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Chapter 1 - Time goes on....

its a poem that i wrote and i wou ld really like to hear from you. Please comment thank you ^_^

Chapter 1 - Time goes on....

Chapter 1 - Time goes on....
Time goes on and I'm still here.
Days go by and its stuck inside my fear.
Make it go away and never come back.
Why won't it leave me is it something that i lack?
I have tried so hard but its always there.
I don't know what to do i just feel like i wanna dissapear.
Save me cause i can't save myself.
Its like cancer but its not hurting my health.
Its eating away at my soul.
I try to stare it down but it won't go.
I feel my soul screaming for it fears the worst.
I try to tell myself to hold on but i fear i am cursed.
Am i doomed to live like this forever more?
My spirit is cut it wasn't my skin it tore.
I look in the mirror and what do i see?
I see my own self staring back at me.
I am the one who is causing all the pain.
It only serves me right cause i am the one to blame.
Save me someone before I'm locked away.
Without a helping hand my heart will have to pay.
I sit in a corner waiting for tommarow to find me.
Who will be the one to save the day and set me free?

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goth_revolution on August 27, 2004, 9:36:13 AM

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goth_revolutionexcellent job, looking forward to more from you

Shaman_Dancer_Luvs_Yoh on April 28, 2004, 11:13:18 PM

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Shaman_Dancer_Luvs_Yoh*sniff* that's really good!

Faia_Ookami22 on April 7, 2004, 8:15:12 AM

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Faia_Ookami22Awwww......me like me like, like always...

evenar_light_angel on April 7, 2004, 7:23:20 AM

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evenar_light_angeltakes the kurama plushie and giggles madly: ooo kurama!! mine!! runs around happy: thank you i happy now!!

Abunai_Himitsu on April 7, 2004, 7:21:22 AM

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Abunai_HimitsuOoo...very nice...thoughtful...o.o;; -pats evenar- Meheh....-gives her a kurama plushie- Meheh! Better than the one I made you irl, ne?