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Chapter 1 - poems

ok, here are wsome poems i wrote.

Chapter 1 - poems

Chapter 1 - poems
FRIENDS

I don't know what's the truth
I can't tell what's a lie
You said you were my friend
Best friends for life

Then I did it
Hurt myself again
That's when you said
You were no longer my friend

You gave me the cold shoulder
You gave me an ice cold stair
I felt the chill
The chill in the air

I thought you were my friend
Best friends no matter what
I guess that doesn't
Include when I cut

So I guess this is goodbye
So long my dear friend
Maybe, just maybe
We can be friends again



A VOICE

A voice cries out amidst the darkness
A voice cries out in fear
A voice, much like yours or mine
A voice, that's all you hear

A boy stands in the city
A boy stands in the street
A boy stands waiting
A boy wanting to die in his sleep

A girl screams out of pain
A girl much like me
A girl screams as the baby is pulled
A girl finds joy in agony

A life is taken again
A life is taken from the world
A life, taken, out of despair
A life gone because of pills




I REMEMBER

I remember when the days were long
When the world was a playground
And my life a song
I fluttered through the years
With barley a care
Ignoring the future
And what would be there

School was intriuging
And filled with delights
I loved to laugh
With my friends all night
I learned to love
Everyone and everything
Waiting for the joy
Tommorow would bring

What wonderful days
Were my youth
But then I grew up
And realied the truth
Life is hard
But it goes on
My life is
No longer a song

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nothingempire on September 24, 2008, 2:32:47 PM

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nothingempireyour poems are so beautiful....really they are amazing
truely beautiful......

bookworm369 on November 4, 2007, 12:05:46 AM

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bookworm369wow these are so good!

DocOck on July 31, 2007, 6:29:04 AM

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DocOckall 3 poems are great and sad but they are very true. friends turn their backs on you. when you grow up life isnt as easy as you thought. and people die everyday.especially because of drugs and depression. faves

Blencem on July 31, 2007, 2:41:28 AM

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Blencemo.o me really likes the last one ^-^
They are all so emotional ^-^

luckylace222 on July 22, 2007, 10:04:21 AM

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luckylace222XD This is awesome!!!!!! VERY VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN!!!! JUST LIKE InuNaruFable2'S POEMS!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!! I WILL FAV THIS!!!!

*Favs* :3 My favorite is "A Voice."

InuNaruFable2 on July 21, 2007, 11:58:27 PM

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InuNaruFable2Very emotinal! I love them! Superb job! Keep up the great work! ~favs~

Alice9912 on July 21, 2007, 10:17:26 PM

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Alice9912they are very good ^^

taurus92 on July 21, 2007, 3:38:48 PM

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taurus92wow, those are really good ^^
full of emotion
and a good rhyming scheme =]

super_sonic2000 on July 21, 2007, 12:56:31 PM

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super_sonic2000wow. i write poems but nothing like these. you are truly gifted!

eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:58:10 PM

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eriepilot44thankies!!!!!!

Ulrich101692 on July 21, 2007, 12:49:33 PM

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eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:54:23 PM

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eriepilot44thank you very much.

SharinganKakashi on July 21, 2007, 12:51:06 PM

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SharinganKakashithats amazing and 2 tell the truth im not a poem kinda guy awesome *favs*

eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:54:11 PM

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eriepilot44YAY YOU LIKE EM!!!!!!!!!

neodusk on July 21, 2007, 12:46:54 PM

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neoduskTHESE POEMS ARE FILLED WITH SO MUCH EMOTION!!!

...AND IT ALL RHYMES!!! HOW THE HELL DO YOU DO THAT!?!?

Awesome writing! :P

SnowKitty on July 21, 2007, 12:36:31 PM

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SnowKittyThese poems are so sad, but they really are great! I can't help but think that these poems apply to your life. . . . . . . . Hm, oh well. It's probably not that big a deal. Once again, great poems!

eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:37:15 PM

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eriepilot44the poems do apply to my life, kik, you got it head on!!!

FFXgirl on July 21, 2007, 12:27:33 PM

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FFXgirlWOW, they are wonderful!!! Sad but wonderful! My real life frined InuNaruFable2 writes great poems. Can you please check them out for her, she won't make more ir people don't read them. She also says they need critging(SP?)Anyways, I love them all! My fav is friends.

eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:28:59 PM

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eriepilot44tahnk you so much!