAAW >:Deelchic on April 27, 2008, 2:52:07 AM
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lol my bros have a bunch of those and I have one,water gun wars are awsome exept when they teams up against me,lol,but its still fun cuz I get the hose!*squirts you with my supersoaker* HA!erandor3 on June 13, 2008, 12:44:17 PM
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NOES! AHHHHHHHHH NO FAIR!DX i wasnt ready :Peelchic on June 14, 2008, 12:11:10 PM
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thats what makes it fun!! ^^ ;p lolzzerotimberwolf on April 26, 2008, 11:21:35 AM
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Shikamaru was trying to play Mr.Smooth loleelchic on April 26, 2008, 11:23:52 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 18)
yeah he was!lolerandor3 on April 24, 2008, 7:43:49 PM
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*still spazing out on red bull*OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......................chicken wings....spicy flavored =Peelchic on April 24, 2008, 9:41:07 PM
eelchic on (Chapter: 17)
Omg those are the best kind!lol Wait for it wait for it......SKITTLES!!!!! lol
erandor3 on April 26, 2008, 9:05:35 PM
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I DRINK HOT SAUCE :D...no seriously i drink hot sauce sometimes XDeelchic on April 27, 2008, 2:58:04 AM
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Well Hot Sauce is tasty by its self! specially the Habinaro Tabasco Sauce,lol! but its even better on buffalo wings!^-^erandor3 on April 27, 2008, 8:00:02 PM
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YAY HOT SAUCE *drinks hot sauce*YAY!.....HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!*runs around*AHHHHHHHHHHHH!ok i feel better now X3eelchic on April 27, 2008, 9:23:25 PM
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lol! =)winxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 7:53:14 AM
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I'm kinda like Hinata with the athletics thing, lol. And I would've done the exact same thing with that guy! #1 rule, don't accept candy from strangers no matter how yummyful it looks. XD lol. haha. And your dress is Beautiful, dah-ling!
eelchic on April 24, 2008, 8:00:38 AM
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Yeah it will be funny I'm sorta going for a Bella moment,lol! Yea that is wat my mommy taught me never talk to strangers I just said no thanks and me & my friend ran into a store,my mommy is so proud,lol,although my friends keep making fun of us sayin u little girls want some candy,its funny,cuz we're like no fank you,but I know just run in a store otr scream pervert or help.
And thanks I relly love it I've already planned everything out exept who I'm going wit,lol!I'll have to work on that,lol!
winxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 11:12:59 PM
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lol, yay for Bella moments!ya, my 7th grade year, we had an actual class about that kinda stuff. true, it was like once a week, but they made us watch these videos made for 1st graders. we were just like, 'We've been told all this stuff sice we could talk.' XD
Hopefully it'll all get planned out soon. =D
eelchic on April 25, 2008, 5:41:14 AM
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Yeah was it D.A.R.E cuz we've been having that since like 4th grade its uper stupid! I do hope it gets figured out soon,but all the guys in my grade are either jerks or uber ugly!so maybe they're be a HOT tranfer student next year,lol,I can only hope!
winxgirl21 on April 25, 2008, 6:54:34 AM
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we had D.A.R.E. in 5th grade. It was something different in 7th. Just the teachers freaking out for some reason...lol.haha, pretty much somes up the guys I know, too.
winxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 7:45:33 AM
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omg! I totes act like that when i'm hyper! And i laugh so hard for like 15 minutes traight, and then my friends will be like, 'Thank God!' and then I'll start laughin again! XD haha, yay for an awesome chapter!eelchic on April 24, 2008, 7:51:49 AM
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I know I was like that in Social Studies this morining I was like wait for it wait for it then SYRUP! Thanks so much!!=)winxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 8:00:23 AM
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haha, yay for being hyper! XD and especially during class!eelchic on April 24, 2008, 8:55:40 AM
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Go Hyperness!lolwinxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 7:38:45 AM
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haha, this party is gonna be great! =Dwinxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 7:40:24 AM
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and I can't beleive some 10 year olds hit on you! I just would've been like, um, ya, no.eelchic on April 24, 2008, 7:50:28 AM
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I know we were like um yah ok no thanks bi! then we walked away and started laughing our heads off!it was cute that they tried but I have a brother that age just thinking about makes me sick,lol,10 year olds r immiture 2!!lolwinxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 7:57:26 AM
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haha, i know. My friend's bro is 10, and that would be sickening. XDeelchic on April 24, 2008, 7:48:41 AM
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yeah it is!!!winxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 7:33:48 AM
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Sasuke is really over protective. just cuz one guy is like that doesn't mean every other guy on the planet is. *shakes finger at Sasuke*eelchic on April 24, 2008, 7:47:14 AM
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Yes yes Sasuke!lol most guys aren't jerks,lol!winxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 7:56:28 AM
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lol. =Dwinxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 7:25:07 AM
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yay for sleepovers!! =D lol.eelchic on April 24, 2008, 7:46:23 AM
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Slumber Parties are da Bestest!!!lolkogalover2013 on April 23, 2008, 11:03:44 AM
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omg so awsome and i <3 dats song there goese the songeelchic on April 23, 2008, 11:05:22 AM
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lol I know its so them! & i luv the song its so romantical!well in my opinion.thanks!kogalover2013 on April 23, 2008, 11:09:31 AM
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i bets its embarressing thought i whould kick dat guys @$$ myself lolzerotimberwolf on April 23, 2008, 8:24:31 AM
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I like this a loteelchic on April 23, 2008, 11:04:32 AM
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Thanks!=)sailoraqua13 on April 22, 2008, 11:22:59 AM
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I love it! ^^ And to tell u, if u ever wanna see somethin' funny, take Reiko to a beach where's there's really dark, spooky cavern she'll go all brave mode and wanna go in then as soon as somethin' spooky happens she gets really freaked! ^^eelchic on April 22, 2008, 12:15:33 PM
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Thanks!!^^ and that does sound funny!!=)erandor3 on April 22, 2008, 6:12:29 AM
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YAY I LOVE THE RANDOM GAME!POTATOES! *is spazzing out on red bull*eelchic on April 22, 2008, 9:03:05 AM
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OMG French Fries!!!lol omg I just had a Red Bull me & my friend went to see Prom Night its better to be hyper than scared but it didn't relly work,lol!Syrup*still hyped up on Red Bull and a giant triple choco chip cookie*lolerandor3 on April 24, 2008, 7:36:11 PM
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! EVIL MONKEY IN MY CLOSET!*shoulder cracks*OW dangit this stupid shoulder wont sto hurting T_Teelchic on April 25, 2008, 10:17:55 AM
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HEY HEY HEY!!! THAT SUX HOPE IT GETZ BETTER! ;)kogalover2013 on April 19, 2008, 2:57:27 PM
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omg omg omg omg awsome im lik really hyper lolololololololol my did my nails and im lik really hyper lolololololol i hart random bojangles or wat eve i love naruto im watchin it right now lololololololololo anyways byeeelchic on April 20, 2008, 12:20:01 AM
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OMG me to well when I wrote this atleast!OMG my aunt does nails 2 but she lives in Las vegas!I dont watch Naruto I read watch the japanesse then started the manga!lol bojangles r very funny but when im giggly my awsome cuz u turned me 2 Naruto says Banana and I crack up laughing.lol so thanks 4 commenting!^^kogalover2013 on April 21, 2008, 9:27:40 AM
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bananas lolololol i <3 chocleteelchic on April 21, 2008, 9:28:41 AM
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ME 2!!!lolzerotimberwolf on April 19, 2008, 12:52:37 PM
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The suger part was funny and Nruto costomising that surfboard was a good appologyeelchic on April 20, 2008, 12:12:45 AM
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Thanks I thought the sugar would be fun it was!Thanks yeah customizing is such a sweet thing to do!sailoraqua13 on April 19, 2008, 11:30:26 AM
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Yea! I love it! ^^Reiko: MORE RED BULL I LOVE RED BULL!!!!!!!!!!!
eelchic on April 19, 2008, 11:34:29 AM
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I no Red Bull ir like my whole thing on my myspace lol! its like in my pic and I put Red Bull 4 my name lol!erandor3 on April 16, 2008, 7:31:27 PM
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pretty good :Peelchic on April 17, 2008, 1:43:28 AM
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thanks!=)zerotimberwolf on April 14, 2008, 5:53:45 AM
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I cant wait for that party!eelchic on April 14, 2008, 6:09:36 AM
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yeah the beach party should be very interesting!nextguardian on April 13, 2008, 2:13:11 PM
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Great chapter. I can just imagine some poor fanboy drooling over this chapter, lol! And, SUUUURE, Hinata, you hate Naruto (rolls eyes).eelchic on April 13, 2008, 9:19:15 PM
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Thanks! and yeah sure she doesn't like him thats why she blushes when hes around!lol thanks again!^^kogalover2013 on April 13, 2008, 12:18:12 PM
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o iwant to see prom night 2 lol anyways awsome ficeelchic on April 13, 2008, 9:18:17 PM
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yeah me 2 sorta! thanks!sailoraqua13 on April 13, 2008, 11:07:07 AM
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Coolness! ^^eelchic on April 13, 2008, 11:30:04 AM
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Thanks!^-^ I thought it was good and it should i worked all day on it!lol =)sailoraqua13 on April 13, 2008, 4:56:28 AM
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PLEASE ADD A NEW CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!! TTTT____TTTTeelchic on April 13, 2008, 5:06:45 AM
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I am I am,I'm writting right now!sailoraqua13 on April 13, 2008, 5:07:23 AM
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Ok! ^^erandor3 on April 11, 2008, 9:24:57 PM
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nice chappie :Deelchic on April 12, 2008, 12:41:35 AM
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Thanks!^-^kogalover2013 on April 6, 2008, 11:06:37 AM
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omg i cant waitÂ
eelchic on April 6, 2008, 9:21:05 PM
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Thanks the outfits will be something! & the beach party will be AMAZING!lol ^-^kogalover2013 on April 6, 2008, 11:06:36 AM
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omg i cant waitÂ
eelchic on April 6, 2008, 9:19:57 PM
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thanks! thanks! =)kogalover2013 on April 6, 2008, 10:51:19 AM
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AWSOMEeelchic on April 6, 2008, 10:54:43 AM
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thanks!^^zerotimberwolf on April 6, 2008, 6:55:17 AM
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Too...confusing...head...hurts...eelchic on April 6, 2008, 7:13:33 AM
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whats so confusing? :(sailoraqua13 on April 6, 2008, 6:47:01 AM
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YEA!! I love it! Thanks for adding the next chapter! :3And because u did, I'll wait patiently for the next chappie! :3
eelchic on April 6, 2008, 7:13:12 AM
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ok thanks!lolsailoraqua13 on April 6, 2008, 7:40:08 AM
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Yous welcome! ^^erandor3 on April 6, 2008, 4:19:31 AM
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took pretty long for u to make this chappieeelchic on April 6, 2008, 4:22:11 AM
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geez it was one day late I had it up yesterday!,lol, the swings have a hold on me,lol, I was at the park all day!,lolsailoraqua13 on April 6, 2008, 2:56:53 AM
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Will u please add 1 more chappie 2day? Guess what? I'M STARTING A NARUTO FANFIC!!!! :3eelchic on April 6, 2008, 3:01:04 AM
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Kool I'll check out your fic and maybe another chapter after I get back from the park,I want to see the hot guys again lol,no I'm taking my little bro so i'll c if I can add another chapter,but I have been having a little bit of writters block so i dont know how good it will be!sailoraqua13 on April 6, 2008, 2:24:52 AM
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Coolness! Is Reiko going to b at this sleepover? Oh, and if she is, let's just say Deidara is always after Reiko because, well, in my story after Itachi killed the entire clan he took her to the Akatuski hideout as a captive and Deidara, did, some things to her (Sine this is a whole different concept of Naruto u can use this reason or another reason I don't mind! :3) and she's terrified of him. She would kill him if she didn't get scared every time he showed up. The only one's besides Itachi who know what he did to her are Sasuke, Hinata, and Naruto. So, PLEASE LET HER COME TO THE SLEEPOVER AND STICK THAT LITTLE FACT SOMEWHERE IN THE STORY!!!!!!! TTTT_TTTTeelchic on April 6, 2008, 2:59:09 AM
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ok ok ok I alread yhave her going there thats her escape from the drama!! u'll c & I'll make Dedra a creepy stalker thats why Sasuke is always so protective! I'll make it work!^^sailoraqua13 on April 6, 2008, 3:21:45 AM
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Yea! I love that! :3eelchic on April 6, 2008, 4:22:43 AM
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good I thought you might!:)sailoraqua13 on April 6, 2008, 4:46:14 AM
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^^zerotimberwolf on April 5, 2008, 11:41:44 PM
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haha I like scary movies because I love seeing peoples reactions during the scary parts loleelchic on April 5, 2008, 11:48:13 PM
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yeah not so much for me my friend likes to drag me to them our next scary movie is Prom Night,yeah I'll be one of those people screaming bloody murder and jumping in my seat,lol!pinkEnVxo on March 31, 2008, 7:04:58 AM
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so sweet amd check out my stories and poems 2!!!GreyPichu on March 29, 2008, 3:00:45 PM
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oh my gosh i really like this story! :]eelchic on March 29, 2008, 10:33:27 PM
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Thanks!!! =)kogalover2013 on March 29, 2008, 9:40:32 AM
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omg soooooooooooooooo awsomeeelchic on March 29, 2008, 9:47:50 AM
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Thanks!!^^kogalover2013 on March 29, 2008, 9:21:49 AM
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awsome dats while i take 4 evea 2 read mine to extend da sericeseÂ
eelchic on March 29, 2008, 9:26:01 AM
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I know but when I tried that the suspence killed me and i just had to read it!lol >.< =)zerotimberwolf on March 29, 2008, 6:28:51 AM
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dude that was freaking awesome how Naruto flattened that guy out! it gives me all kinds of great ideasKibas a dog man (yes the pun was intended lol) I wonder if hes gonna try to pull anything
eelchic on March 29, 2008, 6:39:46 AM
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I hope you don't get any ideas from the attacker dude... I hope the idea is to save a girl,its very heroic,girls love it!,lol! Oh Kiba might since ya know its Sasuke's younger sis I might have to put some drama in there!,lol!
zerotimberwolf on March 29, 2008, 4:50:48 PM
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oh dont worry i got the general idea and I cant wait for moreeelchic on March 29, 2008, 10:35:14 PM
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ok good and yes new chapter proboly Friday or saturday!sailoraqua13 on March 29, 2008, 4:39:05 AM
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Oh how cute! :3eelchic on March 29, 2008, 4:48:30 AM
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Oh yah Thanks!! ^^ ;)winxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 4:06:27 AM
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yay for Naruto saving Hinata, and yay for Neji and TenTen getting together! =) awesome chapter!eelchic on March 29, 2008, 4:11:50 AM
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Thankys!! =) and Yeahness for the new couple Nejten and the new forming couples and for the Naruto savy Hinata!!,lolwinxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 6:30:57 AM
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yay! NaruHina is awesome! =)eelchic on March 29, 2008, 8:02:16 AM
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yeah NaruHina & EdwardBella!! lol!! XD those my 2 fave couples well my top 2!!winxgirl21 on March 30, 2008, 8:38:16 AM
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lol, edward and bella forever! =Deelchic on March 30, 2008, 8:46:11 AM
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yeah yeah!! Bells and Ed!!lol they are 2 b wed,so awsome!! Alice is so going to go over board with the wedding like Bella's B-day!,lol I can't wait 4 Breaking Dawn its too long its 124days i don't think I can stand the wait!
winxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 3:59:25 AM
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haha, I loved the guys having to wear the ribbons! XD so funny.eelchic on March 29, 2008, 4:03:34 AM
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Thanks! I thought would be funny!winxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 6:13:13 AM
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it was. lol.eelchic on March 29, 2008, 6:15:36 AM
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thanks lol!erandor3 on March 28, 2008, 12:06:45 PM
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nice chapter! but i want to tell u something really cool.at school me and my friends who really like anime formed a group called the narutards(no offence intended to the show) any ways we all get nicknames of naruto characters we will probably cosplay at anime conventions,but in your story wen it said reiko's date was kiba made me blush a little because in the narutards i am known as kiba XD
eelchic on March 29, 2008, 12:33:10 AM
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Thanks!^-^ Wow thats so Awsome no people at my school like anime and stuff,and omg thats so cool that kiba was in here and ur sorta kiba! =) Kool club! Thanks for telling me!^^erandor3 on March 29, 2008, 12:51:41 AM
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no problem but i just wish u went to my school, indian creek junior high in the eighth grade XD then u could join the naruttards XDeelchic on March 29, 2008, 1:18:21 AM
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Yeah that would be kool! me too! I go to stupid Harrison! No fun there! lolerandor3 on March 29, 2008, 8:02:44 AM
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XD tell ur parents to let u go to indian creek!and if u do go to indaina creek look for a guy in the eight grade named tyler sheftick,or wen im in high school next year in the ninth grade XDeelchic on March 29, 2008, 8:13:07 AM
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Yeah I wish my parents would never let me well my mommy would shes just kool like that,lol,she would even let me be homeschooled or go to watever school I wanted but my dads just a pig headed jerk! he never lets me do anything,like I'm not allowed to date til I'm 30 psh like thats gunna happen!but my point is love too,but can't! i'll be there in Spirit though,lol! XDerandor3 on March 29, 2008, 8:18:25 AM
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TILL UR 30?now thats just wrong but oh well i hope u sort that out with ur parents and that u might just come to indian creek junior higheelchic on April 4, 2008, 9:09:26 AM
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Yeah it is relly outrageous! but thats just his opinion and my mom said I can date as long as I dont do anything,lol,yeah rite like I'm gunna do anything,I hope someday day I get to,maybe in high school! lets hope,lol! until then I'll be there in spirit,lol!erandor3 on April 5, 2008, 2:51:08 AM
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yea but still not the same XDeelchic on April 5, 2008, 3:20:39 AM
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yeah still not the same in being there!:(zerotimberwolf on March 23, 2008, 11:59:34 AM
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Shikamaru sounded like how I would react about the ribbons lol...and I wonder what James would contribute to the plot...eelchic on March 24, 2008, 5:48:02 AM
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Yeah most guys I know do the same!lol...oh maybe he might make a certain character jealous,hes not a main character just a little jealous tention!lolzerotimberwolf on March 25, 2008, 8:18:33 AM
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reeeeaaly...eelchic on March 25, 2008, 8:33:35 AM
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yes reeeeaaaly!,lol ^^erandor3 on March 23, 2008, 12:17:07 AM
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nice chapter^-^eelchic on March 23, 2008, 12:29:37 AM
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Thankums!!! =)nextguardian on March 22, 2008, 2:26:00 PM
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lol, I feel sorry for the guys, with ribbons in their hair and all. Shikamaru's reaction was perfect, lol!eelchic on March 22, 2008, 10:23:19 PM
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Yeah,that would be kind of embarassing,and ya it was he didnt relly have a choice so sarcasim was his only weapon!lolsailoraqua13 on March 22, 2008, 3:02:46 PM
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Nice! :3eelchic on March 22, 2008, 10:20:38 PM
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Thank you!!! =)sailoraqua13 on March 17, 2008, 2:13:36 PM
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Great chappie! :3eelchic on March 17, 2008, 9:15:26 PM
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Thanks! XDrlkitten on March 16, 2008, 4:07:52 PM
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I love Ino and Tenten's comments ^^eelchic on March 16, 2008, 9:31:36 PM
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Yah i thought those might be funny!!lol ^^ Thanksrlkitten on March 16, 2008, 3:51:34 PM
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Sweet ^^eelchic on March 16, 2008, 9:30:14 PM
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Thankys!! =)rlkitten on March 16, 2008, 3:49:24 PM
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lol, seems quite nice so far ^^ Almost sounds like my own mornings xDeelchic on March 16, 2008, 9:29:49 PM
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Thanks and lol!!!^^nextguardian on March 16, 2008, 1:22:12 PM
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Great chapter, the plot's really coming together! lol, good for Hinata, trying to make herself better!eelchic on March 16, 2008, 9:29:27 PM
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Thankums,ya I think it is,and yah she will be more outspoken when they are done with her,lol!!!zerotimberwolf on March 16, 2008, 5:33:00 AM
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Good chapter it was well worth the wait.eelchic on March 16, 2008, 5:35:56 AM
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Thank you and Thanks!!winxgirl21 on March 16, 2008, 5:10:34 AM
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Yes, Twilight is the best book ever!! =) =) lol.Awesome chapter! Haha, Hinata's gonna be shocked to find the outfit Sakrua shoved in the tote.
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Thank you!!! Oh yes she will!!! I hve twilight insperations for that one !!!lol >=)winxgirl21 on March 16, 2008, 9:35:46 AM
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haha, oh noes! Is Sakura going to pull an Alice?eelchic on March 17, 2008, 9:12:10 AM
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YaH she is!! lol,oh have you read Stephenie Myer's rough draft for the prom on her website it has more details on Roaslie and Alice getting Bella redy,fuuny and Edwards reactin! Oh and also on the Twilight part of the website of FAQ it has her and Alice's dress,so awsome!!!winxgirl21 on March 17, 2008, 9:43:23 AM
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really? I haven't been on lately, and i never did finish exploring it so...to the website! lol.kogalover2013 on March 16, 2008, 4:51:32 AM
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awsome dude i luv it good idea putting nejten first i cant wait 2 see whos nexteelchic on March 16, 2008, 4:58:23 AM
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thank you!! and yup i thought it would b easier to get another couple not sure which but another couple with this couple!!kogalover2013 on March 16, 2008, 5:04:35 AM
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i think naruhin buts dats my opinon i think its good to save sassuk 4 last loleelchic on March 16, 2008, 5:06:27 AM
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I don't know yet mayb,a couple will happen at the ballet or something like that!!! hhmmm?nextguardian on March 13, 2008, 2:39:41 PM
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Lol, THE sad eyes are the ultimate key to winning parents over, lol. Great chapter!eelchic on March 14, 2008, 12:44:17 AM
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Thanks!!Yeah they ecpecially when added with a depresed voice like 'oh i dont know what i want to do' thats works perfectly on my dad my moms imune she just likes my friends ,lolwinxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 7:59:16 AM
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great chapter! Can't wait to see how everything goes. =)eelchic on March 12, 2008, 8:11:45 AM
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thanks!!^^zerotimberwolf on March 9, 2008, 1:50:18 AM
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oh man I hate it when people die I'm sorry :(eelchic on March 9, 2008, 3:02:11 AM
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Thanks it is really sadsailoraqua13 on March 9, 2008, 1:18:44 AM
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I like this chappie and I'm sorry for your loss...eelchic on March 9, 2008, 1:25:40 AM
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Thanx!!! and thank you very muchkogalover2013 on March 8, 2008, 1:21:39 PM
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i loved it how sad though mmppp is awsome lol so is naruto
eelchic on March 8, 2008, 11:03:43 PM
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Thankys!!:)GreyPichu on March 8, 2008, 10:13:28 PM
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good job on the chapter!eelchic on March 8, 2008, 11:02:43 PM
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Thank you very much!!! XDmusicismylife on March 8, 2008, 9:25:14 PM
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yay awesome work!eelchic on March 8, 2008, 11:02:17 PM
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Thankums! ^^musicismylife on March 8, 2008, 11:35:42 PM
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no preblemaserandor3 on March 8, 2008, 9:23:57 PM
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good chapter^^eelchic on March 8, 2008, 11:01:55 PM
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Thanks!!!^^zerotimberwolf on March 2, 2008, 9:27:06 AM
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awesome stuff neji actually sounds cool in this oneeelchic on March 2, 2008, 9:35:27 AM
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oh cool thsnks!!!XDwinxgirl21 on March 2, 2008, 8:12:28 AM
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awesome chapter! haha, i wonder what Neji is going to be doing with that slip of paper in his pocket?eelchic on March 2, 2008, 8:17:37 AM
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Thank you,and yes im not sure yet either!!!winxgirl21 on March 2, 2008, 8:21:59 AM
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lol, I guess we'll find out.eelchic on March 2, 2008, 8:31:33 AM
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lol,yup ya will!!!winxgirl21 on March 2, 2008, 8:53:26 AM
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=)sailoraqua13 on March 2, 2008, 3:45:22 AM
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Love it! Can't w8t for the next chappie! :3eelchic on March 2, 2008, 3:49:14 AM
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thanks!!!^^erandor3 on March 1, 2008, 9:08:31 PM
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u should continue this story i like it^^eelchic on March 1, 2008, 9:24:09 PM
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thank you!!!! I will ^^kogalover2013 on March 1, 2008, 1:42:27 PM
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i luv it but wat do lyl & lylg meaneelchic on March 1, 2008, 8:38:02 PM
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thanks and lyl means love ya lots & lylg means love ya lots girly or girlys if more than 1 person ^^kogalover2013 on March 2, 2008, 5:52:36 AM
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o thanxeelchic on March 2, 2008, 5:59:37 AM
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sure!!kogalover2013 on February 21, 2008, 6:27:08 AM
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great chappie happy bdayeelchic on February 21, 2008, 9:04:45 PM
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Thank you!!and Thanks alot!!^^winxgirl21 on February 18, 2008, 9:47:46 AM
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Great chapter. I'm sorry to hear that you missed your school dance. =)eelchic on February 18, 2008, 10:40:20 PM
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Thank you it sucks but i didnt want 2 get more sick or every1 else sick,thanks alot!!!^^winxgirl21 on February 20, 2008, 5:32:45 AM
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ya, that's true, that would be bad.winxgirl21 on February 18, 2008, 9:48:21 AM
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**=(BelleMorte8223 on February 18, 2008, 1:09:57 PM
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Wow, this is good. I think I'm going to actually read this one.eelchic on February 18, 2008, 10:38:27 PM
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Oh thank you very very much!!^^sailoraqua13 on February 18, 2008, 5:54:12 AM
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That's cool! :3 I love how they were all arguing over who payed! :3 and I'm srry your sick...eelchic on February 18, 2008, 6:09:35 AM
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Thank you very much and yah I thought it would be funny!!!^^zerotimberwolf on February 17, 2008, 12:56:28 PM
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happy birthday and great chaptereelchic on February 17, 2008, 9:51:11 PM
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Thank you and thanks!!!!^^kogalover2013 on February 10, 2008, 11:26:50 AM
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awsome and cute bakkines lol anyways happy early b-day loleelchic on February 10, 2008, 8:40:24 PM
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Thanks i thought they wre super cute!!!^^ and thank you very much!!!kogalover2013 on February 11, 2008, 6:18:33 AM
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yep zerotimberwolf on February 10, 2008, 8:40:22 AM
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That part when the guys saw Hinata in the swim suit was sooo funny I cant wait for the update for this story and naruto new year...FYI I got some updates for my stories too :Peelchic on February 10, 2008, 9:51:55 AM
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yeahness!!! ill check!!! and thanx i thought it would be funny and mayb Nej will have a talk to her at the Hyuga mantion!!!zerotimberwolf on February 10, 2008, 9:59:12 AM
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that would be an intresting discussioneelchic on February 10, 2008, 10:01:26 AM
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yes yes it will!! >=)sailoraqua13 on February 10, 2008, 8:19:38 AM
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How cool! And if u want to see wat Reiko would probably wear to the party look on my profile! :3eelchic on February 10, 2008, 8:24:21 AM
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KK thanx!!!sailoraqua13 on February 10, 2008, 8:31:31 AM
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Yous welcome! :3musicismylife on February 10, 2008, 8:07:47 AM
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nooooo ur a GIANTS FAN??????!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great chap anyway... still PATS FAN!!!!!!!!!!!eelchic on February 10, 2008, 8:17:28 AM
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no I just bet my Mom who would win the Super Bowl I wanted the steelers to go to the super bowl dey i a stiller fan!!! even tho the pats couches cheated just saying tho!!musicismylife on February 10, 2008, 11:01:44 AM
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rar but idk. I dont lyk going against the Patriots even if its true. but the Giants put on a good show i must admiteelchic on February 10, 2008, 8:42:09 PM
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yah they did,i thank the pats that they lost so i didnt hav to give my mommy my ipod and so that i could get the bathingsuit Hinata has!!! lolmusicismylife on February 11, 2008, 7:14:53 AM
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o well thats a really good deal then...me and my mom were at war that night. yelling and screaming and we were literally head to head. i guess you can say we have our different opinions in footballeelchic on February 11, 2008, 8:06:58 AM
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yah me & my dad argue about whos the best player and what play was bogus my mom & me have about the same tho lol she helps me win my arguments lol!!musicismylife on February 12, 2008, 6:38:36 AM
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lol funny. what ppl will do to prove they're right when it comes to football...eelchic on February 12, 2008, 7:08:46 AM
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i no!!! its very strange...musicismylife on February 12, 2008, 8:14:58 AM
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yeah. i love how ur story is going by the way!eelchic on February 13, 2008, 8:56:59 PM
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Oh thank you!!!^^musicismylife on February 14, 2008, 7:49:01 AM
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no prob!kogalover2013 on February 5, 2008, 10:47:42 AM
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great ur awsomeeelchic on February 5, 2008, 8:15:55 PM
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Oh thank you u r so kind!!!^^kogalover2013 on February 6, 2008, 12:41:45 PM
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no im a dog u just deserve it loleelchic on February 7, 2008, 4:32:38 AM
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Oh no i dont think so but thanks alot!!!^^alex772 on February 4, 2008, 8:07:34 AM
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yay so goodeelchic on February 4, 2008, 7:29:09 PM
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Thankums!!^^musicismylife on February 3, 2008, 1:17:28 PM
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nice pick. Wat the surprise!!!!!????? c'mon tell me!!!!!eelchic on February 3, 2008, 8:21:52 PM
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Thanks,and You'll have to wait and find outmusicismylife on February 4, 2008, 5:07:20 AM
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nooooo!!!!! *dies due to not knowing the surprise* X.Xeelchic on February 4, 2008, 7:30:16 PM
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Come Back to Life!!!!*Shakes you* The suprise will be here 2nite!!!musicismylife on February 4, 2008, 8:55:42 PM
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*jerks back to life* k! ^^winxgirl21 on February 3, 2008, 7:17:54 AM
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I love the nutcracker! that was a really good choice, and I'm glad that you chose something with sentimental value to you, too. ^-^ I can't wait until the next chapter, i wonder what the surprise will be?eelchic on February 3, 2008, 7:26:44 AM
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Yah i tote love it too!!Thanks I thought so too ^^ and thank you it does mean alot to me so I will tote make it awsome!! yah wonder what it will be,hmmm? you'll find out soon toowinxgirl21 on February 3, 2008, 7:30:58 AM
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I can't wait to find out! ^-^ lol. Glad it'll be soon.eelchic on February 3, 2008, 7:38:58 AM
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yuppers writting the next chappe as we speak! uh have any store ideas?I already have a few but not sure what stores bathing suits? if you can think of anywinxgirl21 on February 3, 2008, 7:41:24 AM
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American Eagle and Hollister? lol. that's all i've got, really. Abercrombie, too.eelchic on February 3, 2008, 7:42:33 AM
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Oh yah those will tote work thanks i saw a cute bs when I was there this weekend!!! Thankums!!^^winxgirl21 on February 3, 2008, 7:46:16 AM
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ya, they have some really cute ones. ^-^sailoraqua13 on February 3, 2008, 6:52:21 AM
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How cool! And I'm happy with any role that involves Snow! :3eelchic on February 3, 2008, 6:56:31 AM
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,Thank you!!!^^Lolz any role that involes snow funny!!!sailoraqua13 on February 3, 2008, 7:29:49 AM
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Your welcome! And snow is my fav element (If it even counts as one) so that's why I said that! :3eelchic on February 3, 2008, 7:40:53 AM
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I its part of water so yah I guess it is!zerotimberwolf on February 3, 2008, 6:12:12 AM
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I like surprises and I like the idea of doing the Nutcracker, I expected Naruto to jump at that part loleelchic on February 3, 2008, 6:17:09 AM
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Who doesn't like suprises unless its a bad suprise,hmmmmm? Yes yes him as the Nutcracker is all part of my plan!!!>.<
zerotimberwolf on February 3, 2008, 6:35:48 AM
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I'm likin the plan then XDeelchic on February 3, 2008, 6:37:22 AM
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Thankums lolsasukeXsakuraforever on February 3, 2008, 12:41:06 AM
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OMG very very good chapters!!I love them!
(sorry about the really long wait ~_~)
VERY, VERY GOOD JOB!
*gives you the Rock Lee thumbs up*^^
eelchic on February 3, 2008, 12:46:29 AM
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YAHNESS UR BACK!!!!!& Thankys very very much!!!^^nextguardian on January 16, 2008, 3:53:10 PM
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Great chapter!and I second zerotimberwolf's idea, it would fit perfectly.
eelchic on January 29, 2008, 3:26:21 AM
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Thanks!^^ it would!GreyPichu on January 18, 2008, 2:24:53 PM
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oh, cant wait for the update!^^eelchic on January 29, 2008, 3:25:50 AM
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Thank you!winxgirl21 on January 12, 2008, 10:58:11 PM
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Awesome! I wonder what play they'll end up doing? lol.eelchic on January 12, 2008, 11:15:26 PM
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Thak you very much^^!! yah im wondering that myself ^-^'winxgirl21 on January 12, 2008, 11:57:45 PM
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I've only ever performed in three plays, one of which was Aladin...that'a the only suggestion i have right now...^-^' lol.eelchic on January 13, 2008, 12:08:16 AM
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thanx everything helps!!! ^^winxgirl21 on January 13, 2008, 12:31:22 AM
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np. ^-^ hopefully you'll find a good one that'll work!eelchic on January 13, 2008, 12:39:28 AM
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yupkogalover2013 on January 12, 2008, 1:51:03 PM
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awsome chappieeelchic on January 12, 2008, 2:01:18 PM
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Domo or Thankums!!!^-^kogalover2013 on February 1, 2008, 1:42:05 PM
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kool write more plezeelchic on February 1, 2008, 10:33:06 PM
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i willzerotimberwolf on January 12, 2008, 7:28:36 AM
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AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! You stopped there?Well if it helps at all may I suggest the book Hinata knows so much about "Romeo and Juliet" *hint hint*
eelchic on January 12, 2008, 7:36:11 AM
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Well that is a thought her knowing about it mite help her get the role *hinthint* lolz i dont know yet ihave to considera ll my posibilitles but thank you very much!!! ^^zerotimberwolf on January 12, 2008, 10:22:13 PM
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that is much better then my ideaeelchic on January 12, 2008, 7:58:25 AM
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no your idea is awsome 2!!! I'll just need to look it up hehe *sweat drops* don't know that play but still good idea!!! thankumskogalover2013 on January 12, 2008, 1:52:16 PM
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great ideai say
sailoraqua13 on January 12, 2008, 1:03:50 PM
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Nice! U did Reiko perfectly! Thanks for putting her in! :3eelchic on January 12, 2008, 1:21:21 PM
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Oh thank you I hope I did her her justice and thanks for letting me use her it relly helped with intoducing certain characters *wink wink* if you want me to put anything else in about her just let me know!!!xD ^^sailoraqua13 on January 12, 2008, 1:39:48 PM
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Ok and your welcome! :3Blackwolfmoon on January 12, 2008, 12:49:18 PM
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nice ^^eelchic on January 12, 2008, 1:02:00 PM
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Domo!!!!!(thankums)musicismylife on January 12, 2008, 9:43:41 AM
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oo oo do sweeny tod!!!! srry just an idea im throwin. well great chapter!!!!!!eelchic on January 12, 2008, 9:54:04 AM
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All ideas are considered thankums very much!!!!!musicismylife on January 12, 2008, 10:18:33 AM
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ur welkyz!!!alex772 on January 12, 2008, 7:44:31 AM
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what ever this is great and how about bye-bye birdie it is a musical i hope you don't mindeelchic on January 12, 2008, 7:54:52 AM
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nonono i need plays muscal or not just plays and thank you very much!!zerotimberwolf on January 7, 2008, 6:45:20 AM
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Hey this is pretty good. Im glad alex772 told me about this, but... WHERES MY BUDDY NARUTO???eelchic on January 7, 2008, 7:13:16 AM
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Oh he'll be in very soon and Thankums!!! ^^zerotimberwolf on January 7, 2008, 7:15:32 AM
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awesomeeelchic on January 7, 2008, 8:25:37 AM
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if you have any suggestions or anything at all let me know your story is so awsome!!!zerotimberwolf on January 7, 2008, 9:07:27 AM
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Thanks a lot. I'll let you know if I come up with anything but your story is just fine.eelchic on January 7, 2008, 11:05:06 AM
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Thanks I appreciate it!!! ^^musicismylife on December 30, 2007, 6:21:00 AM
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plz keep goin wit both storiez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gr8 work so far!!!!eelchic on December 30, 2007, 6:30:18 AM
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Thankums Im tote going to I'll finnish Naruto:New Year by new Years day then Ill get started with Naruto:Last Year of Middle School so dont worry!!!kogalover2013 on December 25, 2007, 2:29:40 AM
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Thankums!!!!! ^-^kogalover2013 on December 25, 2007, 2:16:46 AM
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Thank you very much!!!sailoraqua13 on December 24, 2007, 6:36:30 AM
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Kasumi, you're good wit making ocs MAKE A MEAN GIRL OC FOR THE STORY! :3333alex772 on December 24, 2007, 10:02:53 AM
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i wont if she does not want me toeelchic on December 24, 2007, 10:13:14 AM
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Oh I want u to pleazzzzzzze!!!!!!!! if u dont mindsailoraqua13 on December 24, 2007, 11:42:21 AM
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See? Now PPPPLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!!!!!!!!!! :3eelchic on December 24, 2007, 12:03:09 PM
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lolz ur funny!!! and Thank you!!! ur oc will be in next chapp or chapp after that depends on how it goes!!!sailoraqua13 on December 24, 2007, 12:19:26 PM
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Thank u! And your welcome and YEAH! :3alex772 on December 24, 2007, 3:51:30 AM
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hey your getting goodeelchic on December 24, 2007, 5:59:58 AM
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Thank you! I hope I keep getting better! ^-^alex772 on December 24, 2007, 10:04:01 AM
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sry about my friend she gets crazyeelchic on December 24, 2007, 10:14:16 AM
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so k I need someone to make one pleazzzzze can u ? if its no troublealex772 on December 25, 2007, 3:15:04 AM
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ok well i'll think about it but is there a name you have in mind cuz i want some of it to be your idea toolet me know and happy christmas
winxgirl21 on December 24, 2007, 12:59:44 AM
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awesome! I loved the gym class. they are very youthful! XD lol.eelchic on December 24, 2007, 1:12:36 AM
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Yah I waz laughing the whole time I wrote that!!!Blackwolfmoon on December 24, 2007, 12:35:23 AM
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^^ just one word to say: AWESOME!eelchic on December 24, 2007, 12:44:04 AM
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Thank You very much!!!!nextguardian on December 23, 2007, 1:36:59 PM
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Nice job, again. Guy was hilarious!eelchic on December 23, 2007, 9:38:11 PM
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Thank you,and I waz Laughing the whole time I wrote it!! ^-^GreyPichu on December 22, 2007, 1:12:29 PM
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WHOA< THE ENTIRE SCHEDULE SO FAR IS THE SAME AS MINE!!! that's really weird, but cool chappie!eelchic on December 23, 2007, 10:39:25 AM
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Oh that is wierd! and Thank you!Konohasdarkshadow on December 22, 2007, 3:48:16 AM
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WOOH!!!!..this story is getting better and better! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAP!!^^eelchic on December 22, 2007, 11:49:05 AM
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thanks im so glad u think so the next chapp will b out soon promise!!!!sailoraqua13 on December 22, 2007, 3:08:23 AM
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Oh this is cool! Arigato to Kasumi for suggesting it to me. But I have a question: Would it b to much to ask if my Naruto oc could b in this? Nobody's ever used her and I want to see if any of the Naruto fans on here like her before I start my own story with her.eelchic on December 22, 2007, 11:48:25 AM
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Oh thank you and yah ill use ur oc just give me the info on my profile no prob! Oh and tell me like what role u want it to take like mean girl,smart girl ya know! ^-^ <3sailoraqua13 on December 22, 2007, 12:23:58 PM
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Ok, no problemo! :3alex772 on December 21, 2007, 11:53:07 PM
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yay this was a good chapter but why did you put what they did in class?oh yeah tests suck
eelchic on December 22, 2007, 12:23:08 AM
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Thank you!I put what they did in class because it will be impotant later in the chapter.
Yah tote hate tests too they suck big especially when they are all in 1 day lolz! Thanx 4 the comment!
alex772 on December 22, 2007, 2:08:28 AM
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i'm forcing my friend to read this loleelchic on December 22, 2007, 3:06:54 AM
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thx lolzwinxgirl21 on December 21, 2007, 10:32:21 PM
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Awesome chapter! keep it up. ^-^eelchic on December 21, 2007, 10:36:06 PM
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Thanks alot!! I will totally!!!! ^-^ <3nextguardian on December 21, 2007, 1:14:55 PM
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lol, at least Ino's honest!eelchic on December 21, 2007, 10:20:48 PM
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Yah lolz I guess she is very honest she says whats on her mind not much lolz jkBlackwolfmoon on December 21, 2007, 1:06:10 PM
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love it... keep writing my friend!eelchic on December 21, 2007, 10:18:33 PM
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Thank you my friend!I shall lolz! ^-^kogalover2013 on December 16, 2007, 4:43:38 AM
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thxkogalover2013 on December 16, 2007, 4:24:03 AM
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i luv this story plez write moreeelchic on December 16, 2007, 4:28:31 AM
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Thx of course I shall write more the next chappie will b up by Tuesday I hopeing!!!!winxgirl21 on December 12, 2007, 6:29:53 AM
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Awesome! i can't wait to see what's going to happen. Don't worry about updates, you have to take your time when you're writing, and you have to have a lot of time for schoolwork,too. It can be difficult. ^-^eelchic on December 13, 2007, 4:28:48 AM
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Thanx my new chap will b up by weekend i dont have any homework 2nite so it shall b up soon!!!!lolz Thanx i relly liked this chappe!!! ^-^ <3winxgirl21 on December 13, 2007, 4:32:22 AM
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np, can't wait til it's up! ^-^alex772 on December 13, 2007, 3:40:27 AM
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Hey your getting better i love the chapter i'll tell my friends if u would like =)eelchic on December 13, 2007, 4:26:56 AM
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Tank you I thought this chapter was good and I would love if u would tell friends if u dont mind, ill entrust u with that task lolz ,again if u dont mind!!!!! ^-^ <3alex772 on December 13, 2007, 3:43:00 AM
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don't worry about anything you'll get thru iteelchic on December 13, 2007, 4:24:05 AM
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ThanxKonohasdarkshadow on December 11, 2007, 11:45:28 AM
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I have advance math first class also...but my school doesnt teach you fast enough...i am probably going to know as much as a high schooler by the time i get a job at wendys (at age 59 when i finally get a diploma! XP)eelchic on December 11, 2007, 8:31:29 PM
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Lolz Omg my school is pretty fast i mite get put in advanced soon cuz my test scores so dat b 1 reason the second Hinata is super smart in the show 2 exept 4 when it comes 2 Naruto sry 4 long comment!!!! ^-^nextguardian on December 11, 2007, 11:42:45 AM
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Nice, great job!eelchic on December 11, 2007, 8:28:42 PM
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Thank you very much!!! ^-^Konohasdarkshadow on December 11, 2007, 11:41:00 AM
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NICE!!!!!!!!! THIS IS GONNA BE GREAT!!!!eelchic on December 11, 2007, 8:28:04 PM
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Thx i hope so! ^-^GreyPichu on December 11, 2007, 11:13:07 AM
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lol i have advanced math first class too!thats so cool.awesome job!^^eelchic on December 11, 2007, 8:27:39 PM
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Omg that is so kool! Thanx a million! ^-^rffraff05 on December 11, 2007, 9:28:51 AM
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YAY!!! principal tsunade, that's a classic!eelchic on December 11, 2007, 9:33:36 AM
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Of course I couldn't resist thx 4 reading and the comment!!! ^-^ <3Blackwolfmoon on December 11, 2007, 8:26:30 AM
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i luv it! keep writeing! :3eelchic on December 11, 2007, 8:31:51 AM
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thanx a million! Im writting better than i did b4 i think but ill keep workin on it when ever i get any free moment ^-^ <3alex772 on November 26, 2007, 9:23:04 AM
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cool story keep writing you'll get the feel for iteelchic on November 27, 2007, 5:01:40 AM
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aw thx im workin and i think im getting more ideassasukeXsakuraforever on November 25, 2007, 12:30:52 AM
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OMG Hinata sounds...GREAT! (if I said sexy, that would sound wrong! 0_o)Awesome first chappie, I love it.
I'm not used to reading about Hinata as the main charecter, so it's a great way to learn! :3
Love your story, thanx for telling me, and keep me posted, I want to know when the next chappie is out!^^
eelchic on November 25, 2007, 5:56:49 AM
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ill b sure 2 keep u posted thx 4 reading and shes my fav character so i just wanted to do something with her yah i waz gunna say in the chapp that she relly is hot but that would b so wrong>-< again thx ll def keep u posted workin on chap 1 now so out soon ^-^ <3rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 7:16:31 AM
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sweet ness! Fa... wait for it ...ves!eelchic on November 23, 2007, 7:40:07 AM
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Thx ness im workin on my first chapp rite now!!!!! so b prepared!!! lol ^-^ <3winxgirl21 on November 19, 2007, 5:14:20 AM
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I really like the story plot. the only thing i would like to suggest is maybe some more punctuation (commas maybe?) to break up the longer sentences so they don't run together as much. ^-^ It's very good so far, so keep it up!eelchic on November 19, 2007, 6:03:37 AM
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ok ill do that and thx 4 reading im workin on it when i get home 2marrow i get home early this week so prob a new chap every day this weekwinxgirl21 on November 19, 2007, 6:11:51 AM
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ok, thanks for letting me know! ^-^ i'll be sure to check for the next chapter.Blackwolfmoon on November 19, 2007, 4:58:57 AM
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it sounds like it will be interestingeelchic on November 19, 2007, 5:00:59 AM
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thx i hope so im workin on ideasnextguardian on November 18, 2007, 11:11:39 AM
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Sounds like this'll be good, I'll go ahead and fave it so I can find it againeelchic on November 19, 2007, 12:31:26 AM
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aw thxGreyPichu on November 18, 2007, 7:53:01 AM
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i can't wait for the chapters, it sounds really cool!eelchic on November 18, 2007, 8:15:17 AM
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Thx!!!! im worin on prologue now so if u hav any ideas...tell me <3 ^-^