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Chapter 1 - The Darkness

this is a poem i did for the pic of when Takesi turns to the darkside!! Hope u like it!! pleazz comment!

Chapter 1 - The Darkness

Chapter 1 - The Darkness
Takeshi Asakura

The awakening darkness takes over,
The once pure heart,
Turns black,
With hate.

His soul gives in willingly,
Because it is what his head asked,
Then evil consumes him,
And an evil smile covers his face.

His friends tears they might have shed,
Of his evil fate,
Turn black,
Into tears of hate.

His angelic side,
Tries to hold back,
But the darkness seeps through,
And takes over.

He thinks his anger makes him stronger,
And makes him focus,
But it doesn’t,
It makes him blind to the truth.

No-one can reach him,
Because he is only inches from hell,
They to may be pulled in,
And then all hope is lost of saving him.


By feathered angel


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ghost_guy on June 9, 2005, 5:12:44 AM

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ghost_guySugoi! Your talented in poetry too!!!!!!!

ren_fan on June 4, 2005, 11:51:17 AM

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ren_fanYou did a poem for him?? O.o cool!!

TakeshiAsakura on June 2, 2005, 12:26:04 AM

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TakeshiAsakurawow thats really kool!! ^____^ *faves*